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叙事记叙文 2022年中考英语万能黄金作文模板 叙事作文体裁解读及写法点拨 叙事作文体裁解读 事件描述即讲述事情的经过，这类的文章对初中生来讲，大多是涉及自己的成长历程、校园生活的点演回忆、 令人动容的难忘时刻、不愿不挠的奋斗故事，你来我往的人际关系，以及旅行过程的所见所间。这些话题无非是要求学生能够通过自己的视角再现事件，借此来行发情怀成防志向上、从体故上来说大部分属于记叙文，也有部分是夹叙夹议的形式，要通过审题来决定具体体裁。 从结构上来讲， 这类文章是有规可情的。一般来说， 文章都要开头点题:中间部分重点操述事件、记忆等，这部分是重点，语言方面的掌握和修养是决定整篇文章档次的主要评分依报:最后可在结尾部分进行感情升华，要注意文章得出的结论都应是积极向上的。 有了大致的结构，记叙文的重点就应该放在中间叙事部分，这部分要想写得出彩，就要做到叙事既准确清晰又生动有趣。如何做到准确清晰?最基本的是交代好五大要素，即who(人物)、when(时间)、where(地点)、what(事情经过)、how(感受)，有了这些基本要素，基本内容就有了。如何做到生动有趣?这就需要学生平日里的语言积累和修养来发挥作用、句式句型丰富多彩、词汇表达地道精确，选择使用连接词和过渡词使得记叙通畅，这些做到了自然就会为文章添彩，否则文章就只是描述事件的流水账，索然无味。另外，这部分般是描述过去发生的事情， 要注意时态要用过去时。 在中小学生英语课程标准中，初中阶段的内容与要求中所提到的基本素村，比如changes and development(变化与发展)，cultures and customs(文化习俗)，neighborhood and surroundings(生活环境)，subjects(学科) ，recreation and sports (娱乐与运动)、social communication (社会交际)，social relationships(人际关系)，trips and journeys(旅行)等素材的写作都会涉及事件描述。 叙事写法点拨 在写记事文章的时候，我们可以分成以下三部分来写: 1事情的开端。交代时间，地点、人物和事情的起因等。在这部分的写作中，不用详细地展开，只需简单交代，并可使用“设置悬念”等写作手法。 2事情的经过和高潮。详细描写事情是怎么开始，发展、并达到高潮的。这部分是文章的中心，所以一定要具体、详细地描写出事情发展全过程的细节，要尽量地真实、引人人胜。 3.事情的结尾。这部分简单地进行描写就行，还可在这部分加上一些自己获得的启发和教训，但无须详细展开，用一两句话带过就行。 叙事记叙文万能模板 ①I can't （事件）without （人物）。 ②I remember clearly when I （事件），I felt （感想）。My parents （做法）。They told me that and what I should do was .I was touched and made up my mind To （决心）. ③It is （人物）that . 模板内容要点 ①开篇点题 ②具体叙述事情 ③呼应主题 注： 模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。 必备词汇与套用句型 必备亮点词汇 1、叙事顺序 first, to begin with, first of all, firstly首先 secondly, then, besides, what's more, in addition, moreover然后 at last, last but not least, above all, all in all, to sum up, on the whole, finally最后 2、时间描写
3、地点词汇
4.动作描写
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经典套用句型 闪亮篇首句 (1) One day / The other day / A couple of days ago while he ....一天/前几天当他正.... .... (2) it was snowing /raining heavily on Monday /Sunday morning when...星期一/星期天早上，正在下着大雪/雨，.... (3) AII through my junior high school, I couldn't forget..在我整个的初中生涯中，我不能忘记.... (4) Last week, when I was on my way home, something terrible happened.上个星期，当我在回家路上的时候，一些糟糕的事情发生了 (5) The event took place/happened /occurred in the early morning.那件事情发生在一大早。 出彩篇中句 (1) Without hesitation, I decided to give him a hand.毫不犹豫，我决定帮助 (2)It was my first time to Mount Tai.那是我第一次去泰山。 (3) We spent many hours talking happily我们愉快地交谈了几个小时。 (4) The line of people was endless.人们排成的队伍看不到尽头。 精彩篇尾句 (1) r never forget he day when we visited the farm.我将永远不会忘记我们参观农场的那一天。 (2) What a pleasant trip!多么愉快的一次旅行啊! (3) This will be an unforgettable experience. 这将会是一次难忘的经历。 (4) I have never seen a comedy like that.我从未看过那样的喜剧。 (5) 1 had fun at the party tonight. 今晚我在聚会上玩得很愉快。 模板范文演练 （吉林）回顾三年的初中生活，父母的教诲与支持始终伴你成长，使你进步。那些发生在你与父母之间的故事，看似平淡却值得回味与珍藏。请以“The Story of My Progress”为题，写一篇文章。 要求：1.讲述一件发生在你与父母之间的事情，可适度发挥。 2.词数80字左右，文中不得出现真实的姓名与学校名称。 The Story of My Progress 万能模板套用分析 首先，引出话题，点明写作目的。 其次，叙述具体的故事。 最后，再次点明主题。 满分范文 The Story of My Progress I can't make any progress without my parents' help.① I remember clearly when I didn't pass an exam and made my parents disappointed, I felt so sorry and sad and even did not want to go home.(句式多变原则，when引导时间状语从句，从句和主句中and分别连接两个谓语。）My parents found me at school and tried to comfort me.They told me that one time of failure did not determine my whole life and what I should do was to overcome every difficulty and try to get a higher score in the next exam. I was touched and made up my mind（短语优先原则。）to study even harder.② It is my parents that help me make great progress.③ 你也可以这样表达 ①I must say that my progress has connected with my parents closely. ②Hearing what they said,I decided to try my best and study even harder. ③Thanks to my parents,I have made great progress. 