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1But the two men/, 2when focusing their masterly powers upon the defense and interpretation of that mode of Romantic poetry /3in which their own creative energies were for a time absorbed,/ 4produced criticism/ 5which has affected the whole subsequent development of English literature. (32154) （先别看数字，往后看！） 主干识别： Two men produced criticism 两个人写出了评论 其他成分：when focusing their masterly powers upon the defense and interpretation of that mode of Romantic poetry in which their own creative energies were for a time absorbed 状语 which has affected the whole subsequent development of English literature. 定语 这种评论影响此后整个英国文学的发展； 微观分析：when focusing their masterly powers upon the defense and interpretation of that mode of Romantic poetry 这个是时间状语； （focusing的动作发出者就是two men） Focus one’s power upon sth 当这两人把主要的精力用来捍卫（defense）和解释（ interpretation） 浪漫主义诗歌这一形式时， （that of mode of Romantic poetry 其中that of 就是为了表示语言的正式性而已，没有实际的意义。） their own creative energies were for a time absorbed 定语从句 their own creative energies were for a time absorbed in 初译：曾经他们自己的创造的精力也被吸收于其中 改译：曾经他们也致力于创作这类诗歌； 最后的调序：但是，这两人曾经也致力于创作浪漫主义诗歌，当他们把主要的精力用来捍卫（defense）和解释（interpretation）浪漫主义 诗歌这一形式时，就写出了影响此后整个英国文学发展的文学评论。 (再回过头看看是不是我后面写的这个顺序32154) 当然你这样翻译也是可以的： 但是当他们把主要的精力用来捍卫（defense）和解释（interpretation）浪漫主义诗歌这一形式时（曾经他们也致力于创作浪漫主义诗歌），就写出了影响此后整个英国文学发展的文学评论。 今天依然是个非常有特色的翻译的句子，只是今天的句子是关注于经济： The emphasis in this new workplace culture was on the participation of the employees and the needs of the customers. |
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