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书面表达 ”考场急就篇指南
英语高考试题“书面表达”，既不是汉译英，也不是英语命题作文。它是介于上述二者之间的一种特殊题型。
该题型要求考生在限定的情景范围内，遵循英语语言特点，依自己的实际情况选用熟悉的词汇和句型，表述限定情景的一件事或一个交际场合。
由于“书面表达”所给背景材料意境一般很浅，考生以高三的水平构思一篇百字左右的短文不难。“书面表达”失分主要在于“思维”和“表达”的不一致。考生往往用汉语思维，用英语表达，而这两种能力的不平衡，势必造出若干文不达意的汉化英语。“书面表达”阅卷一般是内容和语言分开判分，根据上述情况，如果语言一塌胡涂，构思立意再好也难以表述明白。所以考生应尽量用英语思维，用英语表达。鉴于此，构思内容框架时应注意避开辞意义明显的繁杂句子，以免表达力不从心而通篇皆失。在考场上时间紧的情况下，对于“书面表达”这种特殊文体，做好“考场急就篇”，考生答题可分三步进行。
第一步：把背景材料分解成内容要素并标号，以保证不丢失内容点。对每一个标号在草稿纸上随手记上关键句型或短语。一个意思可以有若干种英语表达，考生可以避开生疏的词汇，尽量使用自己有把握的表达形式。选择句型的过程也就是用英语思维的过程。
举例：根据所提供的情况，用英语写一段100字左右的短文，介绍一下你们的英语老师：
教师王碧云，50岁左右。①身体健康，衣着朴素，②1967年毕业于山东师大外语系，③一直从事外语教学，④经常备课到深夜，⑤讲课生动有趣，⑥经常在学习上和生活上关心学生，⑦深得学生好评，⑧学生视其为良师益友。
①be 50 years old
②be in good health ,be simply dressed
③graduate from
④have been teaching
⑤prepare lessons
⑥lively, interesting
⑦show concern for
⑧think highly of
⑨consider …as
第二步：在草稿纸上把上述短语组成句子。这一步有很大的伸缩性，因人而异。可以写出全句，也可以只打腹稿，换几种形式试试，做到胸有成竹；在有把握的情况下，尽量使用较复杂的句型结构，以博取高分：
①Wang Biyun is about fifty years old.
②She is in good health and simply dressed.
③She graduated from the Foreign Languages Department of Shan dong Teachers University.
④She has been teaching English.
⑤She prepares lessons late into the night.
⑥Her lesson is lively and interesting.
⑦She shows concern for the students in life and studies.
⑧The students think highly of her.
⑨The students consider her as their good teacher and friend.
第三步；联句成文。标号的次序不一定是短文的顺序，在整理成文的时候，可以按英语表达习惯谋篇布局。
联句成文的过程中，要注意时态、语态、代词的使用，名词单复数，字母大小写，分段、标点、空格等，注意用上适当的语篇联接词。如果是书信或讲演稿，要注意呼语、落款及相应的委婉语等。由于第二步已经做到了成竹在胸，这一步可以直接写在试卷上，以节省考场上宝贵的时间。
请看下面的范文：
Our English teacher, Mrs. Wang Biyun, is about fifty years old. She has been teaching English in our school since she graduated from the Foreign Languages Department of Shan dong Teachers' University in 1967.
She is in good health and simply dressed. In order to improve our English, she often prepares lessons late into the night and tries her best to make her classes lively and interesting. The students in our class think highly of her. She always shows great concern for us in life and studies. We all consider her as our good teacher and friend.
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