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说明利弊型议论文 2022年中考英语万能黄金作文模板 说明利弊型议论文裁解读及写法点拨 体裁解读 议论文体对事件作出点评，表达观点，是日常语言表达的种常见形式. 对于习作面言财常以议论文的形式为其载体。热点就是日常生活中些有争议的话题， 学生围绕这些话随用述自己的观点。常见的话题往往涉及学习生活、环保、未来规划等，例如:是否要使用塑料包装袋，是否要参加课外培训课程，是否需要进步发展共享单车系统等。 这些议论都需要有明确的观点，充分的依据，严谨的谋篇布局。对热点话题、事件的评析是在事例引述、数据分析、事实佐证的基础上进行的说理。 不同于纯粹的记叙文描写， 以事抒情，侧重描写，不同于应用文强调功能性和实用价值，也不同于说明文的以文解惑，阐述事物本质的特点，热点评论类的文章往往夹叙夹议，在描写的基础上，还要有一-定篇幅的议论，表达主张、发表意见，其过程强调逻辑的严密性，要求语言精练、论证合理。 在评论中，要有论点、论据和论证三个组成部分。- -般建议在引人部分Assertion part)简述材料，并提出一个明确的中心论点:而后按照作文要求，在铺陈论述部分(Exposition part就自己提出的中心论点辅以具体的论据进行说明;最后在结尾处(Conclusion par)再次重申论点提出的合理性，或给予进步的建议、 设想。 初中阶段，议论文般以“利与弊”.“赞成与反对”:“是与非”、“建议推荐”等主题眼开。 在我们议论文写作时，以下几点需要牢记在心: 1.人称。议论文，是要自己为自己的某个观点辩护，或者提出自己的看法，因此一般都是使用第一.人称“I”。 2.分段。议论文定要分段书写， 根据议论文的组成要素，我们一般都是按其要素划分成三段，这样可以使文章的结构更加清晰。 3逻辑词的使用。议论文很大的特点就是强调逻辑性。因此，我们要通度使用逻辑词、连词等，使我们的文章前后紧密相连，环环相扣。 写作方法点拨 在进行利弊型议论文写作时，我们可以分为四部分进行: 1.描述某一 现象或事物。在文章的开头首先要指出我们评论的对象或事件，为下文我们指出该事件或事物的利弊做好铺垫。 2.分析缺点。针对所指出的事物分析其缺点或不足之处。可以是本身的不足，也可以是其给社会带来的不良影响，或者是对环境造成的伤害等。 3.指出其优点。要客观看待事物，在分析缺点的同时还要指出该事件或对象的优点或可取之处，可以说给人们生活带来了方便，或者有利于社会的稳定等。缺点和优点的顺序可以互换。 4.作者看法。客观对事物进行了分析之后，作者要提出自己的观点，是怎么看待该现象或事物的，是利大于弊还是弊大于利，是应该提倡还是禁止。 说明利弊型议论文万能黄金模板 ①About whether .（话题）Students have different opinions. ②On the one hand,some people think .（原因一）Also .（原因二）But on the other hand,the others are （观点）as it .（原因一）Moreover, .（原因二）／But on the other hand,the others are （观点）because firstly （原因一）Secondly, .（原因二）Most importantly of all, .（原因三） ③I think .（我的观点） 模板内容要点 ①引出话题 ②对不同的态度进行阐述并分析原因 ③总结自己的观点 注： 模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。 必备词汇与套用句型 必备亮点词汇
经典套用句型 闪亮篇首句 (1) There is a heated discussion about...关....讨论很激烈。 (2) ..has brought us much convenience along with much inconvenience.....给我们带来了方便的同时，还带来了不便。 (3) ..has raised hot discussion. ....已经引起了人们的热议。 ( 4) ..has its advantages and disadvantages, just like everything does. 和所有东西一样，...也有它的优点和缺点。 出彩篇中句 (1) There are three advantages in/of... (某事物/现象)有三个优点。 (2) The first advantage of.. is that... (某事物/现象的)第一个优点..... (3) ... provide convenience for us in life. (莱物)能为我们的生活提供便利。 ( 4) With the help of.... our life can be much better and more convenient.....帮助下，我们的生活可以更加幸福和便利。 (5) In spite of the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.尽管有缺点，它还是有对应的优点。 (6) Nothing can be compared with... in terms of..在(某方面)，很少有东西能...媲美。. (7).. has a positive impact on people's life ..人们的生活起到一种积极的作用。 (8) sth. exerts a favorable influence on people' s life.某物对人们的生活产生了有利的影响。 (9) .. is playing an increasingly important role in people' s lives.....在人们的生活中起着越来越重要的作用。 (10) However, ... its negative side as well.但是，..也有其不好的一 面。 (11) On the contrary, its disadvantages can not be ignored, either.相反，它的缺点也是不能被忽视的。 (12) Nevertheless, it still has some drawbacks.但是它还是有一些缺陷的。 ( 13) Just like everything has two sides, .a.. has many disadvantages.正如每个事物都有两面性一样，..也有很多缺点。 (14) However, by doing so, we may cause some problems.然而，这么做的话，我们可能会引发一些问题。 (15) Nonetheless, it's sometimes blamed for its obvious defects.但是，它有时候会因一些明显的缺陷而受到指责。 (16) As the proverb goes that every coin has is two sides... is no exception.俗话说硬币都是有两面的，......也不例外。 (17) However is negative aspects are also evident. To begin with ...To make matters worse,...Wort of all,....然而，它的不足之处也是很明显的。首先，..... 更糟的是，...... (18) The side effects...have exerted on human beings can be seen as follows. Firstly...Secondly, . In addition, .....对人类产生的副作用如下所示。其一，.....其.二,.. ....此外...... 精彩篇尾句 (1) From where I stand, I think its advantages carry more weight than its disadvantages.从我的立场来看，我认为它的优点大于它的缺点。 (2) Anyway, I still believe.. more advantages than disadvantages. 不管怎样，，我们....的优点比缺点多。 (3) But for me, 1 think it has more positive sides than its negative sides. 对我来说，我认为它的积极面比消极面更多。 ( 4 ) From the comparison between these positive and negative effects, we should take it reasonably. 通过这些积极面和消极面的对比，我们要理智地对待它。 (5 ) Therefore, we should take it seriously. 因此我们应该要认真对待它。 ( 6) In my view, we should make full use of its advantages and reduce its side effects.在我看来，我们要充分利用它的优点，降低它的副作用。 模板范文演练 （常州）上周某班同学就“音乐美术是否应该纳入中考”展开了相关讨论，同学们各抒己见。假如你是该班同学，请你根据下表的提示内容，结合你自己对此事的看法，用英语给校报写一篇短文。
