【原】美文翻译：雨中求学

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（乡村随拍）

今天在孩子们的阅读上看到一篇美文，很想知道这么美的文字，用英语表达出来会是什么样？

先看看原文：

下雨了，天阴了，云低了，太阳躲起来了。

燕子掠过树梢，鱼儿跳出水面，蚂蚁交头接耳，说着悄悄话："要下雨啦，要下雨啦！快搬家！快搬家！"

不一会儿，滴答，滴滴答答……小雨点落下来了！它落在地面上，像敲小鼓；它掉在池塘里，逗得池水笑起朵朵花。抬头看天，小雨点连成一条条银线，被风一吹歪歪斜斜，像喝醉了酒，又像在跳舞。不一会儿，哗啦，哗啦哗啦……

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小雨点汇聚在一起，变成小溪，在地上流淌。它冲干净了石阶，洗干净了操场，那一条条的柏油马路，变得溜光发亮。

我们不怕雨，光着头，光着脚丫，追着雨花跑，有的手提凉鞋，有的披雨衣，有的挥动小棍，像一群小鸭……在雨中，我们上学去。

DeepL 翻译：

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It's raining, it's cloudy, the clouds are low, the sun is hiding.

Swallows swept over the treetops, fish jumped out of the water, and ants exchanged whispers: "It's going to rain, it's going to rain! Hurry up and move! Move it!"

Not long after, tick, tick, tick, tick ...... little raindrops fell! It fell on the ground, like playing a small drum; it fell in the pond, teasing the pond water to laugh up flowers. Looking up at the sky, the little raindrops are connected into a silver line, blown by the wind askew, like a drunk, and like dancing. Not long after, clatter, clatter clatter ......

The little raindrops gathered together and turned into a small stream, flowing on the ground. It washed clean the stone steps, washed clean the playground, that a tarmac road, became slippery and shiny.

We are not afraid of the rain, bare head, bare feet, chasing the rain flowers run, some handheld sandals, some cloak mackintosh, some waving a small stick, like a group of ducklings ...... in the rain, we go to school.

GPT翻译：

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It's raining, the sky is cloudy, the clouds are low, and the sun is hiding. 

Swallows skim over the treetops, fish jump out of the water, ants whisper to each other, saying quietly, "It's going to rain, it's going to rain! Move quickly! Move quickly!" 

In no time, drip, drip, drop... the raindrops start to fall! They fall on the ground, like tapping drums; they fall into the pond, making the water burst into laughter like blooming flowers. Looking up at the sky, the raindrops form silver threads, which sway and dance crookedly when blown by the wind, as if drunk and dancing. In no time, splash, splash, splash... 

The raindrops gather together and turn into small streams, flowing on the ground. They clean the stone steps, wash the playground, and the asphalt roads become shiny and clean. 

We are not afraid of rain, with bare heads and bare feet, chasing after the raindrops. Some carry sandals, some wear raincoats, some wave their little sticks, like a flock of little ducks... In the rain, we go to school.

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