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2020年2月13日 | 雅思写作考试解析(难度不大)

 雅思月计划 2022-07-15 发布于四川

中国大陆2月考试全部都取消了,但是我们对于亚太考区的解析不会停。

最近几天陆续有1月18日考试的同学延迟出分。其实这天的大作文极容易容易偏题,但这位同学仍然写出了7分的佳作。如果仔细看看这位同学✍🏻️写作月计划✍🏻️学习的认真程度,你便一点不会惊讶她达到的高度。


亚太考试题目

Task 1 : Bar chart

Task 2: Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(重复2015年12月12日大陆考试题目)

各位同学请看,这是最近✍🏻️写作月计划✍🏻️其中一天的练习题目,虽然不是完全一样,但相似度也可以算是九成以上了,范文中的写作思路可以完全套用,词句表达有很多可以直接使用,没有任何违和感。👇

题目难点:

1. 该题包含比较关系,比较的两个对象:reading stories in books和watching TV or playing computer games都需要回应到;

2. 题目中有一个人物限定children。

参考观点(只是可能的答案中的一种)

Introduction: I tend to agree.

Body-1. 读书对孩子的读写能力提升比电子设备更好。

-Books, especially those written by famous writers, are better in word choice and grammar than most TV programs.

-When reading a book, readers can read at their own pace. (stop when they do not have a clear understanding, inspire deeper understanding on written material.)

By contrast, TV programs attract viewers to changing pictures.

Body-2: 读书比看电视更能培养小孩的想象能力。

-Readers have to imagine what they have read by themselves and there is no restriction. For example, when we read a description of the geographical features of New Zealand, we can imagine the fantastic scenario even though we have not visited this country.

-When watching TV or playing computer games, audiences obtain information in a passive way because they see the vivid pictures created by others.

Body-3: 看电视或玩游戏比看书容易使孩子的听口能力得到锻炼。

-With simultaneous visual and audio input, people are constantly exposed to the authentic language context. 

-By repeating and imitating what the speaker on the screen narrates, people could speak more accurately and fluently.

By contrast, reading stories in books 就不会有这方面的提升。

In conclusion, I believe reading can better help us develop our creativity if we select valuable books to read, but in terms of linguistic ability, watching TV is as important.

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