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写作指导------景点介绍 景点介绍类文章属于说明文的范畴，写好这类文章，要注意下列问题： 1.介绍景点，如景点的历史、地理位置、面积、气候、自然资源和居民等，要客观、科学、使用的语言要简单明了、准确、生动，不能随意加上自己的评论。 2.写作时要抓住景点的主要特征，注意安排好说明顺序，选择合适的说明方法，描写要详略得当、重点突出。 3.由于说明文是对客观事物的描写，所以并不需要过于复杂的时态，通常用一般现在时。 4.要注意行文的连贯性，恰当的使用过渡词，采用多种表达方式，以免让人感到乏味。要做到措词准确，要点齐全，行文流畅，条理清晰。 5.注意表达形式的多样性，比如在用词方面可用smart, excellent, wonderful, grand, unusual代替nice。用stand, lie, stay, remain, keep, grow代替be动词。 【必备句型】 1.介绍地理位置 There is / stands/ lies… …lies/ is located/is situated on /to/in… In/on/to the west/north…is/lies/stands… 2.景物描写 take on a new look It looks as if… be rich in One of the most…attractions is…/another attraction is… a place of intrest be famous/well-known for be dotted with be covered with be surrounded by/ 3面积、人口、历史的表达法 with an area of It covers an area of The history of…dates back to A trip along…will enable you to get It has become one of the most popular tourist attractions since… 【参考范文】 Paris Paris, a very beautiful city in the world, the capital of France, is located in the north ofFrance. It has a population of about 11million. It is the second largest city in Europe. As for the weather, it never gets too hot nor too cold. And it is at its best during spring and autumn. Paris is the culture, education and business center ofFrance. It is a city of fashion and romance. So many important events have been held here. It is well known that Paris is a modern city with a long history and rich tour resources. There are so many places for people to visit. The most famous are the Eiffel Tower, the Arch of Triumph (凯旋门) and Notre Dame(圣母院) and so on. In a word, Paris is really a great and attractive city. Step 3书面表达 假如你（WangHong）是一名导游，你将带领一个外国旅游团游览广东，请简单介绍广东现在的情况。 地理位置：广东位于中国东南部，南临南海，海岸线总长3368公里，岛屿众多。 历史：广东历史悠久，简称粤（yue） 特点：1.素有“水果王国”之称，香蕉、甘蔗、荔枝、菠萝为其四大名果； 2.是华南工业发达之省，水陆交通便利； 3.有三个经济特区：深圳、珠海、汕头； 4.有“食在广东“（Don’t hesitate to have meals here）之称。 参考词汇：海岸线 coastline甘蔗sugar cane荔枝 lychee菠萝 pineapple 经济特区special economic zone Ladies and Gentlemen, Welcome to Guangdong Province. I’m WangHong. And I’m more than glad to be your guide. Guangdong Province, ____________________ for short, has a long history and is known for the saying, “ _____________________________________________________.” _________________________________________in the southeast part of China, it has quite a few islands off its coastline_________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________, Guangdong Province is famous for its high quality ___________________________________________________________. It’s also ___________________________________________________provinces in southChina, with__________________________________________________both on land and water. It has_______________________________________________Shenzhen, Zhuhai and Shantou. Finally, I sincerely hope every one of you will enjoy yourself here. (基础写作参考范文one possible version) Ladies and Gentlemen, Welcome to Guangdong Province. I’m Wang Lihong. And I’m more than glad to be your guide. Guangdong Province, also called Yue for short, has a long history and is known for the saying, “Don’t hesitate to have meals here.” Located by the South Sea in the southeast part of mainland China, it has quite a few islands off its coastline which has a total length of 3,368 kilometers. Known as a fruit king, Guangdong Province is famous for its high-quality bananas, sugar cane, lychees and pineapples. It is also one of the most developed industrial provinces in South China, with convenient transportation both on land and water. It has several special economic zones such as Shenzhen, Zhuhai , Shantou and so on. Finally, I sincerely hope every one of you will enjoy yourself here. --- 微信 i03798 |
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