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写作任务 假设你校的美籍教师Mrs. Smith邀请你及英语俱乐部的其他成员下周六去她家吃晚餐。你打算在本周五下午的英语角上向俱乐部成员介绍西方的餐桌礼仪。请你根据下列提示写一篇不少于100词的英语发言稿。 提示： 1. 进餐时身体要坐正，手可以放在桌上； 2. 使用刀叉时，应右手用刀，左手用叉； 3. 用餐时，轻声说话，不要嘴里含着食物说话； 4. 吃光自己盘子里的食物是一种礼貌的行为； 5. 不要随意离席，用餐结束时，要对主人表示感谢。 【思路点拨】 1. 审题：本写作任务要求写一篇发言稿。 2. 任务分解：发言稿通常可以分为以下几个部分： 3. 确定时态、人称等：习作内容以第二人称为主，可以适当使用祈使句，时态以一般现在时为主。 【锦言佳句】 1. When at table, you're supposed to sit up straight. 2. Please keep the knife in your right hand and the fork in your left hand. 3. Don't speak with your mouth full of food. 4. It is polite to finish eating everything on your plate. 5. It is impolite to leave the table before the host gives the signal. 6. You should express your thanks to the host before you leave the house. 【学生习作】 Good afternoon, everyone. Do you want to behave well when having dinner with Mrs. Smith? I'd like to tell you something about Western table manners. When at table, you're supposed to sit up straight. You can put your hands on the table. Please keep the knife in your right hand and the fork in your left hand. Don't talk and laugh loudly all the time. Try to speak quietly. Don't speak with your mouth full of food. And, it is polite to finish eating everything on your plate. It is impolite to leave the table before the host gives the signal. After the dinner, don't forget to express your thanks to the host before you leave the house. That's all. Thank you. 【习作点评】 该篇习作开头部分引入自然、流畅，正文部分根据提示信息条理地介绍了西方的餐桌礼仪，语言简洁、准确。如果能适当加入对某些习惯的解释、说明，会使习作内容更完整，更有利于听众对西方餐桌礼仪的了解与认识。 【习作改进】 Good afternoon, everyone. Do you want to behave well when having dinner with Mrs. Smith? I'd like to tell you something about Western table manners. When at table, you're supposed to sit up straight. You can put your hands on the table. Please keep the knife in your right hand and the fork in your left hand. Don't talk and laugh loudly all the time. Try to speak quietly. Don't speak with your mouth full of food, for it is considered to be bad manners. And, it is polite to finish eating everything on your plate, which is a little different from Chinese food culture. It is impolite to leave the table before the host gives the signal. After the dinner, don't forget to express your thanks to the host before you leave the house. That's all. Thank you. |
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