注意：词数80-100，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。It's my great honor to have a (the) chance to make a speech here. My favorite saying is "Nothing is difficult to the man who will try”, (.) Now, let me (please allow me to) tell you about my thought and experience. 【或者，Now, please allow me to share my thoughts and experience with you.】In my opinion, it （可改为The saying) is trying to show the importance of having a try(In my opinion, trying is an attitude, is an important thing. We cannot get any success without a try!) We will not succeed （We cannot get any success）if we don't keep trying. Last year, I joined a swimming team to learn to swim. (语义重复了。加入游泳队不是学习游泳，难道还学习跳舞？I joined a swimming team last year.或， I joined a team to learn how to swim.)I was really afraid of the cold water at first and I refused to get into the swimming pool. I thought it was so difficult for me to jump into the cold water that I even wanted to give up. But my coach told me that:" Nothing is difficult to the man who will try ! kid,(Kid,you) You can just have a try . After all, the fruit can't be sweet until you taste it. "( you get to learn by trial and error.)I was completely touched. So I just made a deep breath and jumped into the pool. Although I felt cold at that moment.I also felt lucky to beat the enemy in my heart. （Although I felt cold at that moment，I felt lucky to beat the enemy in my heart. ）The little try（a modest attempt） Keep trying led me to the road of success.All in all, trying is the most important. Just remember "Nothing is difficult to the man who will try”, and I believe that all of you will(can) achieve your dreams!
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