利用以下各招可给句子润色,让句子靓起来。1.使用强调句。用do,does,did强调一般时态的谓语动词;用itis..
.that...强调谓语之外的各种句子成分。Itwasnotuntilshetookoffherglasses
thatherfatherrecognizedher.直到她摘下眼镜她父亲才认出她。2.使用倒装句。Onlyi
nthiswaycanwelearnEnglishwell.只有用这种方法我们才可以学好英语。3.使用wit
h的复合结构。如：Withthenoisegoingon,Icouldn’tgoonstudying.由于那
噪音的持续,我无法继续学习。4.使用非谓语动词。Locatedatthesouthwestcornerofou
rschool,thebotanicalgardenhasanareaof1000squaremetres.
校园西南角/面积1000平方米。5.恰当使用被动句。Aboveall,somethingmustbedone
tostoppolluting.最重要的是,必须釆取某些措施来阻止污染。6.使用各类从句,如使用“介词+关系代词”引
导的定语从句。There’remanykindsofteainChina,ofwhichLongjingTe
aisfamousallovertheworld.中国的茶叶有很多种,其中龙井茶是世界著名的。7.“数词+名词
”改用“asmanyas+数词+名词”。Agreatnumberofbuildingsweredestroyed
,leavingasmanyas10,000,000peoplehomeless.请多房屋被摧毁,使多达千万
的人失去家园。8.使用what引导的主语从句。Whatsurprisedmegreatlywastofinds
hewassuchafineswimmer.使我大为吃惊的是,我发现她竟是一位优秀的游泳选手。9.适当使用插入语
。如Iguess,Ithink，Ibelieve,however,inmyopinion,inotherw
ords,thatistosay,generallyspeaking,believeitornot,tot
ellyouthetruth,tobehonest,asweknow,what’sworse等。即时练习
使用上述润色技巧,合并或改写下列句子。1.IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglishwhen
Ienteredseniorhighschool.(强调句)1.ItwaswhenIenteredseni
orhighschoolthatIrealizedtheimportanceofEnglish.2.We
canliveahappylifeonlybythismeans.(倒装)2.Onlybythismea
nscanweliveahappylife.3.Hefellasleep.Thelightswer
estillon.(with结构)3.Hefellasleepwiththelightson.4.W
henIheardthat,Iwasmuchmoved.(非谓语动词)4.Hearingthat,Iwas
muchmoved.5.Theycarriedoutasurveyamong260students.(被
动语态)5.Asurveywascarriedoutamong260students.6.Theywe
refacedwithmanyproblems.Theydidn’tloseheart.(非谓语动词)6.Fa
cedwithmanyproblems,theydidn’tloseheart．7.Itwasgettin
gdark.Anditbegantorain.(插入语)7.Itwasgettingdark.What
wasworse,itbegantorain.8.Heworkedveryhard.Hemadegre
atprogressinhisstudy.(改为复合句)8.Heworkedsohardthathemad
egreatprogressinhisstudy.9.Heofferedmeapieceofadvic
ethatIshouldcheerupandstartalloveragain.(what引导的主语从句)
9.WhatheofferedmewasapieceofadvicethatIshouldcheerupandstartalloveragain. |
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