考生们要在新托福写作中取得好成绩,作文中写出病句的情况是绝对不能出现的。下面有50个病句是考生们在完成新托福作文时经常出现的,我们一起来看看如何修改,争取避免犯同样的错误。 26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing. 改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. 27. Smoking can help you relax your mind. 改进: Cigarettes can help you relax. 28. What's about nonsmokers? 改进: What about nonsmokers? 29. Why not to be a non-smoker? 改进: Why not be a non-smoker? 30. Everyone will have many friends in his life. 改进: Everyone has friends in his life. 31. I am not good at maths, but English. 改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English. 32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time? 改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time? 33.It is children who clear about their interests. 改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests. 34. I agree the latter idea. 改进: I agree with the latter idea. 35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo. 改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo. 36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now. 改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe. 37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. 改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn. 38. No one knows all the things. 改进: No one knows everything. 39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life. 改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life. 40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages. 改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages. 41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. 改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply. 42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. 改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor. 43. They will learn the bad habits. 改进: They will develop bad habits. 44. In this continued process, people make progress. 改进: In this cycle, people make progress. 45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary. 改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary. 46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency. 改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings. 47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. 改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result. 48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing. 改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream. 49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost. 改进: Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss. 50. I felt alone. 改进: I felt lonely. |
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