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读后续写极简法：阅读原文，圈出关键词，然后在续写中采用词族词、反义词、同义词等重复关键词，确保情节基本与原文契合。 2021常州卷题目： 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文. At first glance she looked like any other old woman, plodding along in the snow, alone,neglected,head bowed. Ayoung couple, smiling,talking,laughing, arms loaded with Christmas presents,took no notice of the old woman. Amother with two small children hurried by, on their way to grandmother’s house.Like many others, they took no notice, either. If these people had noticed,they would have seen that the old woman wore no shoes. She walked bare foot in the ice and snow. With both hands the old woman gathered her worn button-less overcoat at the collar to keep out the wind. She stopped and stood bent and bowed at the bus stop. A red and blue scarf coveringher head, she waited for the downtown bus. A gentleman carrying an important looking briefcase waited near her,not too closely. After all,she could have something contagious (传染的). A teenage girl also waited for the bus. She glanced repeatedly at the old woman’s feet, but said nothing. The bus arrived and the old woman slowly, painfully boarded. She sat on the sideways seat, just behind the driver.The gentleman and the teenage girl hurried to the back of the bus.A little boy pointed at the old woman, “Look,Mother,that old ladyis bare foot.” The embarrassed mother slapped his hand down. 'Don’t point at people, Andrew. It’s not polite topoint.” She looked out of the window. “She must have sons or daughters,” a lady in a fur coat suggested, “Her children should be ashamed ofthemselves.' She felt morally superior,because she took good care of her mother. A man seated near the middle of the bus steadied the bag of gifts on her lap. “Don’t we pay enough taxes to handle situations like this?” he said to a friend seated beside him. “People have to learn to save theirmoney,” a well-dressed young college man added. “If that old woman had saved when she was young,she wouldn’t be suffering now. It’s her own fault.” And all these vain(虚荣的)people beamed with satisfaction that they had all given such deep analysis,totally ignoring the old woman who badly needed a pair of shoes immediately. 注意：续写词数应为150左右 A vain businessman felt offended by those talking without acting and reached into his wallet. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ At the next stop, a young man wearing expensive, new, brand-name shoes boarded the bus, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 阅读原文和段首句，圈出关键词： the old woman (bare-foot, no shoes) 多个passengers （vain, ignore ) a vain businessman， wallet a young man with brand-name shoes bus ice and snow 续写： |
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