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（2）Exemplification：举例论证 A. Numerous examples can be given, but this/these will suffice.举例之前 B. I can think of no better illustration than the following one(s).举例之前 C. This/These case(s) effectively clarify that…举例之后 （3）联系现实，列数据：以小见大，把握象征寓意，个体想为群体，具体想为抽象 Represent 代表，symbolize 象征，epitomize 是···的缩影， be naturally associated with 自然与···联系起来 （4）正反论证 3） Summary：小结，概括论证，总结本段，1句 3、Conclusion：第三段，归纳结论/建议措施，4句左右 1）Concluding sentence：结论句，呼应象征寓意，1句 2）Suggestions 1、2：两句结论或两点建议（针对双方提建议），2句 3）包装结尾、展望未来：1句，考研写作三大优秀句型 （1）倒装句：Only in this way can we solve this problem. 只有这样我们才能解决这个问题。 （2）强调句：It is persistent work that is conducive to your grasping a considerable vocabulary. 有长期学习才有助于你掌握大的词汇量。 （3）虚拟语气：It is high time that we improved the present situation. 我们早就该改进现状了。 作文框架是我从网上摘过来再稍微修改而得，侵权了私信我，立删。框架和当时上课听老师讲的基本一样，所以放过来。 模板一（联系现实论证，topic-年轻人的道德） 第一段：（1、2分别表示该段的第1、2句~） What a distressing irony to see ~~~（场景、画面） 图片总体描写（谁在干什么） 图片细节描写（人物表情、图片背景是怎么样的） Looking at the picture, I believe, every reader with conscience will feel intensely pained by the situation of ~~~（人物、动物）（点明文章中心）（I believe，as far as I think——插入语，完全没什么意思的短语，可是插上一句，感觉一下就不同了） 第二段： The picture is soul-stirring, and what it illustrates is a common phenomenon in today’s society: many grown-up children refuse to ~~~~（grown-up children——关键词） they regard ~ ~(人或事情) as a burden although it is their duty to ~~~(做什么事) I think these children have betrayed their own conscience and therefore may subject themselves to social contempt and criticism.（conscience——关键词） The moral sense of young people becomes dramatically downgrading. （young people 、moral sense——关键词） For example, youngster might have become too much self-centered, and worse，they discard the tradition of ~~~~.（discard the tradition——关键词） They no longer care for~~; instead they try every means to avoid responsibility for ~~ 第三段： Therefore, we have to take some useful measures to avoid the scene that is mentioned above. We must launch a variety of campaigns about ~~~ Moreover, we must appeal to our government to establish some relevant laws to~~~ Only in this way can we build up a harmonious family and society. 注：此模板字数已经有点超了，考试时按3-5-4结构差不多（你可别每个句子才10个字），字多易错，一错就会被扣分。字数控制在190-210最合理，如果你特别厉害，写300不会出错也是可以的，那这种大牛估计也不会关注这个问题。 模板二（列数据论证，正反论证，topic-年轻人的自信、勇气） 第一段： As is vividly depicted in the picture/cartoon ~~~（场景、画面——总体描写）（我写大作文基本上是以这句开头） 图片细节描写（人物表情、图片背景，谁在干什么。图片有多个人物时：谁在干什么，on the contrary，谁又在干什么） Obviously, both of them lack courage and confidence in front of challenges.（点明文章中心,，courage and confidence——关键词） 第二段： On account of the quickening pace of life, competition goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life, imposing tremendous pressure on all individuals.（competition、pressure——反方面的关键词） For instance, the past few years have witnessed dramatic increase in the difficulty of examinations and employment.（difficulty——反方面的关键词） -1 According to the recent survey by the Chinese Academy of Social Science, there are nearly two million students taking entrance exams for postgraduate schools.（写这些数据来自什么Chinese Academy of Social Science，只是让数据显得可靠些） -2 The past few years have witnessed dramatic increase in the number of~~~ We must maintain powerful self-confidence and optimism in the face of challenges so as to survive and succeed.（self-confidence and optimism——关键词） Suppose we overestimate our rivals and problems, we will become hesitating and doubtful of ourselves, unable to fulfill even a simple task.（hesitating and doubtful——反方面的关键词，rivals and problems、hesitating and doubtful——写两个词比写一个词要好很多） 第三段： Therefore, it is necessary to embrace the strong faith that we are invincible.（strong faith、invincible——关键词） We should bear in mind our painstaking efforts will pay off as long as we arm ourselves with courage and confidence. Only by building strong self-confidence can we demonstrate grace under pressure and turn our dreams into reality. 模板三（举例论证，topic-量力而行） 第一段： As is vividly depicted in the picture/cartoon ~~~（场景、画面——总体描写）（我写大作文基本上是以这句开头） 图片细节描写（人物表情、图片背景，谁在干什么） As the caption of the picture reads, sometimes we should do things in accordance with our capacity（点明文章中心,，in accordance with our capacity——关键词） 第二段： Examples to prove this view are abundant, among which the most convincing one is the case of pursuing a Master Degree（Examples to~~说明我要举例论证啦） The past few years have witnessed dramatic increase in the number of~~~ For a certain number of ~~, however, ~~ is beyond their academic abilities and also they parents can’t ~~~~ In this case, they should ~~~ 第三段： Therefore, it is imperative and immediate for us to take effective measures. -1 For one thing, we should appeal to our authorities to issue laws and regulation to ~~.（坏现象） -2 For one thing, we should appeal to our authorities to enact positive policies to guide/encourage ~~ is/are of great significance to us. （好现象） For another thing, we, our college students, should ~~~ Only in this way can we succeed and enjoy our life. 模板四（因果论证） 第二段： Numerous reasons are responsible for this common social phenomenon，but the followings are the most critical ones.（Numerous reasons ~~说明我要来列原因啦） First of all, owing to~~~ Another significant reasons, as for me, is that ti is~~ The third reason, which cannot be neglected, is that ~~~ Tips: 1、每写作文，插入语可用上几次。（插入语：as for me,as far as I think,~~~） 2、用两个词比用一个词好。（如;problems-rivals and problems、doubtful-hesitating and doubtful） 3、首段未句或二段首句点中心。 -------11月9日补充------------------------------------ 所谓关键词，就是和文章topic相关的需要频繁使用的词汇（一个意思要多次用，所以要变换单词）。像这样分类：考研作文题材关键词汇编 关于列数据，别编得太离谱就好。英语作文考的是英语，又不是写论文。当然自己练习时有意识去查一些数据更好，做事就怕认真。真要是你列个数据都能准确精确到个位，改卷老师也是醉了。 PS：一篇考研英语作文差不多20秒左右就改完（具体几秒忘了，当年老师讲过，当时我们被这个数据吓一跳，居然这么短），所以我强调了文章结构。第一段尾或第二段首要点中心也是这个原因。就是要让改卷老师知道：我是个不错的学生哦，至少结构有哦，你再看看哦，我还会一些句式和关键词变换哦。 完^-^ 祝大家考研顺利，坚持坚持~~~努力努力~~~~ -----------2015/1/11 更新------------------------------------ 一直有小伙伴给我点赞，好开心呀。但考研对我来说已经是很遥远的事情啦，有些小伙伴私信问些问题，真的回答不好，建议需要咨询考研问题的同学找其他刚经历考研的知友。我，真的是抱歉。 关于如何需求知友帮助，想真心实意求助的话，建议先自我介绍（内容至少包括成绩、科研情况、考研目标、复习进度、未来规划等），你的诚恳和用心 ， 我们体会得到。 编辑于 2015-01-11
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