英语作文高分技巧——运用高级词汇和高级结构

 

高考英语作文评分细则里明确指出：最高档次作文必须要运用高级词汇和高级结构。以下列出书面表达里常见的一般表达和高级表达的句子对照表，供即将参加高考的考生复习备考。

　　(1) He didn’t come to the meeting yesterday because he was ill．（一般）

　  　 His illness accounted for (解释原因）his absence from the meeting yesterday．(高级)

　　(2) When he was a child，he wanted to learn everything．（一般）

　　   When he was a child，he had a strong appetite（欲望）for knowledge．(高级)

　　(3) I’ll thank you if you think about my application．（一般）

　　   I’ll appreciate it if you can take my application into consideration．(高级)

　　(4) Many people are worried about the problem of air pollution．（一般）

　　   The problem of air pollution has caused wide public concern．(高级)

　　(5) We all think that air pollution is a very serious problem．（一般）

　　   There is no denying that air pollution is an extremely serious problem．(高级)

　　( 6) Many experts point out that physical exercise is good for people's   health．（一般）

　　   Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person’s physical fitness．(高级)

　　(7) We’ll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us．（一般）

　　   We’ll spare no efforts to promote the traditional friendship between us．（高级）

　　(8) More and more people have bought cars in recent years．（一般）

　　   The numbers of people，who have access to their own cars，have risen sharply in recent years．(高级)

　　(9) I think that the number of foreign tourists should be limited．（一般）

　   　I'm firmly convinced that the number of foreign tourists should be limited．（高级）

　　(10) The number of students in our school has become smaller．（一般）

The number of students in our school has been in decline．(高级)