2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习（九）语言学习

写作专题九：语言学习

一、与专题相关的话题项目

语言学习 (Language learning)

二、与专题相关的知识准备

1. 相关单元：8B U2 Body language

2. 相关词汇

高频词：expresion, gesture, impression, language, lady, matter, meaning, message, neck, accept, hold, remind, shake, bored, sure, well-dressed, towards

高频短语：body language, make a good impression on…, reminds sb about sth, sit up, take place

拓展词汇： appearance, ballet, communication, reject, nod, cross, sign, part-time

3. 经典句型：

   Communication is more than just speaking.

   Your whole appearance communicates things.

   You give people a good impression.

   Her body language is making people feel welcome.

   Dancers use body languages to tell stories.

   Why don’t you…?/ Why not …?/ What about…?

   It can be the key to communication.

   Not using eye contact can cause problems, but using too much is not polite either.

 

二、经典例题（改编自浙江中考题）

Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待，感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语，他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况，以“My English Learning”为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件，要求至少涉及其中三个要点，并且不能出现你的真实姓名、学校。

提示：

1、何时开始学习英语

2、学习中的困难和如何克服

3、学习英语的有用有趣的方法

 

解题思路示范

1、审题：

本文共有  4  个要点

时态涉及 一般过去时、一般现在时 

人称是____第一人称_____

 

2、抓要点

何时开始学习英语（when I was …years old）

学习中的困难和如何克服( listening, difficult , ask for advice, listen to tapes)

学习英语的有用有趣的方法(listen to teacher carefully, take notes ,,sing English songs…find a pen friend)

 

3、连词成句

主要使用句型6、7、8、9

   

4、连句成文与修改评分( 每行一处修改提升点，答案见范文)

My English Learning English is one of my best subject and I started learning English when I was ten years old .    Listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I asked my teacher for advices and I did a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watch English TV programs. I found it really helpful . In fact, there have some more helpful and interesting ways to learn English well.  I enjoy singing English songs and I want to find a pen friend from English-speaking country.  I  am believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.

__________ __________ __________ __________   __________ __________ __________ __________

  

5、分项分档评分表

项目	要素	给分表
内容 6分	1切合题意，体现要点 2有所发挥	6
准确性 6分	1语法 2词组句型 3机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误	3.5
流畅性3分	段落，过渡词，过渡句	1
自评总分： 10.5

 

 

 

 

6. 范文学习

My English Learning

English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at first, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I asked my teacher for advice and I did a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. I found it really helpful.

In fact, there are more helpful and interesting ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to find a pen friend from English-speaking countries.

 I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.

 

三、练习题

假设你叫刘明，英语成绩一直不错，但是你的朋友王玲英语有点薄弱，请根据提示给她写一些学习建议。 字数要求80词左右，不要出现真实姓名，校名。

1、上课专心听课，作业细心做

2、大声朗读，要多练，不怕讲错

3、经常听英文歌或看英文电影

4、其他做法

解题思路：

1. 审题：

本文共有    个要点

时态主要采用            

人称是_________

2. 抓要点（写在要点旁边）

3. 可能用到的句型

_______________________________________________________________

4. 连词成句，连句成文：

 _______________________________________________________________

 

_______________________________________________________________

 

_______________________________________________________________

 

_______________________________________________________________

 

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5、完成作文自查表：

如果没有问题的，请在项目后打√。如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。

项目	第一次自查	第二次自查
布局与内容要点
人称 时态、主谓一致
动词搭配、介词搭配
拼写错误
好词好句

 

6、范文背诵

Learning English is fun and easy. So, Let me give you some advice.

First, It is very important to listen to your teacher and do homework carefully. Then, read aloud and speak English with your friends as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes because we often learn from mistakes. Third, singing English songs and watching English movies are also interesting ways. You can not only learn English but also have fun at the same time. Last but not least, I keep writing English dairy in English. In fact, it really helps a lot.

When there is a will, there is a way. If you do not give up, I am sure you will make progress.