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Describe a person whose job is important to the society what job does he or she haveand explain why his/her job is important to the society A person you know had made a contribution to the society （New）And explain why you think it is a contribution to the society
这两个题目可以用一套答案来解决 就放在一起说呗 
难点和容易发挥的点 其实不是谁或怎么认识的 而是job方面 怎么样用烂俗的选材给出精彩的答案 老师会告诉大家的~
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这道题的思路比较直接,也相对比较顺畅,人物是谁,工作是什么,为什么对这个社会很重要,略微转了一点点的是第三项how do you know this person. 所以不妨把顺序稍微调整一下.逻辑会更顺畅,是谁-怎么认识的-工作-原因. 雅思口语part2部分的点是可以调整顺序的，但切记不要丢点。这道题的难点和容易发挥的点，其实不是谁或怎么认识的，而是job方面。所以选材方面自然要选取自己比较熟悉的，job方面，同学们最熟悉的莫过于teachers。今天我们不妨就用这个烂俗的选材，来给出漂亮的答案。 无论是任何topic，越是general，大家反而不知道该说什么。相反越是具体反而是越容易描述。所以我们不妨把teacher具体一点。第一个关键词 who，你可以说是your primary teacher Peggie，或者a teacher from the kindergarten I was in when I was 4 years old，named Peggie 这么一比较很少有学生会选primary teacher，语言过于简单，因为没有具体支撑的细节信息。而且你自己引入了过去信息，时态上也会更加丰富；当然 你不要停在这里，要给出extra information，这是加分点。可以描述这位老师的外貌，性格，爱好，特点等等。而这些是描述人物题的基础方面。更好的方式是把这些有逻辑的串联起来。因为这些可以放在how you know her当中，是很好的你知道了解他甚至是很喜欢这个人的原因；她的具体工作内容，可以采用总分的描述方式；记得分的部分要具体：教你某一种课，带你吃饭，哄你睡觉，陪你等家长等等routine affairs；为什么他的工作对社会很重要，这个部分千万不要仅仅限定在这个人身上，而要更侧重这一类职业的人。作为educator，自然是teach and guide，而在enlightenment启蒙阶段，更是对一个人的personality and character方面起positive的作用。落脚在society. 这个地方可以引用中国的proverb“小时了了大未必佳”，小时了了，长大比较容易佳。这样下来一个思维严谨，逻辑通顺的part2就完成了。I’d definitely like to talk about one of my teacher,Peggie, who I believe makes great contribution to our society by doing her own job. She is actually still working in the kindergarten I was in when I was 4 years old. Not only is she glamorous, has big eyes,always wears her hair in a pony tail and has a singbird-like voice, which is ,honestly, one of the main reasons that I’m incredibly attracted to her. but also she is extremely patient. What I’m saying is that I used to be really naughty and she never got angry with me or even annoyed。In terms of her detailed working responsibilities，there are those routine affairs like teaching the handcrafting class,make sure the kids are well fed，and most importantly，guarantee the safety especially when a lot of running around are involved. Another duty of hers is to guide and teach the little fellows what to do and what not to.
So,the sole reason her job deem to be a great contribution to the community is that as an educator in the enlightenment period of one’s life, she contributes in shaping a good person, cultivating positive personalities and characters, delivering healthy ways of thinking and behaving. All these things make great men who dedicate to devote and give back to the society. There’s a Chinese saying goes ‘a clever boy doesn't bound to make a great man’. However I’d like to think ‘to make a great man, one better be well nurtured” of course I mean by his preschool teacher.
【001】Someone Dresses Well 【002】A Film To Watch Again 【003】An Unusual Building 【004】A Childhood Toy
【005】A Childhood Song 【006】A Local Improvement 【007】Ideal Home 【008】A Family Event 【009】Food&Cooking 【010】A Festival In Your Country 【011】A Musical Event 【012】An environmental law 【013】Child who made you laugh 【014】Swimming /Sports 【015】Snacks 【016】Successful Company 【017】Were not told complete truth 【018】An art or craft activity 【019】Educational TV program
【020】Person in the news
【021】Someone or sth made noise 【022】Article that you read
【023】A long walk
【024】A stage of life you enjoyed
【025】A Paid Job You Did
【026】A day off 【027】A family member 【028】An important historical event
【029】Help environment
【030】Forgot something important
【031】Street you like
【032】important conversation
【033】Travel by plane
【034】A Foreign Country
【035】social network 回复【机经】查看雅思考试题目及答案范文 回复【口语】查看1-4月口语题库及解析
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