新闻稿新闻报道是典型的应用文体裁。掌握新闻的六要素,即:人物(who)/事件(what)/时间(when)/地点(whe re)/原因(why)/方式(how)。它的结构一般分为四个部分:标题、导语、主体、结语。标题是新闻的题目,是对最有新闻价值内容的 浓缩、概括、提炼和再创造。导语是消息开头的第一段或第一句话,它扼要地揭示出消息的核心内容。主体是消息的主要部分,它用充足的事实表现 主题。新闻报道的结语一般是最后一句话或者一段话,通常对全文内容作概括性的总结,或对新闻事件的发展趋势作出预测。有时,作者根据报道的 事实在结语中提出令人深思的问题。在写新闻报道时,首先注意新闻的标题要具有语言幽默风趣的特点,有较强的吸引力。同时,写作依据的 材料要充分,要用事实来说话,语言力求简洁。最后,报道中要有亮点,能引人深思或能让人产生强烈的兴趣。常用句式:Inthep astfewyears,therehasbeenaboom/sharpgrowth/declinein...在 过去的几年里,在……方面锐增/减。Nowadays,more/mostimportant/dangerousforour societyis...目前,我们社会更/最重要/危险的是……Nowthereisagrowingawarene ssthat...现在,人们日趋意识到……Itistimethatweexploredthetruthof ...到了我们该揭露……事实的时候了。Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproble m.只有用这样的方法我们才能解决问题。 (2009·浙江)5月1日,高二( 3)班的学生志愿者LiYue和ZhangHua去阳光敬老院(SunshineNursingHome)开展志愿者活动(送水果 、打扫、聊天等)。假如你是校英语报的记者,请按下列要点用英语写一则100~120个词的新闻报道。1.时间、地点、任务、活动; 2.老人们的反应;3.简短评论。参考词汇:志愿者活动voluntarywork注意:报道的标题和记者姓名已给出(不计 词数)。StudentVolunteersBroughtSunshinetotheElderly_________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ ____________________________ ByChenJie,SchoolNewspaper1.文体信息:①文体: 应用文;②语体:正式语体;③人称:第三人称;④中心大意:报道两位志愿者去阳光敬老院开展志愿者活动。2.主导时态:一般过去 时。3.内容要点:①简要陈述事情发生的时间、地点、任务和内容概要;②陈述老人们的反应;③对此次志愿者活动做出评价.4. 温馨提示:注意人称,除评论部分用第一人称外其他段落均应该用第三人称。新闻报道的必要要素不可缺少。StudentVolun teersBroughtSunshinetotheElderlyLiYueandZhangHua,c omingfromClassThree,GradeTwo,attendedavoluntaryactivity. OnMayDay,theywenttoTheSunshineNursingHomeandvisitedt heelderlywithsomeflowersandfruits.Theyhelpedtheelderly cleantheroomsandsweepthefloor.Afterthat,theyhadachat withtheelderly.Theelderlywarmedupattheviewofthesight. Theysaidtheirgratitudewasbeyondtheirpowerofexpression. Theywouldn’tforgetthisdayforever.Astheresultoftheeffor tsofthetwovolunteers,theelderlyfeltthewarmsunshiningo nthem.Atthesametime,LiYueandZhangHuagotakickoutof it.Theysaidtheywoulddoitlikethismoreinthenearfuture. Weshouldlearnfromthem.Ifso,ourworldwillbecomemorebe autiful. ByChenJie,SchoolNewspaper该文符合新闻写作格式,思路清晰,要点齐全。用 了大量的高级词汇和高级句式,如:warmup温暖起来;attheviewof一看到;beyondtheirpo werofexpression无法言表;astheresultof由于;getakickoutof获得乐趣 ;分词作定语(LiYueandZhangHua,comingfromClassThree,GradeTwo, attendedavoluntaryactivity.),省略句(Ifso,ourworldwillbecome morebeautiful.),状语从句等的运用,彰显了作者深厚的语言功底。如能把下列句子加以优化则文章能更上一个档次:1. OnMayDay,theywenttoTheSunshineNursingHomeandvisitedt heelderly...→改为ItwasonMayDaythattheywenttoTheSunshine NursingHomewithsomeflowersandfruitswheretheirvoluntaryw orkleftpeopleadeepimpression.2.Theyhelpedtheelderlycle antheroomsandsweepthefloor.→改为Themomenttheyarrived,th eymadeuseofeveryminutetodowhattheycan,suchascleaning theroomsandsweepingthefloor.StudentVolunteersBroughtS unshinetotheElderlyLiYueandZhangHuaarestudentvolun teerscomingfromClass3,Grade2attheseniormiddleschool.O neMayDay,theywenttoTheSunshineNursingHometoattendthe elderly.Theyboughtlotsoffruitsandbeautifulflowersfo rtheelderly.AssoonastheygottoTheSunshineNursingHome, theybegantocleanthefloorandtidytherooms.Atthesametim e,theyhadachatwiththeelderly,laughingfilledwiththeroo m.Theelderlyweresohappythattheirwordscouldn’tconveythe irgratitudetothem.Thankstothetwovolunteers,theycan’tfe ellonelyanylonger.Dearfriends,noonecankeepyoungfo rever,wewillgetoldoneday,solet’stakemoreattentiontotheelderly.Neverletthemfeellonelyandthenoursocietywillbefullofhappiness!ByChenJie,SchoolNewspaper |
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