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英语写作基础技能提升:15 句子润色 简单句合并成复合句
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有时为了使句子的连贯性更强,表达也更为贴切、自然,我们在两个或者多个简单句之间加上and,but,or(或者,否则)
,for(因为),while(而,却),when(就在这个时候),notonly...butalso等并列连词,
使其成为并列复合句。如:⑴Ouroutdooractivitywilllastthreehours.We’ll
bebackatabout11o’clock→Ouroutdooractivitywilllastthre
ehoursandwe’llbebackatabout11o’clock.⑵Youmusthurry.
You’llmisstheplane.→Youmusthurryoryou’llmissthep
lane.⑶Honeyissweet.Thebeestings.→Honeyissweet
butthebeestings.在两个或者多个简单句之间加上when,after,as,because,wher
e,which,who等从属连词,可以使简单句变成复合句。如:⑴Wewillorganizeallkindso
factivitiesinourEnglishclub.Wecannotonlypractisebutal
solearnmoreEnglishintheactivities.(改为含定语从句的复合句)→Wew
illorganizeallkindsofactivitiesinourEnglishclubinwhich
wecannotonlypractisebutalsolearnmoreEnglish.⑵Hemiss
edthefirstbus.Hecametoschoollate.(改为含状语从句的复合句)→Beca
usehemissedthefirstbus,hecametoschoollate.→Hemi
ssedthefirstbus,sohecametoschoollate.即时练习将下列各组句子合并成并列
复合句或主从复合句。1.Hewastired.Hewenttobed.1.Hewastired,so
hewenttobed.2.Ourteachermustbeathome.Thedoorisope
n.2.Ourteachermustbeathome,forthedoorisopen.3.⑴A
satelliteisanobject.⑵Asatellitetravelsinanorbitro
undanotherobjectinspace.⑶Asatelliteiseithernatural
orman-made.3.Asatelliteisanobject,eithernaturalorman
-made,whichtravelsinanorbitroundanotherobjectinspace.
4.⑴Wehighschoolstudentsdohavesomegrowingpains.⑵W
ecangetridofthemcorrectlyandwisely.4.Wehighschoolst
udentsdohavesomegrowingpains,butwecangetridofthemcor
rectlyandwisely.5.⑴Therewasonceafamousdetective.
⑵HewasnamedSherlockHolmes.⑶HelivedinLondon.⑷
Thetimewasattheendofthenineteenthcentury.5.Therewas
onceafamousdetectivenamedSherlockwholivedinLondonatth
eendofthenineteenthcentury.6.⑴TheotherdaywehadanEn
glishspeechcontest.⑵Iwonthefirstprizeinthecontest.
6.TheotherdaywehadanEnglishspeechcontestinwhichIwo
nthefirstprize.7.⑴79.3%ofthesurveyednetizenssaythat
theirmainmotivationistohelptheirparentstoliveabetter
life.⑵67.7%claimthattheyworkhardinordertochange
theirownfate.7.79.3%ofthesurveyednetizenssaythattheir
mainmotivationistohelptheirparentstoliveabetterlifew
hile67.7%claimthattheyworkhardinordertochangetheirownfate.8.Wemuststudyhard.Knowledgeispower.8.Wemuststudyhardbecauseknowledgeispower.
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