Page|13 issueforherevenbeforedecidingtoenterthecontest.Ifthatwasherfirstyearjoining Toastmastersandshewasalreadyincompetitivemode,thistellsmethatovercomingthefearof publicspeakingwasnotmuchofanissue.Withoutknowingwhenshejoined,however,itonly allowsforspeculation.
?Stories:Astorycanincludethewideroverallpicturethatmakesupalongerjourney,butagood storyshouldconsistofatleastone“close-up”(magnifyingglassonasinglemoment).Usuallythis willincludeanothercharactertoprovidesomesortofinteractionorrelationship.
WhenIfirstwentthroughthisspeech,myfirstthoughtwasthattherewereNOstoriesatall.
Shebasicallyrattledoffsomefootnotesfromherlife.Droppedoutofcollege.Gotadivorceafter eightmonths.LostinDistrictspeechcontest.Andtheclosestthingtotherebeinganother characterwasherex-husband.Butthenagain,hewastherebutjustbarely—nophysical descriptionapartfrom“...hewasfine,too.”Therewerenospecificdetailsabouthimthat humanizedhim.Hefeltinvisibleorimaginary.
Overall,itfeltthattheentireworldshepresentedinherspeechwasaghosttownthatconsistedof onlyher,andthingshappenedinavacuum.
Iamtornoverwhethertoconsideranythingastory,butIguesswhenlookingatthespeechwitha wide-anglelens,allthoseeventsultimatelytellherstory,albeitasinglestorywithblurrydetails.
Onestoryisperfectlyfine,butitshouldhavesubstance.Iwon’trememberthisspeechforits stories,andifI’mhonest,apartfromherstagepresenceandcharisma,andIsupposethefactthatI didabreakdownofit,Idon’tthinkI’llrememberthisspeechayearfromnow. 2019–TacticalTalkshttps://tacticaltalks.com/ |
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