三、长短句变换练习
要求：将下列长句或短句进行优化改写，使其更符合表达需求。
1.If students who wish to have overseas academic experience have got the chances and financial resources , they should scize the opportunity to go abroad and broaden their vision , while if conditions don't permit them to go abroad , they can pursue their studies at top universities in our country .
2.China's seven-day Labor Day and the National Day holidays now is entering their seventh . The possibility of cancelling the holidays , usually called " Golden Week " , has become a widely discussed topic .
3.They argue that " Golden Week " is very effective . It introduces the idea of vacation travel to Chinese .
4.Firstly , a lot of visitors swarm into scenic spots suddenly . It will bring environmental stress .
5.The meaning of his statement is that he is of the opinion that the death penalty should be allowed .
6.Thirdly , after " Golden Week " , the number of tourists declines greatly . It results in the serious imbalance in travel industry . It does not really boost travel industry in a long run .
7.We need more flexible holidays . Thus we can satisfy the traveling desire of Chinese people . At the same time , we can avoid huge consumption imbalance between the " Golden Week " and usual times .
8.People who choose to further their studies abroad insist that if they go to study overseas they can get many benefits in different ways .
9.The place where they study is not very important for them , and instead , it is what they can learn that is the most important .
10.Second , if they complete part or all of their education overseas , they can gain a broader of different perspective on their field of study .
参考答案
1.If students who wish to have overseas academic experience have got the chances and financial resources , they should seize the opportunity to go abroad and broaden their vision . On the other hand , if conditions don't permit , they can pursue their studies at top universities in our country /
2.With China's seven-day Labor Day and the National Day holidays now entering their seventh , the possibility of cancelling the holidays , usually called " Golden Week " has become a widely discussed topic .
3.They argue that " Golden Week " is very effective in introducing the idea of vacation travel to Chinese .
4.Firstly , the sudden swarming of visitors will bring environmental stress on scenic spots .
5.He theinks that the death penalty should be allowed .
6.Thirdly , after " Golden Week " ,the number of tourists declines greatly , which results in the serious imbalance in travel industry instead of really boosting travel industry in a long run .
7.We need more flexible holidays to satisfy the traveling desire of Chinese people and avoid huge consumption imbalance between the " Golden Week " and usual times .
8.People who choose to further their studies abroad insist that overseas study can benefit them in different ways .
9.What counts is not the place where they study , but what they can learn . / It is not the place where they study but what they can learn that counts .
10.Second , completing part or all of their education overseas helps them gain a broader of different perspective on their field of study .
