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今日写作考题 Task 1: Pie charts（悉尼的五个方面的用水比例） Task 2: Some people think that individuals are more and more dependent on each other. Others believe we are more and more independent. Discuss both views and give your opinion.（2017年大陆旧题重复） 题目分析： 1. 今天的小作文原题命中，是非常特殊的带时间（1997和2007年）的饼状组合图表，无论是在新东方的面授课还是在雅思写作月计划，Shark 都一定会讲到这种特殊的图表，因为它既可以作为静态图写，又可以作为动态图写，但动态和静态图表的写作侧重点是不一样的，我专门强调过它们的区别，同学们切不可写混了。
2. 大作文是非常典型的 argument 类型，难度在于题目比较抽象，同学们在写的时候要注意避免假大空，写出细节丰富饱满的文章，下面这篇范文的细节体现非常好，大家可以参考学习。 参 考 范 文 (来源于网络) People have different views about whether we are more or less dependent on others nowadays. In my view, modern life forces us to be more independent than people were in the past. There are two main reasons why it could be argued that we are more dependent on each other now. Firstly, life is more complex and difficult, especially because the cost of living has increased so dramatically. For example, young adults tend to rely on their parents for help when buying a house. Property prices are higher than ever, and without help it would be impossible for many people to pay a deposit and a mortgage. Secondly, people seem to be more ambitious nowadays, and they want a better quality of life for their families. This means that both parents usually need to work full-time, and they depend on support from grandparents and babysitters for child care. However, I would agree with the view that people are more independent these days because it is more convincing. In most countries, families are becoming smaller and more dispersed, which means that people cannot count on relatives as much as they used to. We also have more freedom to travel and live far away from our home towns. For example, many students choose to study abroad instead of going to their local university, and this experience makes them more independent as they learn to live alone. Another factor in this growing independence is technology, which allows us to work alone and from any part of the world. In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that people now depend on each other more, my own view is that we are more independent than ever. |
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