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本文只是提供一个简单的解题思路和模式，有了思路只是让你的脑中有个大致的框架，具体的写还是得依赖平时的背诵积累。俗话说巧妇难为无米之炊，没有一定的知识储备是很难写出上乘的佳作。好了，言归正传，上干货： 读后续写解题一般步骤： 通读原文读的速度要快，不要盯着无关紧要的生词不放。我们需要的是读懂原文的大意和作者想要表达的主题，没必要在太细的地方浪费时间。（如果看不懂原文，请好好背单词！） 精读原文最后一段 精读最后一段是因为续写第一段需要承接最后一段，要分析最后一段的场景和人物以及事件发展的走向，看是否出现了矛盾冲突，若出现了矛盾冲突，则续写第一段就围绕矛盾冲突的解决来写。若没有出现，则可在续写第一段制造问题冲突即事件的高潮，然后续写第二段解决问题冲突。 分析续写的两个首句续写的两个首句可以确定续写第一段的写作内容，例如2023年福州5月的质检卷： “I am an editor for an art magazine.” Mr. Finn continued. With the payment from the magazine, Jim could not hide his joy. 原文讲述了家境贫寒但喜欢画画的Jim想要成为艺术家改变家人的生活。他放学后去农场帮忙，以便存钱买绘画工具。但不幸的是，妈妈患了重病，家里的钱不够，Jim拿出自己存的钱。一天他一边思考该怎么做，一边无意识的在地上画出了妈妈的肖像画，这一幕被Mr. Finn看见了。 在构思情节的时候可以用倒推法：从续写第二句可知，续写第一段最后应该是杂志社给了Jim的一笔钱，联想Jim在地上的画可知编辑Finn是看中了Jim的绘画才能，然后让Jim为杂志社画一幅画。所以第一段的情节可以是：Finn介绍了自己——看中了Jim的绘画天赋——邀请Jim为杂志社画画——支付Jim绘画的酬劳。 续写第二段首句是Jim收到了杂志社的酬劳，难掩内心的喜悦。结合原文的细节以及正能量的结局可知，Jim用这笔钱支付了母亲的医疗费，余下的钱买了他向往已久的绘画工具，最后结合原文第一段点题：Jim通过画画改变了家人的生活。第二段的情节：得到报酬难掩喜悦——支付妈妈的医疗费——买绘画工具——通过画画改变生活。 下面附上2023福州5月质检的续写原题和参考答案： 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Jim dreams of becoming a famous artist to help lift his family from poverty. However, an illness in the family forces Jim to give up everything he worked so hard for. Jim used to draw skyline on the roof of the school building, with broken piece of pencil lead he’d found in a rubbish can. His drawing was close to perfect except for some color. His family lived from hand to mouth so Jim could only rely on himself. He had to help out on the local farm after school and saved some of the money for paints. One day Mom fell seriously ill and was rushed to hospital at once. While the rest of his family were still at the hospital waiting, Jim ran back home to get the household emergency money. But his heart sank when he saw the pitiful money. It’d never be enough to pay for Mom’s medical treatment. He ran into his bedroom and reached for his savings. “Goodbye, paints and brushes,” Jim said as he added his to the emergency money. One night on the way home, thinking of Mom in hospital he wanted to do something for her. He bent down beneath a streetlight and put his fingers in the dirt on the roadside. Before he knew it, he drew a portrait (肖像) of Mom. He found red dust and mixed it with mud to add shadow, then picked up some grass and turned it into some kind of paint. He used this to add definition around Mom’s nose, eyes and hair. When he was finished, Jim stood back up to study his work. The linework and shading were fine, but the colors… “It’s still no good,” Jim shook his head. “I disagree.” Jim turned around and found a stranger standing behind him. He gave Jim a friendly smile and introduced himself as Mr. Finn. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “I am an editor for an art magazine.” Mr. Finn continued. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the payment from the magazine, Jim could not hide his joy. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: “I’m the editor-in-chief for a local art magazine,” Mr. Finn continued.“I love what you’ve done here. Such an unusual choice of medium, but what an excellent result! This is a very exciting form of artistic expression, young man. With your permission, I’d like to use a photo of your work for the cover of our next issue.” Jim nodded before he figured out how much he would be paid. But he was sure that he would earn some money and help his mom. With the payment from the magazine, Jim could not hide his joy. Jim counted the bills Mr. Finn gave him several times on the way to the hospital. After he paid for Mom’s medical treatment, there was still some money left. Without hesitation, he rushed to the store to buy some painting tools and pigments. His heart almost burst with joy at the thought of being able to take care of his family through painting. |
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