高考英语作文精炼（一）

   

  作文题目：

  如今，低碳生活已成为一种责任、习惯和时尚。请根据以下提示写一篇100字左右的英语短文，谈谈如何从身边的小事做起，实践低碳生活。

        1.节约水、电、粮食等；

        2.废物再利用;

        3.出行方式；

        4.植树……

参考词汇：

低碳生活：low-carbon living

  二氧化碳的排放：the emission of carbon dioxide

  

  学生优秀作品：

  Nowadays, low-carbon living has been a responsibility, habit and fashion. But how can we live a low-carbon life?

        ①I think we can do some practical things around us.② For example, we should turn off the tap(水龙头)when finding water running and we shouldn’t  keep water running while doing some washing. We ought to turn off the electricity when we leave the classroom. We ought not to throw away the food we can’t eat out. ③Besides, we can recycle waste paper and waste plastics bags and reuse them . ④When traveling, we’d better take a bus, ride a bicycle or walk instead of taking a taxi or driving. ⑤What’s more, we can plant more trees and grass as well.

        ⑥In a word , whatever we do to save energy or reduce the emission of carbon dioxide shows that we’re living a low-carbon life and  making contributions to the environmental protection.

  习作点评：

  本文采用总-分-总的写作手法，紧扣主题，层次分明，行文流畅。第①句点明主题，第②③④⑤句分别围绕写作内容展开陈述，第⑥句总结全文，前呼后应；运用了For example，Besides，What’s more, In a word等短语，使全文行文流畅连贯；运用了when finding，while doing省略句型和whatever引导的主语从句等高级结构。