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压中17年考研英语一大作文:请看解析+估分建议

 石雷鹏 2021-04-02

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总体建议:

考研期间正赶上妹妹结婚,作为哥哥颇为忙碌。

抱歉,今天才给出参考范文:请对照范文评估分数,如果跟范文差不多,大作文15+,小作文8+;有部分语言表达错误,大作文12+,小作文6+;多处错误,大作文9+,小作文4+。大小作文阅卷不轻易判为离题,大作文写到读书、行动、实践或脚踏实地的重要性就不离题!

因为不同考生完全可以从不同角度理解图片!考研阅卷时规定不轻易判为跑题,更不轻易给零分!(PS:考研英语数学等专业课阅卷工作将于1月16日前后在各省直辖市开始,明年2月中旬出分那几天要攒攒人品)→_→

51. Directions:

 You are to write an email to James Cook, a newly arrived Australian professor, recommending some tourist attractions in your city. Please give reasons for your recommendation.

You should write neatly on the answer sheet.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the email. Use Li Ming instead.

Do not write the address.

【简析】

本次小作文考察写作体裁为email,要求给新来的外籍教授James Cook推荐你所在城市的一些旅游景点,并给出推荐的原因。

本文本质上为推荐信,类似曾在2011年和2015年的英语一小作文中曾考到推荐一部电影和一本书。可以说,本次考试再次延续考研作文近年来的命题趋势—“旧瓶装新酒”。

类似的话题在四级考试曾考到过,2001四级考试要求写一篇文章作为导游给游客介绍一个旅游景点,2014年内容是假设一位外国朋友到访你的家乡或中国,你会带他/她去看什么地方。

【参考范文】

Dear Cook,

    I am quite delighted to hear that you have arrived in Beijing and will begin your teaching career in our university. And today, I am writing for the purpose of recommending certain tourist attractions.

    The long history and a host of historical buildings characterize Beijing, the capital city of China. Thus, it is advisable for you to visit places including the Summer Palace, the Great Wall and the Forbidden City. These attractions are particularly worth visiting, because these places will bring you opportunities to acquire the historical knowledge of China, arouses your enthusiasm for Chinese culture and help you to appreciate the distinctive Chinese architectures.

    I am convinced that you will enjoy comfortable, fruitful and wonderful trips in these attractions.

Your truly,

Li Ming

52. Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should

1) describe the pictures briefly

2) interpret the meaning, and

3) give your comments.


【简析】

       考研英语一多次出现精神品质类、学习读书类话题,可以说本次作文也是“旧瓶装新酒”,例如:2001、2004、2007、2008、2012年考到过爱心、持之以恒、自信、合作和乐观的话题;2016年考到子女教育话题。总之,考研大作文的写作如果曾细致复习往年真题,相信这次的写作也不再话下。

       此外,本次作文主要写到读书、脚踏实地、行动、或实践的重要性均为切题。只有海量图书,但从来不读,没有行动,怎能成功。

      不知道你还记得考试当天发的预测吗?


参考范文
参考范文
   These two pictures are particularly worth concern for the reason that the painter focuses his eyesight on what the truly reading is. In the first cartoon, there is a youngster, sitting leisurely and comfortably in a chair and flaunting his large number of books, with no book in hands. However, in the right picture, although the guy has just a few books, he has made his mind to try his utmost to read 20 books in this year. Several Chinese characters, finally, can be noticed, which say “having books” and “reading books”.

    In the contemporary society, a host of people prefer to purchase, store and even flaunt their books, but they may never read any books. This trend is rather ridiculous. As a matter of fact, every one should bear in mind that books should be read not be boasted. As a positive habit, reading books brings us knowledge, arouses our enthusiasm for future life and helps us to enhance our quality. It is books that enable us to build up not only knowledge, but also a confidence, optimism and courage to face any adversities in life, work and study. Unfortunately, many people have books but never read, which has constituted an obstacle that hinders their growth and progress.

    I, as a college student, am convinced that the society as a whole should forge a wholesome atmosphere to advocate, educate and encourage all people to not only purchase books, but also to be absorbed in reading books.

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