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下面这篇文章是2019年的小作文这样写就能拿到8分。 今天的句子: One of the most frustrating aspects of many school reforms efforts of the past several decades is the intense focus on test scores with far less attention, if any, on the personal experiences that students bring to the classroom and how those who have suffered chronic stress are affected. (想想你会怎么出题?) 思考题: The much attention has been attached to how the personal experiences and chronic stress influence the test 感谢参与投票! 来看看单词: 1. frustrating 令人沮丧的 2. intense focus 强烈的关注 3. chronic stress 长期的压力 主干识别: One of the most frustrating aspects is the intense focus on test scores 其他成分: 1. of many school reforms efforts of the past several decades 定语 2.with far less attention on the personal experiences and how those are affected.状语 (并列找对了吗?断句没错吧!) 3. that students bring to the classroom 定语从句 4. who have suffered chronic stress 定语从句 5., if any, 状语从句的省略补全就是:if there is any attention 参考译文:在过去几十年的许多学校改革努力中,最令人沮丧的方面之一是对考试成绩的高度关注,而对学生带到课堂里的个人经历的关注,以及对那些长期承受压力的学生如何受到影响的关注,如果有的话,也是非常少的。 在看几个理解来了解一下“,if…,” The phone has seriously weakened, if not killed, the letter. 电话要是没有灭了书信那也是严重地削弱了书信。 Most of us, if not all, love Kevin. 如果不是全部的话,那也是大多数人都喜欢凯文。 这种结构写作的时候可以用。骚! 思考题: The much attention has been attached to how the personal experiences and chronic stress influence the test scores. 看好了: much attention=intense focus influence=affect 这是替换 但是没有说关注: the personal experiences and chronic stress对成绩影响。 这是拼凑 这就是传说中的: 用替换勾引你 用拼凑干掉你! 所以是错得! 这种走位一看就知道是真题和我的手笔!骚! 为你点赞! 上车出发! 考研同学注意啦:2020考研数学,李永乐团队全网最后一次考前直播课开班了,速来报名! |
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