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三九五 | 像包奕凡那样温暖陪伴

 zuodianshenme 2018-05-19

喜欢是一种表达

爱是一种陪伴


喜欢是“你听我说……”

爱是“我们一起……”


四六级大考在即

我们一起写作文吧


我们一起逐句写! 来自老付考研 03:34


原始积累:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission.” You can cite examples t illustrate the importance of lifetime learning. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


第一段

Life is a long journey during which constant learning is analogous to every single step. This figurative expression demonstrates that “learning begins before schooling and continues even after graduation”, and that “we are not to stop learning before the end of life”.


有没有觉得经过长期的“成分划分”,写作文“句子成分意识”都增强啦!


第一句

[1] Life is a long journey [2] during which constant learning is analogous to every single step. 

第二句

[1] This figurative expression demonstrates [2] that “learning begins before schooling and continues even after graduation”, [3] and that “we are not to stop learning before the end of life”.


生命是一场漫长的旅行,在这个过程中一次次的学习堪比不断前进的脚步。这种比拟,意在说明“入学之前,学习就已经开始;毕业之后,学习还在继续”,亦即“生命不息,学习不止”。


学以致用:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make things happen.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of being participants rather than mere onlookers in life. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


第一段

Life is a broad stage at which ______________________________________. This figurative expression demonstrates that “______________________________________”, and that “______________________________________”.


生活是一个大舞台,在这个舞台上,人人都有独一无二的角色。这种比拟,意在说明“成人之前,我们就有自己的社会角色,年迈之后,我们的社会义务还在继续”,亦即“我们不是看客,我们一直都是生活的参与者”。


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