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读后续写基本以记叙文为主，记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容，以叙述为主要表达方式来反映丰富多彩的现实生活的一种文体。 环境描写是记叙文的要素之一，指对人物所处的具体的社会环境和自然环境的描写。其中，社会环境是指能反映社会、时代特征的建筑、场所、陈设等景物以及民俗民风等。自然环境是指自然界的景物，如季节变化、风霜雨雪、山川湖海、森林原野等。 我们先看看英语名著是怎么描写环境的： Now that the sun was setting in a welter of crimson behind the hills across the Flint River, the warmth of the April day was ebbing into a faint but balmy chill.因为太阳在弗林特河对岸的群山后面一起汹涌的红霞中缓缓降落，四月白天的温暖也渐渐消退，隐隐透出丝丝的凉意。
Cecilia, mercifully still in her underwear, was climbing into the pond, was standing waist deep in the water, was pinching her nose. 谢天谢地，塞西莉亚还穿着内衣，爬进池塘，站在齐腰深的水里，捏着鼻子。 —— Atonement 《赎罪》 
Some days the sunsets would be purple and pink. And some days they were a blazing orange setting fire to the clouds on the horizon. It was during one of those sunsets that my father's idea of the whole being greater than the sum of its parts moved from my head to my heart. 有时落日泛起紫红的余晖，有时散发出橘红色的火光燃起天边的晚霞。在这绚烂的日落景象中，我慢慢领悟了父亲所说的整体胜于局部总和的道理。 —— Flipped 《怦然心动》
下面，小维为大家整理了环境描写相关的素材，同学们练习的时候，可以先试着翻译，再和例句对比，找出例句中精彩的结构和词汇，最后熟诵下来。 stream, mouth, bank, branch, pond, lake, ocean, wave,bay, beach, shore (ashore), seaside,sand, coast (coastline), port, island, source（课标新增词）
harbour, strait, waterfall, wetland, dam, polar（课标新增词） forest, continent, mountain ( mountainous), range, peak（课标新增词）, face, rock, cave, valley, soil, field,plain, desert，mountainside, hillside, downhill, highland, jungle, steep the fragile flowers 娇嫩的花 the fragrant roses 芬芳的玫瑰 continuous/ constant rains the thundering clouds 雷霆万钧的云 cool,refreshing breeze 凉爽清新的风 in the warm spring sunshine under the burning sun of midsummerfierce /heavy/ violent stormsThe sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality. 深蓝色的夜空给这一场景增添了童话般的色彩。
We climbed up a winding track towards a mountain shelter. The water was deep blue and the sunlight glittered on its glass-clear surface. 湖水深蓝，阳光在波平如镜的湖面上熠熠生辉。 On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. 山中宁静的清晨，感受阳光洒在你的身上，呼吸鲜花的芳香，（聆听）鸟儿用它们的晨歌迎接新的一天。（新人教必修②U4） Bathed in the sunshine and delighted by fantastic scenery, we headed for the destination.沐浴在阳光下享受着美丽的风景，我们向目的地出发了。The stars that dotted the sky lit up the night. The sun went in, and the breeze became cold. The mist melted rapidly in the morning sun. A clear little stream ran quite merrily along its narrow way. Mist-covered mountains were dotted with small farms and villages.The roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. 海浪的咆哮和海鸟的鸣叫组成了海岸的音乐。（新人教必修②U4）The clouds had spread and nearly covered the entire sky.The feathery snowflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture.The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.As the night advanced, the clouds closed in and densely overspread the whole sky.Though the rain stopped, the wind rushed by and whistled and made strange sounds.雨虽停了，风却呼啸而过，发出奇怪的声音。（选自《秘密花园》）The new spring grass shot up as time itself had sped up. The birds busy themselves around me, not caring that I'm there. Falling leaves danced down in the cool mid-autumn air, bidding farewell to sweet summer and welcoming the autumn in.落叶在秋风中飞舞，告别了甜美的夏天，迎接秋天的到来。The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street. Occasionally, one would fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it to the ground. 漫步街头，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉落，在微风中轻轻摇摆，飘然落地。
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