四、每日佳作赏析
Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to
write a composition on the topic How to Improve Public Morals . You should write
at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in
Chinese :
1.目前社会上违反公德的行为仍然时有发生。
2.这些行为带来的危害。
3.你认为应该如何提高社会公德。
范文
Nowadays there are still many behaviors against public morality , (1) such as spitting or littering in public , cutting in line . (2①) is that some people lack personal manners and public conscious-ness . (3①) In addition , (4) weak implementa-tion of the administration measures (5) contribute a lot to these uneivilized behaviors .
(3②) Indeed , these small things in many people's eyes (6) have brought great bad effects .(3③) Above all , these immoral behaviors disturb social orders and disrupt social stability . (3④) Moreover , one's violating public morals not only invades others' benefits but also does harm to himself . For example , if most people buy pirated products , those original producers might lose the enthusiasm to continue their producing .
(7) Taking the above-mentioned into consideration , I think , it is high time that we took effective measures to improve public morals . (3⑤) On one hand , we must use education to (8) enhance their moral consciousness . (3⑥) On the other hand , the government should improve the administration system and ensure the (9) efficient implementation of administration measures . (3⑦) In a word , the improvement of public morals depends on all of us .
点评
(1)意为“例如”，用于表示列举。
(2)列举原因时常用的句式。
(3)衔接词语使文章条理清晰、意思连贯。
(4)意为“管理措施执行不力”。
(5)列举原因时常用的句式。
(6)引出危害时常用的句式。
(7)引出解决办法时常用用的句式。
(8)意为“提高公共意识”。
(9)意为“管理措施的有效执行”。
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