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???1.?大学生读双学位

1.?现在大学生读双学位的现象很常见2.?我对这一现象的看法

Recentlyithasbecomeacommonphenomenonforcollegestudentstohavetwomajorsatthesametime.Inthisway,theycangetdoubleBAdegreeswhentheygraduatefromtheuniversityseveralyearslater.

?Althoughitmaybringunfavorableconsequences,wecanbesuretoconcludethatthispracticeisfavorableonthewhole.Tobeginwith,moststudentswillbecomemorehardworking???andefficientinordertofinishthelearningtaskssatisfactorily.Moreover,withtwodegreesathandaftergraduation,theywillstandabetterchanceinthejobmarketfulloffiercecompetition.Inthethirdplace,asfortoday''suniversitystudents,tuition??andfeesarebecomingmoreandmoreexpensive.Iftheycanmakeachievementsinstudyatschoolandfindasatisfactoryjobafterwards,itwillnotbeabigproblem.

?Weighingthepros??andconsofsuchanewtrend,wecannaturallyarriveattheconclusionthatitisbeneficialandrewarding.Thissystemnotonlycompelsstudentstoworkhard,butalsopreparesthemforthecomingcompetition.

?【点评】首段直接点题,说明现象;第二段分述三个优点,其中首句为让步状语从句,意思是“虽然可能带来负面的后果,但总体上是有益的”;第三段呼应第二段,得出结论。范文首段提出大学生读双学位这一普遍现象;第二段分三点进行论述,其中前两点是优点,即学生会更加勤奋,并且有利于他们在激烈的求职市场中找到工作,最后一点是解释可能带来的学费问题并不严重;第三段下结论,呼应第二段。第二段第三句中的standabetterchance(of)表示“大有希望”;第三段末句中的compelsb.todosth.表示“迫使某人做某事”。

?????????2.?环保

1.有人认为经济发展先于环境保护;2.有人环境保护先于经济发展;3.我的看法。

?[范文]Therearesomeindividualswhoarguethat,comparedtotheenvironmentprotection,thetoppriorityissupposedtogiventoeconomicdevelopment.Theydeemthatenvironmentalproblemsareinevitableandunavoidableintheprocessofeconomicdevelopment.Theyareonlythebyproductsofeconomicdevelopment,whichcanbehandledlaterwhenwehavethetimeandmoney.

?However,otherindividualsholddifferentopinionsthat(或者:otherholdersoftheoppositeopinionsarguethat)environmentprotectionshouldbeattachedmoreimportancethaneconomicdevelopmentinthatpresentseriousenvironmentalproblemswillthreatenthehealthoftheresidentsandhindertheadvanceoftheeconomy.

?AsfarasIamconcerned,environmentalprotectionandeconomicdevelopmentcancoexistinparallelandcanstayinharmony.Ourultimateaimineconomicdevelopmentistoprovideacomfortableandhappylifeforourpeople.Whatisthepointofeconomicdevelopmentifweachieveitatthecostofourenvironment?Therehasbeenmuchevidencetoprovethatabalancebetweenthetwohelpsmorerapidandcontinuousdevelopmentofthesociety.

????????????????????????3.?收入差距

1.?收入差距悬殊是当前社会的一种现象2.?人们对之褒贬不一3.?我的看法

?范文:Nowtheincomegapisgettingwiderandwider.Insomeprivatelyownedfirms,joint-ventures,orforeign-fundcompanies,anexecutive''syearlyincomeistentimesorevenahundredtimesasmuchasanordinaryworker''s.

?Facedwiththissituation,peoplewillundoubtedlyhavedifferentopinions.Somebelievethatitbenefitsthesocialandeconomicdevelopmentsincedrivingforceisoftenderivedfromthegap.Inotherwords,thegapinspirespeopleandgivesapushtoadvancement.Othersspeakofitssideeffect:incomegapisoftentherootofsocialunrestandalsocontrarytoourcountry''sprinciple.

?Frommypointofview,whileitistruethattheincomegapmaystimulatethesocialdevelopmenttosomeextent,itcausestroubleaswell.Anincomegapthatistoowideformostpeopletobearcanneithercontributetothestabilityofacountrynorpromoteitseconomicdevelopment.Therefore,whileweareadvocatingtherapiddevelopmentofourcountry,weshouldtoleratethenarrowincomegapbutnarrowthewideone.

????????????????4.?名牌大学降低标准

1)近年来很多名牌大学都会降低标准招收名人学生,一些人强烈反对这样做2)但也有不少人认为这很正常3)你对此的看法是……,为什么?

