随着一批批轻症患者治愈出院，14所方舱医院陆续关舱。 面对这样的句式，觉得更多是在积累表达。 于是，我查阅平行文本积累：轻症患者、治愈出院、方舱医院 几个词组的对应表达。 轻症患者 1 However, the increased risk was not zero in those experiencing mild COVID. 但轻症感染者血栓形成的风险也有所增加。 2 Those with only a mild infection still showed a three-fold risk of DVT and a seven-fold risk of pulmonary embolism. 轻症患者的深静脉血栓形成风险增加3倍，而肺栓塞风险增加7倍。 （如上取自每日新闻播报） 分析: 这两句都是在描述轻症患者，都是在讲COVID轻症患者血栓形成的风险。第一句侧重过程，第二句侧重结果，用词略有不同。 3 A report published in February by the World Health Organization, based on preliminary data, suggested that in mild cases the median recovery time from Covid-19 is roughly two weeks from the onset of symptoms, and in severe or critical cases about three to six weeks. 世界卫生组织二月份发布的一份基于初步数据的报告显示，新冠肺炎轻症患者的中位康复时间为出现症状后两周左右，重症患者的康复时间约为3到6周。 （取自卫报） 分析：用词简洁，地道表达。 4 对轻症患者及早干预，尽可能在初期得以治愈，大幅度降低转重率。 Early medical intervention has made it possible to have patients with mild symptoms cured without delay, thus significantly reducing the risk that their condition might worsen. （取自《抗击新冠肺炎疫情的中国行动》白皮书（双语全文）） 分析：语境相似，可以借用。 总结: 轻症患者，一般可以表示为如下方式，可根据具体语境选用。 those experiencing mild COVID Those with only a mild infection mild cases patients with mild symptoms 治愈出院 1经过全疆上下努力，新疆地区826例确诊病例全部治愈出院，无一人死亡。 Thanks to concerted efforts, all 826 confirmed COVID-19 cases in Xinjiang have been discharged from hospital after treatment, without even a single death. （取自新华社：关于新疆的24个谎言与真相 双语全文） 分析：语境相似，可取用，after treatment 是用短语的结构来强调治愈后出院 2截至2020年5月31日24时，31个省、自治区、直辖市和累计报告确诊病例83017例，累计治愈出院病例78307例，累计死亡病例4634例， As of 24:00 of May 31, 2020, a cumulative total of 83,017 confirmed cases had been reported on the Chinese mainland, 78,307 infected had been cured and discharged from hospital, and 4,634 people had died. 分析：语境相似，可取用，cured and discharged 两动词用and连接来表示先治愈后出院。 3 2月18日，全国新增治愈出院病例数超过新增确诊病例数，确诊病例数开始下降。 February 18: Nationwide, the daily number of newly cured and discharged coronavirus patients exceeded that of newly confirmed cases, and the number of confirmed cases began to drop. 4 2月19日，武汉市新增治愈出院病例数首次大于新增确诊病例数。 February 19: For the first time in Wuhan, newly cured and discharged cases outnumbered newly confirmed ones. 分析：第3句和第4句语境与原句不同。可以用来积累类似的表达。 （以上取自《抗击新冠肺炎疫情的中国行动》白皮书（双语全文）） 总结： 治愈出院，一般可以有两种方式表达： be cured and discharged from hospital be cured and discharged from hospital 其他的积累： 新增治愈出院病例： newly cured and discharged coronavirus patients newly cured and discharged cases 方舱医院 方舱医院这个词组的译法，在各种文件和报道里分别译作： temporary hospitals temporary treatment centers makeshift hospitals cabin hospitals 把词汇、词组解决后，最后得到的译文长这样： As batches of mild cases were cured and discharged from hospitals, 14 temporary treatment centers were closed in succession. 你会如何翻译这句话呢？期待留言~
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