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第10期精英班有同学问我：“汤老师，我学会了背单词，背短语，还是写不好作文怎么办？” 这位同学显然太过于焦急，如果真的记好了单词、短语、语法，培养语感，作文自然就写好了。 而我们第10期精英班刚结束，记忆方法运他也不是用得太熟练，英语底子一定还不够深厚，所以英语作文提高肯定有限，但我还是给出了能让他短期内提高英语作文成绩的“万能模板”： 一、说明原因型题型 Currently， XX has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate ，the theory --- nothing is more valuable than XX .It is clear that （ 1 ）. If you （ 2 ）， as a result ，your dreams will come true . On the contrary， if you （3）.Failure will be following with you .It turns out that all your plan falls through . No one can deny another fact that （4） .You don‘t have to look very far to find out the truth ， in respect that we all know （5） .It will exert a profound influence upon （6）.With reference to my standpoint ，I think （ 7）. 1） 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法. 1.有一些人认为…… 2.另一些人认为……3.我的看法…… The topic of ①---（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is heir favorite. They hold their view for the reason of②---（支持A的理由一）What is more， ③---理由二）. Moreover，④---（理由三）.While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly，----（支持B的理由一）. Secondly （besides），⑥---（理由二）. Thirdly （finally），⑦---（理由三）.From my point of view， I think ⑧---（我的观点）. The reason is that⑨--（原因）. As a matter of fact， there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me， the former is surely a wise choice . 2） 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点 Some people believe that ①---（观点一）. For example， they think②---（举例说明）.And it will bring them③---（为他们带来的好处）. In my opinion， I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing，④---（我不同意该看法的理由一）. For another thing，⑤---（反对的理由之二）. Form all what I have said， I agree to the thought that⑥---（我对文章所讨论主题的看法）. 二、不同观点列举（议论文） There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows： in the first place， ___原因一_______.Furthermore， in the second place， ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____. People， however， differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view， on the one hand， ___原因一_______. On the other hand， ____原因二_____. Therefore， there is no doubt that ___观点二______. As far as I am concerned， I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________， but also because _________. 我会经常在朋友圈中分享一些最新的教育心得以及学习方法、记忆方法，并定期举办免费公益课。有兴趣的家长可以看看我的其他文章。当然家长也可以直接与我私聊，我非常乐意与各位家长沟通学习。 微信：208067187（长按复制）。我专注记忆力提升、中小学学习方法研究，希望能在教育问题上对诸位家长有所帮助。 |
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