?【参考范文】ShouldUniversitieslowerAdmissionRequirementsforCelebrities?

?Inrecentyears,manyfamousuniversitiesloweradmissionrequirementsforcelebrities.Moreandmorecelebrities,especiallysportsstars,havebeenadmittedtofamousuniversitiesevenwithoutanentryexamination.Thisphenomenonhasbecomeasubjectofwidespreadcontroversy.

?Somepeopleobjectstronglythatuniversitiesloweradmissionrequirementsforcelebrities.Theyholdthatthisadmissionpatternwilldamagethebasicfairnessruleofeducation.Inaddition,theysaythatifapersonwhohasnotenoughacademicabilityisadmittedtotheuniversity,itwouldbeaninsultoncollegeeducation.However,stillotherpeoplethinkitacceptable.Theysaythatthesecelebritiesdeservethisprivilegebecausetheyhaveprovedtheirabilitiesintheirfield.Besides,intheiropinions,thesecelebritiestosomeextentsetagoodmodelforotheryoungpeople.

?Weighingthesetwoarguments,Ipreferthelatterone.Foronething,thesecelebritieshavesacrificedmuchlearningtimefortheirwork,sotheyshouldbeprovidedabetterchanceforlearning.Foranother,iftheyacceptadvancededucation,theycouldservethesocietybetter.Therefore,Isuggestthatpeopleshouldpaymoreattentiontothesecelebrities''effortsandcontributionsratherthanthespecialtreatmenttheyenjoy.

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【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一些人对于某种现象的看法,提纲第2点指出对该现象的另外一种看法,提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:描述近年来名牌大学降低标准招收名人学生这一现象;对比阐述关于该现象的两种不同的看法和各自的理由;表明“我”更倾向于哪种看法并说明理由。Daisy赞同让他们上大学。他们为国家做了贡献,应该让他们上大学帮助他们转业。像乒乓球运动员邓亚萍就是很好的例子。支持姚明上大学。

?????????????????????????5.?宿舍生活

1.?宿舍生活有时会出现不和谐的情况;2.?一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性;3.?如何创造和谐的宿舍生活。

?OnaHarmoniousDormitoryLife

?Dormitorylifeisanindispensablepartofcollegelife.Butsometimestheharmonyinthedormitorycanbedisturbedinonewayoranother.

?Asisknowntoall,aharmoniousdormitorylifeisimportanttocollegestudentsandbenefitsallthemembers.Ononehand,wecanhaveagoodrestandputourheartintostudy.Ontheotherhand,wewillhaveagoodmoodandenjoybeingtogether.

?Thereareseveralwaystocreateandmaintainaharmoniousdormitorylife.First,youhavetoevaluateyourlife-styleandtrytogetridofyourdirtyhabits,ifthereareany.Second,whenanannoyingsituationarises,you''lljusthavetolearntotolerateeachotherandco-exist.Third,you''llhavetosharewitheachotherandmakegoodfriends.

?Inconclusion,weshouldtryourbesttobuildaharmoniousdormitorylifeforthesakeofgoodstudyandgoodlife.

?点评:“和谐”成为我们当今社会词频概率最高用词,就社会而言,倡导建立和谐社会;就家庭而言,提倡建设和谐家庭;就校园来讲,则要建立和谐校园;和谐两字似乎无所不在,大学生宿舍生活同样需要和谐。本预测题与四级考试热点密切相关,又为典型的校园生活主题,所以这样的主题值得关注。

????????????????????????6.?就业

1.?很多的大学生毕业后留在大城市工作;2.?也有人选择到小城镇开始自己的职业生涯;3.?结合自己的实际情况谈谈自己的想法。

?Wanttobeasmallfishinabigpondortheotherwayround?Everygraduatefacesthisquestionwhenhestartshiscareer.Alargenumberofcollegegraduatesprefertostayinthebigcities.Tothem,bigcitiesmeanmoreexperiences,moreopportunitiestoseethebigworldandmorespaceforcareerdevelopment.Atthesametime,highersalaryisanothertemptation.

?Butsomeothergraduateswanttostayinsmalltowns.Eventhoughtheremaynotbemanybigcompanies,theycanhaveaquieterandlesscompetitivelife.Anotherreasonisthattheycanbeabigfishinasmallpond.Theycaneasilygetthemanagement''sattentionandmaywinpromotionearlier.

