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高考读后续写微技能|12种高分开头 1. An adverb Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass. Joyfully he skipped up the street. Para 1： (201610浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. （时间副词衔接+环境描写） 2. An adj. phrase Curious to know what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave. Unable to say a word, he was rooted to the spot. (201610浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Desperate and hopeless, Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her face. （并列情绪形容词） (201610浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. （状态形容词+as/though 引导的倒装句） (201806浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse. (情绪形容词+从句) (201806浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. 3. A participle (-ing or –ed word) Looking around him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly closed the door. Exhausted, he was glad the race was finally over. (201610浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night. （现在分词+情绪形容词） (201610浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.（现在分词+状态形容词） 4. A conjunction As he walked, he whistled Although he was afraid, he jumped right in. 5. A prepositional phrase At the end of the lane he suddenly stopped. At the sight of the snake, the little girl screamed at the top of her voice. 6. A dialogue or a monologue “Let’s see who gets there first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny. “Hold on tight!” My father yelled. We just finished bucking in as the coaster jerked into motion. This was my first roller coaster ride. (201706浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him. "Get into the car." Paul shouted at Mac. 7. A character Mark is a studious boy who loves reading. His classmates often tease him for being too hardworking and they call him Mr. Smart.One afternoon, while studying at home… 8. An emotion The moment she saw how she did for her Science test, tears started welling up in Tina’s eyes and falling down her cheeks. 9. A setting I closed my eyes to enjoy the gentle breeze and the sounds of the clashing waves. Gently opening my eyes, I saw my parents taking a relaxing stroll along the beach. The cave was dark and everything was silent. I couldn’t even see my hand in front of my face. I knew this adventure was going to be something that I would never forget. (201711浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys holding me entirely in their fascination. （视觉+环境描写+拟人） 10. An action Furry started wagging his tail and running around in circles when he saw his master taking a leash out from the drawer. Furry was all ready for his evening walk. (201711浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Dad exchanged a glance with me. Why not camp to satisfy Mom? （动作描写+问句衔接） 11. Sound effects BOOM, CRASH! The wind was howling outside of my house. We were having a terrible thunder storm. I was very scared. 12. A question Have you ever been on a self-driving trip? Let me tell you an exciting trip my family took this summer. Why does trouble always follow me around? Do I have a "kick me" sign on my back or something? fascination. （视觉+环境描写+拟人） |
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