范文译文 我进步的故事 没有父母的帮助，我不能取得任何进步。 我记得很清楚，当我考试不及格，让父母失望的时候，我觉得非常抱歉又难过，甚至不想回家。爸爸妈妈在学校里找到了我，并尽力安慰我。他们告诉我，一次失败并不能决定我的整个人生。我应该做的就是克服每一个困难，努力在下次考试中取得更高的分数。我觉得很感动，下决心要更加努力学习。 正是我父母帮助我取得了那么大的进步。 热点话题满分叙事记叙文必背 根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 自律，即自我约束，是自我提升的一种途径，有助于我们成长，促使我们不断前行。 某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。 提示词语: self-disciplined(自律的)，plan，goal，habit，improve 提示问题: What did you do to be self-disciplined? What benefits have you got from doing so? Self-discipline plays an important role in our life ________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】 这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份，用英语写一篇短文给某网站投稿，谈谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。根据题目中给出的问题可知，短文应包括以下内容：首先谈一谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么？然后谈谈这样做给你带来的好处。第一个内容应主要使用一般过去时；第二个内容应主要使用现在完成时。注意谓语动词的正确形式。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点。写作时应注意：首先注意内容的完整、充实，学生们可以结合自己的实际生活，写一写自己平时的做法。注意叙述应有层次、有条理。其次应注意英语的表达问题，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。 【参考范文】 Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is self-disciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school. And I could not only respected all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates. At home, I was able to balance housework and homework. I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the task, I developed the habit of going to bed early and going to bed early. In the society，I spared no effort to improve myself all the time. In a word. I have benefited a lot from being self-discipline. First of all, I have had many good habits, which makes my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have been to high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be a self-disciplined person. 【名师点评】 这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了自己第自律的认识，结合自己的实际谈论了自律的好处。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整、充实，短文主要分两段：第一段中作者介绍了自己在家里、在学校以及在社会上是如何遵守规则，进行自我约束的。这一段的内容叙述很有条理，从at school, At home, In the society三个方面进行介绍。第二段中作者主要阐述了自律给自己带来的好处，使用了Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly，从三个方面进行介绍。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范，句式结构文章，且使用了较高级的词汇和复杂句式，提升了作文档次，展现了作者扎实的写作功底。文章中较好的句型有：I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school.、I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal.、First of all，I have had many good habits，which makes my life easier and more regular.、Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future.等。 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike得知你们开展了“做生态小公民，建设美丽家乡”的活动，他来信表示很感兴趣并想了解具体细节，请给Mike写一封回信向他描述你（们）曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次活动。 要求： (1) 内容应包括活动或事件的时间、地点、过程和你的感受； (2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；词数80~100。开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Milk, I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological eitizen(生态公民), we did a good job. Last ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day. Yours, Li Hua 【写作思路】 在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。 【参考范文】 Dear Mike, I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological citizen, we did a good job. Last Sunday, I went to our community with my friends to give the people there a speech. It was about how to protect our environment. After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution. To cut down waste pollution, they should take bags to go shopping. And they also knew to put litter in different bins. Finally, we called them up/called on them to make a difference to our environment together. We were tired but happy that day. Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day. Yours, Li Hua 【名师点评】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to do，be interested in，ecological citizen，give a speech，how to do，take a bus，ride a bike，instead of，cut down，go shopping，call them up，make a difference，become better and better等。而I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities./ After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 运动塑造健康，团结凝聚力量。5月10 日，学校举办了春季运动会。你和班上的许多同学参加了比赛项目，战绩显著。其他同学观看了比赛，并为选手们加油喝彩。请你根据下面四幅图片的提示，写一篇日记，介绍运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况，并抒发自己的活动感受。 写作要求： 1．文章中勿出现真实的姓名和校名； 2．文章须包含图片所提供的主要信息，可适当发挥。行文连贯，条理清晰； 3．词数80~100个，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总字数。 参考词汇：teamwork Friday, May 11th, 2019 Sunny It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】 这是一篇看图作文，根据图片中的相关内容介绍一下运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况，并抒发自己的活动感受。所提供的卡片中列举了跳远、跳高、400米接力和100米接力。主要从同学们的参加情况和自己的活动感受这个方面去写。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意日记中必须包含图片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【参考范文】 Friday, May 11th, 2019 Sunny It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet. There were 4 events for both boys and girls. They were the long jump, the high jump, the l00-meter race and the 400-meter relay race. Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. Sixteen of us took part in the activity and we got 4 first prizes, 2 second prizes and 3 third prizes. My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys'100-meter race. In the boys' relay race, three boys and I ran very fast, coming out on top. In the meantime, all other classmates watched the matches, took photos and cheered us on. From this sports meet, know that sports can keep us healthy. We should do sports every day. Meanwhile, teamwork plays an important role in the relay race. As the saying goes, one tree can't make a forest. So it made us learn to help each other in our daily life. 【名师点评】 【高分句型一】 Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. 我们班的每个人都很兴奋，因为我们取得了一个很好的成绩。句子because we got a wonderful result.是由because引导的原因状语从句。 【高分句型二】 My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys'100-meter race. 我的同学袁颖和方丹轻松地获得了女子跳远和跳高的冠军。我也参加了男子100米赛跑。So did I in the boys'100-meter race.是由so引起的倒装句。 文娱、体育、户外等丰富多彩的课外活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以“After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful”为题，为校园专栏写一篇英文稿件。 内容包括： 1. 简要描述你参加过的一项课外活动； 2. 该课外活动给你带来的收获及感受(交朋友；放松自我)。 写作要求： 1. 词数80词左右；开头已写好，不记入总词数； 2. 文章不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。 After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful Nowadays after-class activities are becoming more and more important ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】 这是一篇话题作文，让我们写一篇关于After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful的英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来。写作需要用第一人称，注意各种时态的交替运用。内容要点包括：简要描述你参加过的一项课外活动，时态用一般过去时；你参加过的课外活动给你带来的收获和感受，时态以一般现在时为主和一般将来时为主；最后总结自己的心得体会。 【参考范文】 After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful Nowadays, after-school activities are becoming more and more important. There are many different kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. I joined a volleyball club last year. I am used to playing volleyball after school. In the volleyball club, I've made lots of friends. We often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy while playing volleyball. And it is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future. All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful. 【名师点评】 【高分句型一】I am used to playing volleyball after school. 我习惯放学后打排球。be used to doing sth.习惯于做某事。 【高分句型二】And it is also a good way to relax myself. 这也是放松自己的好方法。动词不定式to relax myself用作后置定语。 