?AsfarasIamconcerned,IprefertostartinametropolislikeShanghai.Agoodbeginishalfthebattle,andinShanghaiIcanfindajobinabigcompanywhereIcanmeetpeoplefromdifferentplacesandcultures.IwilllearnfromthemwhatIcannotgetfromtextbooks.

?????????????????????7.?出国留学

1.?出国留学有很多好处2.?出国留学也会遇到很多难题3.?你的选择

?StudyingAbroad:HardshipsandRewards

?Thereisnodenyingthefactthatstudyingabroadisahotlydebatedtopictoday.Obviously,studyingabroadhasanumberofrewards/advantages.Inthefirstplace,astudentcanhaveaccesstoadvancedscienceandtechnologyaswellasdesirableworkingconditionswhichmightnotbeavailableathome.Inthesecondplace,hecanbeexposedtoentirelynewideasandtrends.Lastbutnotleast,bylivingandstudyinginaforeigncountry,onecanimprovehisforeignlanguagemuchfasterthanathome.

?Nevertheless,aseverycoinhastwosides,studyingabroadalsoconfrontsonewithaseriesofhardships.Foronething,learningaforeignlanguageisfarfromaneasythingatthebeginningformostpeople.Foranother,acompletelynewenvironmentwithdifferentcustomsandhabitsmayalsobeabarriertooverseasstudents,especiallytotheyoung.Anaddeddifficultylieswithfinance:itcancostalottostudyabroad.

?Frommypointofview,theadvantagesofstudyingabroadoutweighitsdisadvantages.Butitisabigdecisiontogoabroadtostudyandoneshouldtakeintoconsiderationhisfinancialconditionsandhisabilitytoadapttonewsurrounding.Personally,IchoosetogoabroadandstudyifIfinditnecessary.

?(Therefore,studyingabroadshouldbeviewedasatwo-edgedsword,whichpresentsuswithbothbenefitsandtroubles.Thebestpolicy,asIseeit,istotakeintoconsiderationhisfinancialconditionsandhisabilitytoadapttonewsurrounding.Personally,IchoosetogoabroadandstudyifIfinditnecessary.)

????????????????????????8.?大学校园学术诚信缺失

1.?当前,有很多学术抄袭现象2.?学术抄袭的危害3.?怎样杜绝学术抄袭

?AcademicDishonestyonCampus

?ItisshownintherecentsurveysthatmanycollegestudentscopypapersfromtheInternettosavethetroubleofdoingtheirhomework.Inmyopinion,thiskindofacademicdishonestyisveryharmfultothesestudents.

?First,copyingpapersfromtheInternetmakesstudentslazy.CopyingpapersfromtheInternetseemseasyandcansavesometimeandtrouble,therefore,studentswilldothismoreandmoreoftenandseldomworkhardtocompletetheirpapersontheirown.Inotherwords,studentswillbecomelazierandlazier.Second.studentscanlearnlittlefromcopyingothers''work.StudentscannotimprovetheirabilitiesjustbydownloadingpapersfromtheInternetwithouttheirownthinkingandworking.What''sworse,oncestudentsgetusedtoacademiccheating,theymayalsocheatinothercasesinthefuture,whichwillbeverydangerousforthem.

?Topreventacademicdishonestyoncampus,somepunishmentbytheschoolmaybenecessary.Butthemostimportantthingisthatteachersshouldtalktothosestudents,andmakethemawareofthefactthatcopyingothers''workcannotbringthemanyknowledgeandthatonlybyworkinghardcantheyimprovethemselves.

????????????????????????9.?感恩

OnCultivatingtheSenseofGratitude

?Oncollegecampusesacrossthenation,thereisanoticeablephenomenonthatwecannotaffordtoignore:fartoomanyyoungcollegestudentslackthesenseofgratitude,oneofthecountlesstraditionalvirtuesofthisancientlandwithasplendidcivilizationspanningover5,000years.Theseyoungadultswerenotandarenotawareofthehugeimportanceofexpressinggratitudetothosewhooncehelpedthem,fromteacherstoparentsandsoforth.

Personally,Ideemthattherootcauseofstudentswithoutagracefulheartisthattheyreceiveaneducationnotvaluingthemoralsphere.Istronglybelievethatjointeffortsfromfolksacrosssocietyarethefinalremedyforthissocialheadache.Asyounguniversitystudentsofthenewera,weshouldmakeourowncontributionstothiscause.Imagineaworldwithoutthesenseofgratitude.Thiskindofworldisdoomedtofailure.

