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1 Do you like painting or drawing? Drawing has always been a passion since I was a child(回应，注意不要照抄题目哦). It was a good opportunity for me to have drawing a compulsory subject in my primary and secondary school. Although as a university student, I can't spend hours on drawing, once I have inspiration, I would definitely manage my time to draw. Additionally, I'm not good at painting so I think drawing is fairly enough. 解析： 时态的混合，现在时和过去时态的混合，分数比单纯用现在时更高； additionally 连接词； 2 How often do you visit art galleries？ To tell you the truth, I have never visited art galleries before. Unless I have a guide to acknowledge me, art galleries would be quite boring for me. 解析： 这种题目完全可以答否定的哦，有时候甚至答成否定的更高分呢 3 What kinds of things do you like to draw? My main inspiration are Japanese manga 日本漫画. The drawing topic is extremely varied. However, only manga seems to show great potency 潜力for my level. I have a big collection at home and as I sometimes go through it again, I can see how much I've improved. 解析： I can see how much I've improved 宾语从句 4 Is it easy to learn how to draw? I think I must say it's even challenging to a lot of people. I absolutely failed when it comes to drawing anything ''real'' like people, trees and flowers. I think for those who succeed in drawing or arts in general, they first must have God-gifted taste of arts, then comes the long-term commitment that requires extreme practice and high patience. 解析： I think I must say 口语化的词 challenging =difficult have God-gifted taste of arts 天生的艺术品味； They first must have God-gifted taste of arts, then comes the long-term commitment that requires extreme practice and high patience. 这句话很好，在于句式上没有重复，比说They first must have God-gifted taste of arts, then they must have the long-term commitment that requires extreme practice and high patience. 要好得多 |
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