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关于"but"的用法 中国人喜欢使用"but"从句：同中文一样，在英文中这也是连接两个短句的简单方法。要避免单一的"but"从句，可以考虑采用以下这些变化形式： Plain: The children at school were familiar with many games, but Li Hua had never even heard of them. Interesting: The children at school were familiar with games Li Hua had never even heard of. Plain: The room was silent, but suddenly there was a clap of thunder outside. Interesting: The silence of the room was broken by a sudden clap of thunder outside. Plain: They were passionate lovers not only onstage but also off stage. Better: They were passionate lovers onstage and off. Plain: Outside the cinema, she lit a cigarette, not necessarily because she had a desire to smoke, but because she felt the need for warmth. Better: Outside the cinema, she lit a cigarette, as much from the need for warmth as from any desire to smoke. Plain: It was meant to be a brief kiss, but it turned into a long, lingering one. Interesting: What was meant to be a brief kiss turned into a long, lingering one. Plain: Music lightens life, but literature deepens it. Interesting: Music lightens life; literature deepens it. Plain: The film "Chariots of Fire" is about some young runners, but it is more than just that. Interesting: The film "Chariots of Fire" is much more than just a story of young runners. Plain: It is not his height but his weight that prevented him from competing in the race. Interesting: His weight, not his height, prevented him from competing in the race. Plain: Susan seemed unsuitable for the part, but she turned out to be the best actress in the production. Interesting: Susan seemed unsuitable for the part, yet she turned out to be the best actress in the production. Plain: Old Wang is often described as a happy-go-lucky person, but the last half hour of the hike home he was interested in nothing but a bath and a bed. Interesting: Old Wang, an otherwise happy-go-lucky person, thought of only two things the last half hour of the hike home: a bath and a bed. 关于"if...then"和"if"从句 除了"but"从句，很多学英语的人还会过多使用"if … then"或是"if"从句。这些从句本身并不是不好。但我们这里讨论的是多样性及其必要性。看看下例： Before: If you fail to pass the drug test, we will have to dismiss you from your job. After: Failure to pass the drug test will result in job dismissal. 修改后的句子语气显得稍强一些。同时因为句中省掉了"you"，使句子在语气上减少了对抗性。这个解题对策适用于每种人称，不单单指"you"。 Plain: If one imitates, one cannot expect to be great. Interesting: No person ever yet became great by imitation. Plain: If we want to end a war quickly, we must lose it. Interesting: The quickest way to end a war is to lose it. Plain: If we were directed from government bureaucracy when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread. Interesting: Were we directed from government bureaucracy when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread. Plain: Several staff members have checked the manuscript to see if it is accurate and easy to use. Interesting: Several staff members have checked the manuscript for accuracy and ease of use. Plain: If words are taken out of context, they are not very likely to mean the same as they do when they are in context. Interesting: Words taken out of context do not always mean what they do in context. |
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