注意： 1.所写短文必须包括表中的提示内容，并作适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 4.词数不少于90,短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Last week,we held a discussion about whether Music and Art should enter the Entrance Examination for the High School. Students have different opinions. 万能模板套用分析 首先，引出话题，点明写作目的。（已给出）话题 其次，围绕话题阐述不同观点。论述 最后，表达自己的观点。自己观点 满分范文 Last week, we held a discussion about whether Music and Art should enter the Entrance Examination for the High School.Students have different opinions. On the one hand,some students are against this idea because they think there are too many subjects to prepare in the exam.① Also,they need to make more efforts in the exams.But on the other hand, the others are in favor of(短语优先原则。）this idea as it can help students pay more attention to studying Music and Art.Moreover(一二三原则，使用了过渡词。），it can help students develop all-round skills like how to appreciate the art.② I think it is reasonable to add Music and Art in the Entrance Examination for the High School as it provides an opportunity for students to show their talents in a different way.(句式多变原则，think后为省略that的宾语从句，宾语从句中又包含了as引导的原因状语从句。）③ 你也可以这样表达 ①On the one hand,having to prepare too many subjects for the exam, some students are against this idea. ②What's more,students can develop all-round skills like how to appreciate the art by studying Music and Art. ③As far as I am concerned,adding Music and Art in the Entrance Examination for the High School is reasonable because it allows students to show their talents in a different way. 范文译文 上周，我们开展了关于“音乐和美术是否应该纳入中考”的讨论。学生们持不同的意见。 一方面，一些学生反对这个想法，因为他们认为有太多科目要备考。其次，他们需要在考试中付出更多的努力。但另一方面，另一些学生赞成这个想法，因为这样学生们就能更注重音乐和美术的学习。还有，它能帮助学生培养全方位的技能，像如何欣赏艺术。 在我看来，把音乐和美术纳入中考是合理的，因为它们能为学生提供一个以不同方式展现他们才能的机会。 热点话题满分叙事记叙文必背 假如你是阳光中学的李华，每周五下午你校开设校本必修课(required course)与选修课(elective course),请介绍必修课Travel of Science, 根据个人情况选择一门选修课并说明理由；同时，对你的选择的课程提出建议。
要求： 1. 所写内容必须包括必修课及一门选修课的所有信息； 2. 对你所选择的一门选修课说明理由，并对其提出建议； 3. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】 这篇作文要求我们对学校周五下午安排的必修课和选修课程进行介绍。审题可知，短文应使用一般现在时，第一人称为主来叙述。内容应包括以下几个方面：首先介绍必修课程Travel of science，题目中利用表格的形式展示了这个课程的主要内容、老师、上课的时间、地点以及小提示，学生们根据表格用正确的英语表达出来即可；接下来应根据个人情况，从表格中提供的两门选修课中选择一个，阐述自己的理由，并对该课程提出一些建议。这一部分需要学生们展开想象，结合自己的实际生活，补充具体的内容，再用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：首先短文应包括题目中要求的所有内容，不能遗漏要点，而且注意分清层次和结构，使叙述清晰、完整、有条理。合理安排各部分内容，主次分明。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、表达自然。 【参考范文】 Every Friday afternoon, our school offers required and elective courses. Travel of science is a required course. We can learn about some scientists and their inventions. I think it will be interesting. The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture. So you mustn't miss it. The course is from 2:30 p.m. to 3:15 p.m. in the school hall. You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points. There are two elective courses, Photography and Gardening. I would like to choose the former because I like taking photos. I think I can learn more skills in the class. The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter. So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other. I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors. 【名师点评】 这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了学校开设的校本必修课程，并从两个选修课中选择了自己喜欢的一个，介绍了自己选择这门课程的原因，并对该课程提出了自己的建议。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，符合题目要求，没有遗漏要点。叙述清晰、有条理，理由充分、合情理。提出的建议也比较中肯，符合该情景。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构符合英语的表达习惯，短文中用到了简单句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、被动语态等多种句式和结构，增强了文章的表现力。文中较好的短语和句式有We can learn about some scientists and their inventions.、The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture.、You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points、The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter.、 So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other.、 I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.等等。 现在越来越多的学生使用“作业帮”这个APP 来搜查他们不会做的题目。对此，不同的人有不同的看法。请根据以下文字的提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。