Simplyput,weshouldjoinourhandstoheightenourawarenessoffosteringagracefulheart.Onlyinthiswaycanwebuildoursocietyintoaharmoniousone.Myfellowstudents,Ibegyoutoactfromnowon.

??????????????????????10.?关于选秀节目

Overthepastcoupleofyears,avarietyoftalentshowshaveemergedonTVchannelsacrossthenation,fromHappyBoystoHappyGirlsandsoforth.Thistypeofentertainmentprogramisintenselypopular,especiallyamongyoungadultsandhasproducedprofoundimpactsontheirstudiesandlife.Thereareacoupleofreasonsbehindthetide.

Tostartwith,youngfolksneedrolemodelstolearnfrom.Somanyofthemarecrazyforcontestantsparticipatingintheseprograms.ThisgivesrisetotheincreasingemergenceoftheseshowsbecauseTVnetworksnaturallyneedtocatertoyoungaudiences.Plus,thankstoeconomicandpoliticalreformscarriedoutbythegovernment,thiscropofyounggenerationhavemorefreedomanddesiretoexpressandshowcasethemselves.Therefore,agrowingnumberofyoungpeopledesiretogetinvolvedintheseshows.Thisisadivisivetopic.

Onmypersonallevel,thetalentshowisasuperbmeansofrelaxingandamusingandcanhugelyrelieveourstrains.Ascollegestudents,however,wecouldnotaffordtoindulgeinthemandshouldbeawareoftheutmostimportanceofstudies.

?????????????????????11.?教育国际化

教育走向国际化成为关注的热点,本话题为热议校园生活话题,与2004年旅游景点介绍2006年考查的名校校园开放有一致性。

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteABriefIntroductiontotheUniversity.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtothefollowingguidelines:

假设你是一名学生志愿者,要给来你们学校参观的外国朋友介绍学校情况。内容应包括学校历史、规模、教学现状以及未来目标等。

ABriefIntroductiontotheUniversityDistinguishedguests,

Welcometoouruniversity.Beforeyoustarttolookaround,allowmetogiveyouabriefaccountoftheschool.

Foundedin1927,ouruniversityisoneofthiscity’searliestuniversitiesofliberalarts.Itisstaffedwithanexcellentfaculty,andhasatotalenrollmentofover10,000students.Inthepastyears,ithasturnedoutnumerouswell-qualifiedstudentsandfounditsgraduatesactiveinprofessionsofallwalksoflife.

Sinceitsestablishment,theuniversityhasalwayssteereditselftowardtheobjectivethatitsstudentshaveanoverallhealthydevelopment.Notonlydoesitprovidethestudentswithbasicacademiccourses,butitmanagestoexposethemtotheup-to-dateknowledge.Besides,studentsarefreetoparticipateincolorfulcampusactivitiesandsocialpractice,whichareintendedforbroadeningtheirmindanddevelopingtheirpotentialtalent.

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Currently,bothourfacultyandstudentsaremakingeveryefforttoimprovethequality.

?????????????????????12.?心理健康

Howtokeeppsychologicallyhealthy?

Oneinfourpeoplewillexperiencesomekindofmentalhealthprobleminthecourseoftheyear.Whenyoufailtomanagetheseproblems,theyarelikelytocausevariousmentalillnessesandphysicalillnesses.

Thecausesofmentalhealthproblemsoftenvaryalotfromonecasetoanother.Intoday’ssociety,agoodnumberofpeoplearesufferingfromheavypressure.Othersarelackingincommunicationskillsandfeeltheyarelivinginanisolatedworld.Inaddition,alotofpeopleareignorantofpsychologicalknowledgeabouthowtokeepmentallyfit.

?Therearealotofwaystocurbmentalhealthproblemsandkeeppsychologicallyhealthy.Firstly,findtherealcauseofyourmentalhealthproblemandseewhetheryoucandosomethingtomakeachange.Secondly,learntorelaxourselvesandtakeexercisestoreleasethepressure.Afterall,yourhealthiswhatcountsmost.Finally,youmayfindithelpfultotalktoyourpartner,arelativeorafriendaboutyourproblem,orseeksupportandadvicefromapsychologicalconsultant.

????????????????????13.?食品安全

FoodSafety

?Currently,manyproblemsconcerningthesafetyoffoodhavepoppedup.Asforme,Ibelieveatleastthreefactorsaccountforthisissue.

