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2006-2010年四级英语作文范文汇编
2006年1月英语四级作文及范文
1．名校校园正成为旅游新热点
2．校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同
3．我认为……
Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?
One can always find visitors taking pictures and enjoying the scenery in university campus. During the May Day Holiday, National Day Holiday, summer and winter vacations, many University campuses become popular tourist sites. In my opinion, university campus should be open to tourists.
In fact, there are many royal gardens and parks, all of them obviously better than the scenery in the Universities. Why do you think people prefer visiting here with their children? That is because it is a dream goal for many Chinese parents and young ambitious students. Besides this, as more tourists come to visit universities, these universities can widen their influence as well and they can also make some profit from the tourism.
In a word, I think the university campus should be open to the tourists.
2006年6月英语四级作文及范文
On Students Selecting Their Lecturers
An increasing number of universities are undertaking some changes by giving their students freedom to choose their own lecturers for some courses. This practice, ever since it comes out, has been very popular with students.
There are several factors influencing students’ choice of the lecturers. Firstly, an ideal lecturer should have an interesting and humorous teaching style, so that students can learn their subjects in a relaxed and pleasant atmosphere. Secondly, a diverse academic background is also preferred since a knowledgeable teacher can greatly enlarge students’ scope of knowledge. Last but not least, a teacher with an agreeable personality is also desirable to students.
This practice undoubtedly has lots of positive effects on the present college education, as it can encourage students to take an active part in study and urges teachers to improve their teaching quality. However, it can inevitably bring some negative effects. For instance, some teachers may try to cater to the students’ interest to increase the popularity of their lessons, while ignoring the teaching plan, which may lead to the opposite direction of high education quality.
范文点评
对题材的成功挖掘是写出好文章的前提。文章第二段具体选择了三种比较全面并具有代表性的原因。这样一来，段落层次分明又符合逻辑，是很成功的构思。文章最后一段正反两方面的论述也颇有深度。语言表述简练，没有语言错误。形容词、动词的选择多样化，富有变化。
【生动的用词】undertake实行;ideal理想的;diverse多样的;prefer喜欢;agreeable平易近人的;desirable渴望得到的;undoubtedly毫无疑问;inevitably毋庸置疑
【丰富的短语】cater to满足;lead to导致;be popular with受欢迎;have effects on对……有影响
【多变的句式】
本文行文过程中尝试着变换不同的句式，让文章读起来不那么枯燥。多种时态交叉使用，使作者思想清晰明了。如：“Firstly, an ideal lecturer should have an interesting and humorous teaching style, so that students can learn their subjects in a relaxed and pleasant atmosphere. Secondly, a diverse academic background is also preferred since a knowledgeable teacher can greatly enlarge students’ scope of knowledge.”逻辑性强，语言功底深，为文章增添了亮点。
借助逻辑关联词，如since，as，however等，以及顺序关联词，如firstly，secondly，last but not least等，可使论述连贯，思路清晰易懂。文中最后一句是非限定性定语从句 “which may lead to the opposite direction of high education quality”，它的使用突出了作者鲜明的态度，且言简意赅，紧扣提纲。
2006年12月英语新四级真题试卷-写作
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic of students selecting their lectures. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:
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