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如果六级考前你一篇作文未背，请务必背诵下面这篇救命作文。 其中的功能表达，可以帮助你至少完成20篇六级作文的写作。既然可以写之前的20篇，里面的表达很有可能可以写即将到来的六级考试的作文。 Directions: For this part, you areallowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the remark “A smile isthe shortest distance between two people.” You can cite some examples toillustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no morethan 200 words. 【点评】 从审题角度看，本次作文体裁是essay，话题是smile；内容方面要求是commenting on the remark 和cite some examples; 值得关注的是本次作文主题看似简单，因为smile的话题很熟悉，导致不少学生忽略 shortest distance betweentwo people的限制。综合smile,shortest distance, between two people等信息，本文应重点写smile 对人际交往的影响。 首段：简单评论+引出话语 （简评）Ifindividuals intend to shorten their distance between/with others, it isadvisable for them to begin with smiling. (引出)Accordingly,when hearing the saying “a smile is the shortest distance between two people,”we can perceive its connotation. （话语联系主旨）Apparently,this saying can be naturally associated with the importance of smiles ininterpersonal communication. 二段： （强调句式）Itis smiles that enable people to build up a hopeful, promising and rosyrelationship with our friends. （总结）As a matter of fact,intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the significance ofsmiling in communication. (相关人感受) In our daily life,an increasing number of individuals find it quite comfortable and enjoyable tocommunicate with those with sincere smiles. (现象)Meanwhile, it has become a common phenomenon for a host of people to regardsmiling as a symbol of friendship, warmth and enthusiasm. （举例)Taking a look around, we can notice agreat many examples like this: (排比)smiles help friends to enjoy closer friendship; smiles help family membersenjoy love and happiness. 尾段：观点+建议+展望 (展望)Do bear in mind: asmile is the bridge of friendship. (建议)Thus,we should hold and enjoy the shortest distance with our friends, classmates andacquaintances. (观点)As a college student, I am convinced thatit is of great necessity for youngsters to enhance our communication by keepingsmiling every day. 【参考译文】 如果人们想要缩短与他人之间的距离，保持微笑不失为一种明智的做法。因此，当我们听到这句“微笑是人和人之间最短的距离”时，我们能理解它的内涵。显然，这句话曾自然联系到微笑在人际交往中的重要性。 正是微笑使得人们与朋友建立起充满希望、有活力的美好生活。事实上，很多明智的人都已经意识到微笑在交流中的重要性。在日常生活中，越来越多人发现与面带微笑的人交往令人舒服享受。同时，很多人普遍的将微笑视作友谊、温暖和热情的象征。环顾我们的周围，可以注意到很多这种例子：微笑帮助朋友享受更密切的友谊；微笑帮助家人享受爱和幸福。 牢记：微笑是友谊的桥梁。因此，我们应与朋友、同学和熟人保持并享受最短的距离。作为一名大学生，我相信年轻人有必要通过每天的微笑提升我们的交流。 【更多图书购买】当当搜索石雷鹏 考前25天重点：每3-5天刷一套真题，每套真题刷三遍，方法参考下方原文链接 |
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