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让普通句子靓起来， 仅需六招 广东省阳江市阳西县第一中学 罗厚健 在作文中， 把话说清楚， 把内容要点表达完整还不足以俘获评卷老师的 “芳心”， 好句子才能让评卷老师眼前一亮，给你高分。 笔者在这里以 2017 年高考英语全国卷玉卷书面表达为例， 教你如何让普通的句子 “靓” 起来。 2017 高考全国Ⅰ卷书面表达： 一、 巧用形容词 ■普通句子 I plan to teach you some Tang poems. You' ll learn some poets like Li Bai and Du Fu. I' m writing to tell you some information of our next Chinese lesson. ■优秀句子 I plan to teach you some excellent Tang poems. You' ll learn some famous and talented poets like Li Bai and Du Fu. I' m writing to tell you some further information of our next Chinese lesson. ■牛刀小试 (1) Chinese poem is really a __________ form of art. (2) Tang poem is a __________component of __________Chinese traditional culture. (3) You are going to touch the most __________ and __________ part of the Chinese culture. 参考答案： （1） charming （2） significant, diverse （3） brilliant, beautiful 二、巧用副词 ■普通句子 Only in this way can you understand Tang poems. Sticking to learning it, you will make enormous progress in it. I' m glad to share the beauty of Chinese with you in the past classes. ■优秀句子 Only in this way can you understand Tang poems easily. Sticking to learning it industriously, you will surely make enormous progress in it. Sincerely, I' m glad to share the beauty of Chinese with you in the past classes. ■牛刀小试 (4) __________ , the time made deep influence on Du Fu. (5) You need to have a brief understanding of it in advance, which will be__________beneficial to your learning. (6) As your Chinese improves __________， I' m writing __________ to tell you that I' ll show you a new world ofTang poems, which you will fall in love with __________ . 参考答案:（4） Obviously （5） immensely （6） quickly, happily, undoubtedly 三、巧用介词短语 ■普通句子 The next class will begin at 8:00 this Sunday morning. I suggest that you have a brief knowledge of Tang Dynasty. ■优秀句子 The next class, to be held in my home, will begin at 8:00 this Sunday morning. In order to learn Tang poems better, I suggest that you have a brief knowledge of Tang Dynastyin advance. ■牛刀小试 (7) Tang poem, ________________, is regarded as a heritage of the excellent Chinese traditional culture. (8) Before the class, you' d better try to know the history of Tang Dynasty in advance ______________________surfing theInternet or reading some history books. (9) ________________________, I suggest you should have a brief preview of Chinese Tang dynasty before taking the class. 参考答案: （7） with a long history （8） by means of （9）In order to learn the poems easily. 四、巧用连接词 ■普通句子 We will have the class in the Room 301 of the library in town on Friday. They help you learn more Chinese characters and provide you a glance of Tang dynasty. It' s better for you to learn some history of Tang Dynasty as a preparation before the class. ■优秀句子 As usual, we will have the class in the Room 301 of the library in town on Friday. Not onlydo they help you learn more Chinese characters, butalsothey provide you a glance of Tang dynasty. Therefore, it' s better for you to learn some history of Tang Dynasty as a preparation before the class. ■牛刀小试 (10) ____________ , what I want to teach you this time is your favorite part—Tang poem. (11) I sincerely hope you keep on learning Chinese, ____________I' m always with you whenever you need help. (12) _____________should we learn the content of Tang poems, ____________we' re supposed to understand the emotion of the poets. 参考答案: （10） Moreover （11） and （12） Not only... but also... 五、巧用非谓语 ■普通句子 The class will be started at 8’o clock this Sunday morning. You' d better try to know the history of Tang Dynasty in advance. Tang poem is an important part of Chinese culture. ■优秀句子 Lasting for 1 hour, the class will be started at 8' o clock this Sunday morning. To study Tang poems better, you' d better try to know the history of Tang Dynasty in advance. Tang poem is an important part of Chinese culture, thus making it helpful for you to learn Chinese. ■牛刀小试 (13) The next class, ____________in my home, will begin at 8:00 this Sunday morning. (14) ____________you have a passion for Chinese poems, I plan to teach you some excellent Tang poems. (15) As you know, my house owns a large number of books about Chinese poems, thus ____________it convenient for us tofind some materials right away. 参考答案: （13） to be held （14） Knowing that （15） making 六、 巧用复合句 ■普通句子 Don' t hesitate to let me know your trouble. I' m writing to tell you something of the next class. I place the lesson in my house. ■优秀句子 If you have trouble in collecting materials, don’t hesitate to let me know. I' m writing to tell you what I want to share with you in the next class. I place the lesson in my house, which can provide us with a more comfortable environment. ■牛刀小试 (16) I plan to introduce Li Bai，______________________（非限制性定语从句）. (17) I wonder _______________________（宾语从句） at 2:00 on Sunday afternoon. (18)（ 原 因状语从句）_______________________， it is better for you to do some preparations. (19) I have prepared some Tang poems for you, ______________________（非限制性定语从句）. (20) By the way, __________________（条件状语从句） , you can learn about the history of Tang Dynasty _________________________（原因状语从句）. 参考答案: （16） who is one of the most famous poets writing Tang poems （17） whether it is convenient for you to come to my home （18） Since the theme of the class is poems of Tang Dynasty （19） which are translated in English and modern Chinese （20） if you are free, because it can help you learn Tang poems more easily ■满分作文赏析 Dear Leslie, I am glad that you have made great progress in learning Chinese. And I' m writing to tell you what I want to share with you inthe next class. The next class, to be held in my home, will begin at 8:00 thisSunday morning. Knowing you have a passion for Chinese poems,I plan to teach you some excellent Tang poems. Not only do theyhelp you learn more Chinese characters, but they also provide youa glance of Tang Dynasty, which is the most outstanding dynastyin Chinese history. What' s more, it is of great importance for youto make preparations, such as looking through some materialsabout Tang Dynasty in advance, through which you can get a betterunderstanding of the emotion in the poems. If you have trouble in collecting materials, don' t hesitate to let me know. I will offer what I have as soon as possible. Sincerely yours, Li Hua |
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