| 【读后续写】高分介词短语的使用, 学会了拿高分（含精准练习） |
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【读后续写】高分介词短语的使用,学会了拿高分（含精准练习）
三、实战演练
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
ItwasawarmandsunnymorningattheCentralParkZoo.?Abigail?andherclassmateswereabuzz?withexcitement?astheirschoolbusenteredthezooparklot.Today,Abigail’sclasswasgoingonafieldtriptothezootolearnmoreabouttheanimalsandtheirnaturalhabitats.
“Beforeyouleavethebus,pleasemakesureyouhaveyour?buddy！”Mrs.Brownannounced.Tomakesurenoone?gotlost?inthezoo,eachstudenthadabuddy(companion/friend).Abigail’sbuddywasnamed?Derrick.Derricklovesanimalsandwasalsoexcitedtogotothezoo.Butsometimes,Derrickdoesnot?followtherules?andgetsintrouble.Abigailhopedthattoday,Derrickwouldfollowtherulessotheywouldnotgetintrouble.
Whiletherestofthestudentsgotoffthebus,AbigailandDerrickquickly?ranofftoexplore.Theyfoundtheexhibitsformanydifferentkindsofanimalsandlearnedalotabouttheirnaturalhabitats.Theysawtheelephantsplayingandtheysawgiraffeseating.Theysawthepolarbearssleepingandthemonkeyssleeping.AbigailaskedDerrick：
“Derrick,whatisyourfavoriteanimal？”
“IthinkIlikechimpanzeesbest.They?havealotofenergy,?justlikeme!Whatanimaldoyoulike,Abigail？”
“Ilovepolarbears!IthinktheirlifestyleintheArcticisveryinteresting.”
Afewhourslater,AbigailandDerrickstartedtofeelhungry.TheymadetheirwaybacktothezooentrancetoeatlunchattheRainforestCafe.TheRainforestCafeisbothAbigailand
Derrick’sfavorite?restaurant?becausethereisanaquariuminside.Therestaurantisalsofamousforitschocolatecake,whichAbigailorderedfordessertaftertheyhadfinishedtheirlunch.
AsAbigailwasfinishinghercake,Derrickexcusedhimselftogototherestroom.Abouttenminuteslater,asuddenalarmbegantogooffandavoicecameovertheloudspeaker.
“Attention!Someonehasopenedthechimpanzeeexhibit!Somechimpanzeeshaveescaped！”
Peoplewerescreamingandstartingtorun.AbigaillookedforDerrick,buthewasnowheretobefound.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Asmoreandmorepeopleranoutofthezoo,Abigailbegantothink_________________________________
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AsAbigailracedupthepathtotheanimalexhibits,shewasstopped_________________________________
【Onepossibleversion】：
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Asmoreandmorepeopleranoutofthezoo,Abigailbegantothinkwhereher?buddy,Derrick,couldbe.Shegotupfromthetable?quickly?andcircledbacktotherestrooms,callingDerrick’sname.Therewasnoanswer,so?Abigail?leftthe?restaurant.Asshelookedaroundthezoogrounds,sherememberedthatDerrick?hadalotofenergy?andhadtoldherthatchimpanzeeswerehisfavoriteanimals.?Derrick?wouldn’thavelefttherestauranttoreleasethechimpanzees，wouldhe?Ohno!?Inshock?AbigailwassuresheknewwhereDerrickhadgone.
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AsAbigailracedupthepathtotheanimalexhibits,shewasstopped?inhertracksbynoneotherthanDerrickhimself,withtwochimpanzeescradledinhisarms.Heofferedasmall,guiltysmile.“Ididn’tmeantoletthemescape,”hebegan.“Ijustwantedtotakethemouttoplayforalittlewhile!Itookthekeyfromazookeeperwhowasn’tlooking.Butthen,thelockbrokeand...”BehindAbigail,Mrs.BrownhadbeguntowalkupthepathandsawDerrickholdingtheanimals?withexcitement.?Itwasclearfromhersternexpressionthathewasinbigtroublebecausehedidn’t?followthe?rules．
【点评】：故事情节完整紧凑合理，叙述流畅，句式结构丰富，介词短语的运用更好地描写了角色的情感。文中inshock?体现了Abigail?一想到Derrick?很可能把chimpanzees放了出来时的震惊之情。withexcitement?则体现了Derrick怀抱喜爱动物时的兴奋之情。
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