?First,Iobservethatprofitsdrivemanyfoodproducerstocommitillegalthings.Theyaimtogainmoremoneyattheexpenseofconsumers''health.Second,theoveruseofagriculturalpesticidehasresultedinthedegradationoffoodquality.Theexcessivepesticidebearsenormoushealthhazardforpeople.Furthermore,somefoodproducersinjecthormonesintodomesticanimalssoastomakethemgrowmorequicklyandthustheycanturninmoreprofit.Asaresult,people’shealthhasbeenseriouslydisturbed.

Allinall,foodsafetyissuchagreatconcern,andweallshouldestablishlawsandimplementthemeffectivelytoavoidproducingtoxicfoods.

?????????????????????14.?微博的普及

ThepopularityofMicro-blogging

Micro-bloggingisnolongerastrangeword.Moreprecisely,ithasbecomepartofourlife.

Asforme,manyfactorscontributetothewidespreadofMicro-blogging.First,itisveryconvenientforpeopletoexpresstheirinstantfeelingsatanytime.Second,itprovidesachanceforpeopletoreleasetheirinnerstress.ByrevealingtheirheartfeltemotionsontheMicro-blogging,theirfriendsmayalsoknowabouttheirconditionsandcanofferin-timecomfort.

However,Micro-bloggingcanalsobepotentiallydangerousasitmaygiveawaypeople’sprivacyandothersignificantinformation.Allinall,Micro-bloggingprovidesuscomfortandalsoinevitablysomeconcerns.Weshouldbecarefulwhileusingit.

???????????????????????????15.?低碳

Lowcarbonlifestyle

Nowadays,thereareaconsiderablenumberofindividualswhoprefertoleadalow-carbonlifestylewhichfindexpressioninthefactthatmoreandmorecommutersareusingpublictransportationsystemintheirdailylife.

?Lowcarbonlifestylecanendowusandoursocietywithnumerousbenefits.Firstly,itgoesbeyonddoubtthatlowcarbonlifestylecontributesalottotheenvironmentalprotectionanditisafavorablewaytoslowdowntherateofclimatechangeofourearth,whichalsomeansalottoourhealth.

Wearesupposedtoundertaketheresponsibilitytoleadalow-carbonlifestyle,whichisofgreatsignificance.Andthereisadiversityofmeasureswecantakesoastoleadsuchanenvironmental-friendlylife.Foronething,weareexpectedtominimizetheuseofprivatecars,whichemitalargeamountofgreenhousegases.Foranother,wearesupposedtocultivatethepublicawarenessofenergyconservationforenergyintheworldtodayisdecreasingrapidly.Forinstance,wecanturnoffelectricalappliancesifnotnecessaryaswellasusingrenewablematerials.Furthermore,atourleisure,wecanseekopportunitiestoplantmoretreeswhichcanabsorbcarbon-dioxide.

Inbrief,lowcarbonlifestyleisnothingbutthebestchoiceforusandonlyinthiswaycanweformaharmoniousrelationshipwiththeenvironment.

??????????????????????????16.?醉酒驾车

DrunkenDriving

Nobodycouldhavefailedtonoticethefactthatdrunkendrivinghasbeenagraveproblemwithwhichweareconfronted.Generallyspeaking,thereareseveralreasonsaccountingfor/behindthisphenomenon.Firstly,recentdecadeshavewitnessedtherapiddevelopmentofpeople''slivingstandards.Asaresult,carsgainedever-increasingpopularityandhavefoundtheirwayintooureverydaylife.Secondly,peopleparticipateinmoreactivitiesorbanquetsthaneverbefore,wheretheywilldrinkliquor/strongwine.Then,theymaygetdrunkbutcontinuetodrive.

Drunkendrivingisboundtogeneratesevereconsequenceifwekeepturningablindeyetoit.Firstandforemost,thisbehaviorwilldirectlythreatenthesafetyofdrivers,passengersandpedestrians/goers,resultingintrafficaccidents,injuriesandevendeaths.Besides,treatingtheinjuredandrepairingbrokencarsmeanagrievouswasteofmoney,timeandresources.Lastbutnotleast,thisirresponsibledrivingwillmaketheroadanightmare,andthus,itwillcauseseriouslossesoffaithingovernmentsandthesociety.

?Inviewoftheseriousnessofthisproblem,effectivemeasuresmustbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.First,itisessentialthatthesupervisoryroleoflawsandregulationsshouldbestrengthenedtopunishthoseperformingdrunkendriving.Secondly,thepublic,especiallydrivers,shouldenhancetheirawarenessofpublicsafety.Withstringentlawsandalertpublic,itwillbeonlyamatteroftimefordrunkendrivingtobecomethingsofpast.

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