Rule 1: 不要重复使用相同单词写英文很重要的一点就是避免重复使用同一个单词.可以考虑使用具有相似意思的单词,短语,句子,使得你的句子更加有声有色. 例句:We went on holiday to a ski resort. The resort was very beautiful with lots of things to do. The mountains were also beautiful, and, to be honest, there were also many beautiful people. 在这个句子中,用了三次beautiful,就显得很没有新意。 修改为:We went on a holiday to a ski resort. The resort was very beautiful with lots of things to do. The mountains were majestic, and, to be honest, there were also many glamourous people. Rule 2: 不要重复相同的句子结构反复重复相同的句子结构也是写英文的大忌。看看下面四个句子:
在上面四个句子中,句子1和4使用了从属结构. 第2个句子使用了介词 (due to) 后面跟一名词短语,,第3句使用了并列连词「for」。 Rule 3: 变化连接词在写SCI文章中,我们经常会遇到,要分点称述,什么firstly,secondly,thirdly等等。比较单一,而且通篇都是,其实这样是不好的。 例句 First, open the box. Next, take out the equipment. Next, insert the batteries. Next, turn the device on and begin work. 就可以写成: First, open the box. Next, take out the equipment. After that, insert the batteries. Finally, turn the device on and begin work. 原文:http://esl./od/writingadvanced/fl/3-Tips-to-Improve-Writing-in-English.htm |
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