要求： 1. 80－100 词。（开头的首句已给出，不计算在词数内） 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息，否则，不予评分。 参考词汇：convenient方便的，便利的 pretend to do...假装做…… think independently独立思考 Today, more and more students are using the App zuoyebang. However, different people have different ideas about it. Some people think ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】 这篇作文要求我们对介绍不同人对“作业帮”这个应用软件的看法，并联系实际，发表自己的观点。题目中利用表格的形式，列出了写作的主要内容，审题可知，短文应包括以下几个部分：作业帮的优点、缺点以及个人观点。可以分为三段分别进行叙述，各自的理由在表格中都已呈现，学生们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。最后一部分内容则需要学生们联系自己的实际生活，发挥想象力，自己来补充适当的内容。文章应以一般现在时、第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在作文中，不能遗漏要点。可以根据表达需要适当发挥，使文章内容更加充实、完整，但需要注意合理性，要紧贴题目要求和文章主旨。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译表格内容，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复合结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。 【参考范文】 Today, more and more students are using the APP zuoyebang. Different people have different ideas about it. Some people think it’s useful. The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time. It’s easy and convenient for them. They can study at home. They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying. However, others don’t think so. They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games. They don’t want to think independently, but only copy the answers. They don’t care about their studying at all. It’s a waste of time. I think it’s good for students who are hard-working. They can study better. But for students who don’t want to study, it’s very bad. 【名师点评】 这是一篇优秀是作文，短文作者根据题目要求，把人们对“作业帮”这个应用软件的不同看法进行了介绍，并在最后发表了自己的观点。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容之间层次清晰，叙述有条理，三段式的作文，一目了然，每一段的主题也很明确。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，语言得体。句子结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。除简单句结构外，短文里还使用了and连接的并列句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句等复合句，以及动词不定式、动名词等非谓语动词结构。短文中较好的句型有The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time.、They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying.、They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games.、I think it’s good for students who are hard-working等。 文章讨论了许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章的最后指出：“We need to judge people by what they do, not what they look like.” 你同意文章最后提出的观点吗？对此观点你有何看法？请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法，阐述理由，并举例说明。 写作要点： I. Your opinion (agree/ disagree /…)； 2. Reasons (looks, personality品性， ability...)； 3. An example (yourself/ a person around you/ a famous person/…). 要求： 1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 如举自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数不少于80。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】 这是一篇要求根据文章中许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章最后提出判断一个人应该根据他做了什么，而不是根据一个人的外貌来判断，对这一观点提出自己的看法。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 【参考范文】 范文1 I agree with the opinion. Compared with looks, personality and ability are more important. Because we can’t change our looks easily, but we can decide and control what we do. Thnaks to the kind and hard-working people, our society is becoming better and better. For example, Ma Yun, a well-known businessman, doesn’t look handsome, but he created Alibaba which has changed our lifestyle and made our life more convenient. He has been doing so much for our society that we all admire him. Because of his contribution to our society, we even think he looks so cool. So let’s try our best to do more useful things for our society and pay less attentionto our looks. 