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高考英语中，书面表达所占分数比重较大，阅卷时，一篇高考作文往往在1分钟内就会被判定生死，大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，阅卷老师的给分也绝不会吝啬。 写作最基本的要求是考查考生遣词造句的能力，遣词的原则是表达准确、地道自然、生动形象。如果考生在掌握了最基本词汇的基础上，能够将一些常用词汇进行升华，就将成为高考作文获得高分的亮点之一。今天分享20组写作高分亮点词汇，帮助同学们冲刺写作高分！ 一、高分亮点词汇 0 1 首先 常见简单词：first ，firstly 高分亮点词：first of all, to start with, to begin with, in the first place 例：To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. 首先，做兼职是我们的梦想，同时，我打算做一个销售人员是因为不仅可以养活自己，还能扩展眼界。 0 2 其次 常见简单词：second，secondly 高分亮点词：in addition, then, next, in the second place 例：In addition, it is a choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation. 其次，它是一次机会可以在假期中参观一些名胜古迹，如泰山。 0 3 再次 常见简单词：third，thirdly 高分亮点词：what is more, in the third place 例：What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life. 再次，我认为做志愿者工作，可以丰富自己的人生，也是对社会的贡献。 0 4 最后 常见简单词：finally，at last 高分亮点词：in conclusion, in the end, last but not least 例：In conclusion，let's work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass. 最后，让我们齐心协力去节约能源，保护我们的自然环境，保护动物，树木，花草。 0 5 解释 常见简单词：explain 高分亮点词：account for 例：There exist two reasons, which may account for the difference. 这里有两点原因可以解释这个差异。 0 6 打算 常见简单词：plan 高分亮点词：intend，mean 例：I intend to join in a Dragon Boat Training Camp. 我打算参加一个龙舟训练营。 0 7 变成 常见简单词：become 高分亮点词：turn into，change into 例：Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel. 然后他们开始喊叫，最终变成了一场可怕的争吵。 0 8 告诉 常见简单词：tell 高分亮点词：share with 例：I'm writing to share with you some details. 我现在给你写信来告诉你一些细节。 0 9 对……感到惊讶 常见简单词：be surprised at 高分亮点词：be amazed at 例：I'm amazed at the progress you've made. 我对你取得的进步感到惊讶。 1 0 集合 常见简单词：meet 高分亮点词：gather 例：We'll gather at the Students' Club at 8 p.m. this Friday. 这周五的下午八点，我们将在学校俱乐部集合。 1 1 各种各样的 常见简单词：different kinds of 高分亮点词：a wide variety / range of 例：We have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends. 我们有更多的选择，像旅行，拜访亲朋好友。 1 2 帮忙 常见简单词：help 高分亮点词：do sb. a favor, give sb. a hand, help sb. out 例：I'd like you to do me a favor. 我想要你帮个忙。 1 3 确信 常见简单词：I'm sure / certain that 高分亮点词：I am convinced that 例：I am pretty convinced that a wise choice makes perfect. 我确信一个明智的选择会促成完美的结果。 1 4 考虑 常见简单词：consider 高分亮点词：think over， give sth. careful / full / serious consideration，take account of， take... into account / consideration 例：We would have to give careful consideration to environmental issues. 我们必须要认真考虑环境问题。 1 5 以……自豪 常见简单词：be proud of 高分亮点词：take pride in 例：He took pride in having contributed to the world. 他以对世界的贡献自豪。 1 6 对……感兴趣 常见简单词：be interested in 高分亮点词：have an interest in 例：The girl has a great interest in sport and has been taking badminton classes twice a week over the last three years. 这个女孩对体育感兴趣，并且在过去的三年里，每周都会参加两次羽毛球课。 1 7 认为/相信 常见简单词：think, believe 高分亮点词：consider, assume that, maintain, argue that 例：Some argue that humans and machines can coexist as long as they work in teams. 一些人认为，只要人类和机器以团队的方式工作，它们就可以共存。 1 8 解决 常见简单词：solve 高分亮点词：resolve, deal with, cope with, settle, work out 例：We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. 我们可以有很多种方式来处理这种情况。 1 9 努力 常见简单词：work hard 高分亮点词：spare no effort 例：Let's start fight now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute! 让我们开始奋斗，每天，每小时，每一分钟都努力一点。 2 0 获得 常见简单词：get 高分亮点词：gain, acquire, obtain, achieve, attain 例1：To gain a bright future, you might have to work hard. 为了获得一个光明的未来，你应该要努力学习。 例2：No pians no gains. 一分耕耘，一分收获。 二、句子替换练习 请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分： 1．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达) So, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will help you prepare for your class. Therefore; make preparations for 2．(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)The craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot. various/a range of 3．(2016·北京高考书面表达) Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials. came up with 4.(2016·四川高考书面表达)The reasons are the following. As follows 5.(2015·湖南高考书面表达)At the same time, I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things ... made up my mind 6. As high school students, we should be neatly dressed when at school. are supposed to 7. There's no harm in your staying up late sometimes. occasionally/once in a while 8. The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses. challenging 9． So far as I know, everyone of them wants to be a model student. intends to 三、写作提升练习 假定你是中学生李华，家住泉州。你的英国笔友Jason来信谈到了他的家乡伦敦，并希望了解你的家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文写一封回信。 回信必须包括以下内容： 1．自然情况：地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等； 2．发展成就：经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等； 3．存在问题：交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题等； 4．对泉州发展的看法：内容由考生自己拟定。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：高层建筑 highrise building 【考生作文】 Dear Jason， I'm ①very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou. Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing ②fast during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been ③built, highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city.④More and more schools and hospitals are ⑤useful for the native people. It is developing into a modern and ⑥beautiful city. ⑦But there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and ⑧serious air pollution, which have a bad ⑨effect on people's daily life. ⑩I think Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future. Yours, Li Hua 【升格作文】 Dear Jason， I'm ①more than happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou. Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing ②rapidly during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been ③set up, highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city. ④An increasing number of schools and hospitals are ⑤available for the native people. It is developing into a modern and ⑥attractive/charming city. ⑦However, there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and ⑧severe air pollution, which have a bad ⑨influence/impact on people's daily life. ⑩In my opinion/As far as I am concerned, Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future. Yours, Li Hua |
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