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高中英语作文如何写(2)【不得不看】

 mxb08 2015-06-20

三. 善用高级词汇

Which is better?

1 周末我们会有很多作业要做.

A .We have endless homework to do at the weekend.

B. We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend .

2 在我所有的老师里,毛老师给我留下了很深的印象.

A. Of all my teachers, I still remember Mr Moore.

B. Of all my teachers, Mr Moore gave me the deepest impression.

3 高级培训班结束后回到家,他的妻子感到精疲力尽。

A. His wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very tired.

B. His wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very exhausted.

4. 他没听我课上讲的东西。

A.He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class.

B .He didn’t listen to what I said in the class.

如何在内容上言之有物?

1、附加成分作解释说明

方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件,目的等内容


例一:这样更方便照顾父母。

拓展:因为父母越来越年迈。

原因

It will be much more convenient to look after your

parents

as they are getting older and older.

例二:因广告过多, 影片放映晚点 。

后果

拓展:这导致观众不耐烦甚至恼火 。

There were so many advertisements that they delayed the time of showing the film,

which made audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.

making audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.

例三:安全出口(exit)标志不明, 存在安全隐患(potential hazard)。

拓展:万一遇到危险, 观众难以逃脱。

条件

The exit is not clear, so there will be potential hazard.

In case of danger, it is difficult for the audience to escape.

(1)表达不同原因的概括语

There are several reasons for this.

The reasons are as follows.

The reason for…is that…

The reason why… is that

(2)表示无需说明的事实的概括语:

It goes without saying that…

It’s needless to say that…

Needless to say,…

It’s obvious that…

2.加谚语(Proverb)


我们应该集中注意力于学习

We should focus our mind on our studies.

As the saying goes, “          .” We should focus our mind on our studies...

No pains,no gains

怎么添加谚语?

锻炼对学生有好处

It is good for us students to take exercise..

As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.

常用谚语(Proverb)

Strike the iron while it is hot.
趁热打铁。

Think twice before you do.
三思而后行。

Practice makes perfect.
熟能生巧。

A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush.
一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。

When in Roman,do as the Romans do.
入乡随俗。
Do it now.
机不可失,时不再来。

Failure is the mother of success.
失败是成功之母。

It is no use crying over spilt milk.
覆水难收。

An apple a day keeps the doctor away.

一天一个苹果, 医生远离我。

All roads lead to Rome.

条条大路通罗马。

3. 举例说明


青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球

We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.

For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use single-use products, plant more trees and save water and energy.

人口密集地区遭受许多自然灾害(举例说明)

Many populated areas suffer from many natural disasters such as

4. 结尾提出倡议或号召


珍惜每一滴水

Therefore, we should no longer be indifferent about this. To protect our valuable water resources, we should call on people to cherish every drop of water. Otherwise, maybe the last drops of water will be our tears.

As middle school students, we also have a part to play. Do remember: we are not saving water , we are saving our own life. With everyone doing his bit, we can make a difference.

保护环境

As students, we should start from ourselves . Here I’d like to remind my friend to take the lead in protecting the environment. With everyone doing his bit, we can change the present situation.

参加俱乐部或活动

Don’t hesitate. It will be great fun!

Don’t wait. Join us now!

Since it has so many benefits, what are you waiting for?

Start to join us now!

“短话长说”方法:

写作任务

现在,青少年肥胖越来越严重, 很让父母担心。请你根据以下提示写一篇文章 .

参考词汇:肥胖:obesity 垃圾食品:junk food

要求:1. 字数150左右

2. 对所有要点要适当发挥, 不要简单翻译。

3. 开头已给出, 不计入总数

Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned.______________________________________________


原因

l 缺少运动

l 饮食结构不合理

建议

l 多参加体育锻炼

l 多吃健康食品, 远离垃圾食品

l …


要点分析

l 利用模板

1,引出主题.When it comes to the phenomenon of teen obesity , our parents are in great concern. Why are so many kids getting fatter and fatter?

2,原因.Reasons:

3,建议.Suggestions:  in the first place, besides, last but not least,

原因:1. 缺少运动

Because of the popularity of TV and computers, and because students have so much homework to do, they are getting less exercise than before.

Because of the popularity of TV and computers, and students are burdened with so much homework,

2. 饮食结构不合理

Because people’s quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many foods, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks, which might make the kids overweight.

建议1. 多参加体育锻炼

In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise.

2. 多吃健康食品, 远离垃圾食品

As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits and vegetables, and less fast food and junk food.

3.制定合理的计划, 时间表

Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies.

合成文章

Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned. Why are teens getting fatter and fatter?

In my opinion, there are two remarkable reasons for this problem. For one thing , because of the popularity of TV and computers, and students are burdened with so much homework to do. They are getting less exercise than before. For another ,because people’s quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many foods, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks, which might make the kids overweight.

In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise. As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits , vegetables, less fast food and junk food. Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies.

 

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