四、每日佳作赏析
Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes
write a composition on the topic College Students Should Attend Physical
Exerelse . You should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on
the outline given below in Chinese
:
1.有些大学生不喜欢参加体育锻炼，这种做法是相当不可取的。
2.大学生参加体育锻炼的好处。
3.你喜欢参加何种体育锻炼。
范文
Physical exercise is a necessary part of college life . (1①) However , still some college students do not like to attend sports activities . They think those activities waste their time and influence their study . (2) Indeed , (3) it is very unwise for college students to keep distance from physical exercise .
Physical exercise (4) is very beneficial to college students . (1②) First of all , (5) attend-ing sports activities can help college students build a strong body and keep abundany energy . (1③) Moreover , physical exercise is (6) an effective way to release pressure and keep a pleasant mood (1④) Besides , (7) by attending physical activities , students can have chances to contact and communicate with others , (8) which can help them improve their social skills .
Nowadays colleges and universities provide many sports facilities for students to do physical exercise . Students can choose freely (9) accord-ing to their interests and needs .(10) As for me , I am keen on all kinds of ball games , (11) especially football and basketball . From these games , I have gained great pleasure and made many friends . (1⑤) To conelude , every college student (12) should not hesitate to attend sports activities .
点评
(1)衔接词语使文章条理清晰，意思连贯。
(2)意为“实际上，事实上”相当于in fact
.
(3)因定句式:It is …for sb . to do sth .其中it
是形式主语，不定式短语是实际的主语。
(4)意为“对……有益”。
(5)动名词短语作主语。
(6)意为“缓解压力的一种有效方式”。
(7)by表示方式、方法。
(8)which
引导非限制性定语从句。
(9)意为“根据自己的兴趣和需要”。
(10)用于引出个人喜好。
(11)意为“尤其是，特别是”。
(12)意为“应该毫不犹豫地做某事”。
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