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加油菌基于对历年真题及各名师预测卷进行分析，以小作文的主题类型为主线，精心选出了6类主题，并围绕这些主题整理了常用表达和经典范文（含译文），今天先整理前Top3，供大家参考练习。（由于微信排版问题，本文段首并未空两格，请大家写作时注意空格） Top1投诉信 1 必备表达说明投诉问题 I am writing to inform（告知，代替tell）you that I find…unsatisfactory… I am writing to express/ air dissatisfaction/ disappointment/ concern regarding … 期待解决方案 I hope you will take steps to rectify（纠正、改善，代替improve） this situation soon. I believe you will take my complaints seriously. I would ask you to give back my money, or I would file my complaint（投诉） to the authorities concerned（相关部门）. To solve this problem/surmount this difficulty/improve the situation/crack this hard nut（解决问题）, I hope to draw the attention of the authorities concerned. 2高分热文 Dear Mr. President, My name is Li Ming, a junior of the Civil Engineering School. I venture（冒昧）to write a letter to you about the canteen service （食堂服务） on campus which has given rise to a lot of complaints among students. The focus of the complaint is the poor quality of the food. The vegetables are so overcooked as to lose their nutrients. The price of the food is surprisingly high. Besides , the attitude of the service staff to the students is not hospitable （热情）at all. All in all, there is still much room for improvement as far as the canteen service is concerned. I do hope we will not suffer for another year. Thank you for your kind consideration. Sincerely yours, Li Ming 3精彩译文 尊敬的校长， 我是土木工程学院大三的李明，我冒昧的给您写信投诉食堂的服务，该服务已经引起了很多学生不满。 投诉的焦点是食品质量差。蔬菜烹饪过头，失去了营养。食品价格也高的出奇。此外，服务人员对学生的态度一点都不热情。 总之，食堂服务还有很大的改善空间。我真心希望不用再忍受一年。感谢您的考虑。 谨致问候， 李明 Top2询问信 1必背表达说明目的 I would appreciate very much if you can provide me with more details about… I have learned from…that you will…I just want to know specifically about… I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/concerning… 询问事宜 Would you please send me all the information and the forms as soon as possible? Thank you very much. I would be much obliged（感激）if you let me know the procedures I have to go through. 表示感谢、期盼回复 I am expecting your early reply/ your immediate response. Your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your consideration. 2高分热文 Dear Sir or Madam, I am a Chinese student who wishes to pursue further study at your university next semester. It would be highly appreciated if you would provide me with some essential information . First, how much is the tuition fee (学费）? Though I intend to be self-supporting （自费）, I would be interested to know if there is any scholarship available for international students. Second, I wonder whatqualifications （资格） I need to follow a course at your university. Now I have got a master degree in Tsinghua University, is it enough? Third, as regards to （关于） accommodations, is it possible for me to have a single room? I am looking forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution （贵校）. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 3精彩译文 尊敬的先生或女士， 我是一名中国学生，希望下学期在贵校深造。如果您能给我提供一些基本信息，我将非常感谢。 首先，学费是多少？尽管我打算自费，但我想知道国际学生能否获得奖学金。 其次，我想知道进入贵校需要什么样的资格。现在我在清华大学获得了硕士学位，这样够吗？第三，关于住宿的问题，有可能让我住单人间吗？ 期待你的回复，期待成为贵校的一员。 谨致问候， 李明 Top3请求信 1必背表达 提出请求 Could you please…? Could you possibly…? Would it be possible to…? I would be grateful if you could…? Would you mind doing…? I wonder if you could spare some time to help me… 表达谢意、期盼回复 Thank you for your attention to this matter. I look forward to prompt response. 2高分热文 Dear Prof. Smith, I am a senior in the Computer Science Department of Tsinghua University. Now I am writing my graduation thesis and in urgent need of some reference materials （相关信息）so that I write to you for help. The material on the application of computer among university students in America is what I need most. Most importantly, the relevant statistics and reports should cover the past two decades. And all the materials must be publications of national level. The material which I ask you for will decide the failure or success of my graduation thesis. I have failed to find relevant up-to-date materials in China. So your help would be much appreciated and I am looking forward to your reply. Sincerely yours, Li Ming 3精彩译文 尊敬的史密斯教授， 我是清华大学计算机科学系的大四学生。现在正在写毕业论文，迫切需要一些参考材料，因此向您写信求助。 我最需要美国大学生中的计算机应用材料。最重要的是，相关数据和报告要涵盖过去二十年，并且所有的材料必须是国家级出版物。 向您借的材料将决定我毕业论文成败。我在中国没有找到最新的相关资料。所以非常感激您的帮助，期待您的回复。 谨致问候， 李明 |
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