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 2023高考英语I卷的读后续写告诉学生，无论做任何事情，无论喜欢还是不喜欢，只要用心投入去做，就会有意想不到的收获。不要轻易说不，不要轻易否定自己，给尝试一个机会，结果往往会出乎意料。Just do it ! 2023高考英语I卷的读后续写  阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest, I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did. So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail? His reply: “Because I love your stories. If you’re willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try. I chose Paul Revere’s horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse’s mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny, and unlikely to be anyone else’s choice. What did the horse think, as sped through the night? Did he get tired? Have doubts? Did he want to quit? I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like revere’s horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them. When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud and said, “Great. Now, write it again.” I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn’t win. I wouldn’t care. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I went to my teacher’ office after the award presentation. 词汇学习：  故事情节分析：
 写作内容分析： 1.根据所给的开头语，找出关键词： 第一句的关键词是the news；第二句的关键词是award presentation 和teacher's office. 2.根据关键词确定写作内容： 由关键词可知第一段写两个方面的内容： 1）消息是什么？获奖还是没获奖?选择不同，后面的内容就跟着不一样。一般而言，大多数考生都觉得是获奖的好消息。以及得知这个好消息后的心情感受。 2）颁奖典礼：可以写发表获奖感言。一带而过。主要是和下一段衔接自然。 第二段写颁奖之后，我来到老师的办公室，向老师表达感谢，以及我的感受。可以升华一下主题。Believe in yourself! Hard work eventually paid off! 以下是具体的写作语料
得知比赛的好消息的描写 1）My heart raced as my teacher handed me a letter. I held my breath as I read the words: “Congratulations! You have won first place in the writing contest!” 我的心跳加速，当我的老师递给我一封信时。当我读到字里行间的话语时，我屏住呼吸：“恭喜你！你在写作比赛中获得了第一名！” 2）I couldn’t believe my eyes. I read the letter again and again, trying to make sure that I wasn’t dreaming. 我简直不敢相信自己的眼睛。我一遍遍地读这封信，试图确定自己没有在做梦。 3）My heart was pounding with excitement as I realized that my hard work and dedication had paid off.当我意识到自己的努力和投入得到了回报时，我的心里充满了激动。 4）I jumped up and down, shouting with joy. My classmates and my teacher all gathered around me, congratulating me on my achievement. I felt like I was on top of the world. 我跳了起来，欢呼雀跃。我的同学和老师都聚集在我身边，祝贺我取得的成就。我感觉自己站在世界之巅。 
颁奖时场景的描写 1）As I stood on the stage waiting to receive my award, a rush of emotions flooded over me. 当我站在舞台上等待领奖时，一股情感涌上心头。 2）I felt a mix of nervousness, excitement, and gratitude all at once. 我感到紧张、兴奋和感激交织在一起。 3）The anticipation was almost unbearable as my heart pounded in my chest. 期待的心情几乎让我难以承受，我的心在胸膛里砰砰跳动。 4）When my name was finally called, I could hardly believe it. 当我的名字被叫出来时，我几乎无法相信。 5）Walking up to the podium, I felt a sense of pride and accomplishment wash over me. 走上讲台时，我感到一种自豪和成就感涌上心头。 6）Holding the award in my hand, I was filled with a deep sense of appreciation for all the hard work and dedication that had led me to this moment. 拿着奖杯，我深深地感激所有辛勤付出所带来的这一刻。 7）It was truly a moment that I will never forget, and I will always be grateful for the recognition and validation that came with it. 这是我永远不会忘记的时刻，我将永远感激这份认可和肯定。
来到老师办公室的场景描写 1）When I entered my teacher’s office, I could see the pride in her eyes. She congratulated me and gave me a warm hug. 当我走进老师的办公室时，我能看到她眼中的自豪。她祝贺我并给了我一个温暖的拥抱。 2）I couldn’t help but feel grateful for her guidance and support throughout my journey. 我不禁感激她在整个旅程中给我的指导和支持。 3）We chatted about my future plans and aspirations, and she gave me some invaluable advice. 我们聊了聊我的未来计划和抱负，她给了我一些宝贵的建议。 4）It was then that I realized that the award wasn’t just a recognition of my hard work, but also a love and help I had received from my teacher. 那时我意识到，这个奖项不仅是对我的努力的认可，也是老师对我关心和帮助的一份爱意。 5）As I left her office, I couldn’t help but feel a sense of excitement for what the future held. 当我离开她的办公室时，我情不自禁的憧憬未来。 6）The award had given me the confidence to pursue my dreams and work even harder towards achieving my goals. 这个奖项给了我信心去追逐我的梦想，并更加努力地实现我的目标。 7）I knew that there would be challenges and setbacks along the way, but I was ready to face them head-on. 我知道路上会有挑战和挫折，但我准备直面它们。 参考范文 A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I was one of the winners. I couldn’t believe it. My heart was racing with excitement and my mind was filled with a sense of accomplishment. I had never been a winner in any competition before, and it was a big deal for me to have made it this far. As I stood on the stage waiting to receive my award, a rush of emotions flooded over me. Holding the award in my hand, I was filled with a deep sense of appreciation for all the hard work leading me to this moment. I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. Beaming with pride, she congratulated me and gave me a warm hug. I thanked her for pushing me to enter the contest. Without her encouragement, I would have never discovered my love for writing. I told her that I now enjoy writing and want to keep writing more stories. I had learned that hard work and perseverance could pay off. 几周后，当我几乎忘记了比赛的时候，消息终于传来了。我成为了获奖者之一。我简直不敢相信。我的心在激动地跳动，我的头脑充满了成就感。我以前从未在任何比赛中获胜过，而我能够走到这一步，对我来说是一件大事。当我站在舞台上等待领奖时，一股情感涌上心头。拿着奖杯，我深深地感激着自己为这一刻所做的所有努力。 颁奖典礼结束后，我去了我的老师办公室。她满怀自豪地祝贺我，并给了我一个温暖的拥抱。我感谢她推动我参加比赛。如果没有她的鼓励，我永远不会发现自己对写作的热爱。我告诉她，我现在喜欢写作，想继续写更多的故事。我也学到了努力和坚持一定会有回报。
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