【高分句型三】All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful. 总之，课外活动使我的生活更加丰富多彩，更有意义。more colorful and meaningful用作my life的宾语补足语。 假如你有机会和任何一个名人共进午餐。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。 1. 要点： 1）这个名人是谁； 2）你为什么想和他或她共进午餐； 3）你想和他或她谈论什么。 2.要求： 1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】 这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你想和哪位名人共进午餐。主要从1）这个名人是谁；2）你为什么想和他或她共进午餐；3）你想和他或她谈论什么。这三个方面去介绍。注意时态应为一般现在时或一般将来时。人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【参考范文】 I’d like to have lunch with Ren Zhengfei, the founder of the well-known Chinese tech company Huawei. Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. And under his leadership, Huawei has become a high-tech giant worldwide. Over the lunch, I will listen to his success story. Then I will ask him what is important to make it happen. If time permits, I’ll ask for his advice for us teenagers today. I’m expecting this lunch already. 【名师点评】 【高分句型一】 Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. 任先生被认为是一个伟大的人，他总是把一切都安排在前面。 句子who always has everything mapped out ahead.是由who引导的定语从句。 【高分句型二】 If time permits, I'll ask for his advice for us teenagers today. 如果时间允许的话，我今天就为我们青少年征求他的意见。 句子If time permits是由if 引导的条件状语从句。 初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟。 提示：1. 初中阶段你有哪些收获； 2. 初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望； 3. 你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。 要求：1. 80-100词，首句已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。 The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】 这是一篇提纲类0，初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。 【参考范文】 The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high school, I’ve gained confidence and happiness. With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends. However, there is still something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my schoolwork, I couldn’t keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious that I quarreled with my parents. In the future, I’ll try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading books. Meanwhile, I’ll get on well with my parents. I believe I’ll have a happy and colorful life. 【名师点评】 这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I've also made some good friends.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 '你养我长大，我陪你变老。'父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天你即将毕业是向父母表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文。 要点： （1）给我生命，一直照顾我成长； （2）努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件； （3）拥有爱心，教我学会……； （4）今天，我要为你们……（自主发挥，至少两点）。 注意事项： （1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。 You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 You bring me up．I will be with you in your life．You are important persons in the process of my growth．You give me life and take care of me all the time．（给我生命，一直照顾我成长） When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me． 【高分句型一】 In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education，you always work hard from morning till night． （努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件）Everyone knows you are the persons full of love．You are ready to help people in need．It is you who teach me to be a kind person．【高分句型二】（拥有爱心，教我做慈爱的人） Dad and mum，today I'll cook dinner for you．I'll go for a walk with you after dinner．（今天要为父母做的两件事） I hope you will be happy and healthy forever! 【名师点评】 【高分句型一】 When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me．当我的学习和生活有问题时，你总是耐心地帮助我，鼓励我． when当……时候，引导时间状语从句，adj +enough +to do sth 足够地……可以做某事， 【高分句型二】 It is you who teach me to be a kind person．是你教会我做一个善良的人． 本句使用了强调句It is +被强调部分+that/who ... |
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