范文2 In my opinion, I think we need to judge people by both what they do and what they look like. A person's personality and ability are very important, but for some jobs, looks are also important, such as an actor or an actress, a waiter or a waitress, or even a teacher. Because it's enjoyable to see a good-looking person. For example, my teachers in my class all teach very well, and they are kind and helpful. All of us like them. But the most popular teacher is my English teacher, because she looks really beautiful. She dresses herself up every day and always has a smile on her face. So let's try our best to improve our ability, personality and looks. 据了解，为了进一步引导中学生积极参加体育锻炼，提高身体素质，襄阳市教育主管部门正在研究制定有关“中考”体育考试的改革方案( the plan)，考虑在原有项目的基础上增加篮球、排球或足球，总分(the score)也由30分增加至50分。作为一名参加过体育“中考”的学生，你对这样的改革持什么样的态度。请根据写作要点提示，用英语写一篇短文表述你的观点。 1．要点提示： (l)观点明确（要么赞成，要么反对）： (2)理由充分（可针对增加考试的项目和调整的分值，也可只选其一。限三条理由）； (3)给出建议（围绕你的观点提出一条合理化建议）。 2．注意事项： (l)字数：90词左右： (2)行文应连贯流畅； (3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】 这是一篇给材料作文。襄阳市教育主管部门正在研究制定有关“中考”体育考试的改革方案，考虑在原有项目的基础上增加篮球、排球或足球，总分(the score)也由30分增加至50分。作为一名参加过体育“中考”的学生，你对这样的改革持什么样的态度。要求根据写作要点提示，用英语写一篇短文表述自己的观点。文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。 【参考范文】 In my opinion, I agree with the reform plan of “high school entrance examination” physical education examination. It is reported that most young people are getting unhealthy. Without regular exercise, students are getting weaker and weaker. If the total score of 'high school entrance examination' sports is increased, Both teachers and students will undoubtedly attach great importance to physical education, and it’s easy to imagine the phenomenon that PE is always taken away will never be seen. Students will be healthier and more energetic in their study. It is helpful to improve students' comprehensive ability and quality. I think every school should make a plan to cultivate students' interest in sports so as to improve students' physical quality. 是否应该帮助陌生人 最近，你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的看法如何?根据所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题，写一篇短文。
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3）词数：100左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 参考词汇：美德virtue Should We Help Strangers? Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions． 参考范文： Should We Help Strangers? Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions. Some think we should try to help strangers． Helping others is a virtue，and helping others is helping ourselves．We may come across some trouble and need others' help some day．If everyone isn't willing to help us just because we are strangers to them，it's hard to imagine what our world will be like. However，some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble．Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness． In my opinion，we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help，but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble．If everyone tries a little kindness，our world will be full of love. 网购 Advantages:方便（convenient）；24小时营业；不用排队 参考范文： Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It is a new way of shopping. Many things are offered and wait for your choosing. Convenience is the most important advantage. You can buy anything as you like. You don’t have to queue with other shoppers. Meanwhile, it is often open for 24 hours a day. However, there are many disadvantages about shopping online. You can’t actually see the real products. So you may be cheated easily. Also, many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping. |
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