例题：
Directions:
Read the following excerpt from an article and write an essay. In your essay, you
should explain whether or to what extent you agree with the author. Support your
argument with reasons and relevant examples.
Write your answer in 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
Studies in the US. and the UK. consistently show that children have lost the right
to wander. This is why many of our youth turn to technology. They are not addicted to
the computer; they’re addicted to interaction, and being around their friends. Children
and especially teenagers, don’t want to only socialize with parents and siblings; they
want to play with their peers. That''s how they make sense of the world. And we’ve
robbed them of that opportunity. We’re raising our children in captivity and they turn
to technology to socialize, learn and relax. Why are we blaming the screens?
第一段框架汇总
This is a simple but enlightening excerpt from an article, in which what the author
intends to convey is that材料观点 . I completely agree with this idea.
第二段 :分析论证段 (分析原因 )
Theoretically, several reasons may trigger my decision, but the following two are
of great importance. On the top of list is that +原因一 . In addition, there is the other
point that no one can ignore. It is universally admitted that +原因二 . + 例子
常见原因：
① With the improvement of people’s income and living standards in China, people in
mounting numbers can have enough money to … .
② The governments give priority to the development of the traditional festivals， which ..
③ Any behavior has profound economic motivations, and so does the performance of
the character in the drawing.
④ The current state of the affair depicted by the author may have been encouraged,
though not justified, by the lack of legal penalty.
⑤ The general public have failed to realize the importance of……and a big part of their
attention has been attracted by the so-called “great events”.
⑥ Our education tends to stress test-taking and mechanical learning over the ability to
confront realistic problems, including the problem reflected in the picture(s) /the
problem that问题具体内容
⑦ It goes without saying that anyone who is in possession of the quality is likely to
overcome the obstacles of life and achieve their destination.
⑧ 主题 will facilitate the growth of a society, thereby making it more likely to be the
winner in the modern competitive world.
例子：
1.A case in point is me. As a senior who is preparing for the national entrance
examination for postgraduates, I don''t have time for face-to-face communication. As a
result, I tend to release my stress by listening to music, chatting with friends or playing
games on smartphones.
2.Here''s a classic example; Sir Isaac Newton supposedly discovered gravity through
the fall of an apple. Apples had been falling in many places for centuries and thousands
of people had seen them fall. However, Newton was the only one to ponder over the
seemingly common phenomenon because he had the courage to admit uncertainty.
第三段 :总结预测
(1) Taking into account what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the
conclusion that the current situation will continue in the forthcoming years.（相对通
用）
（ 2） According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take steps to reverse this
evil trend. Of all the steps, mass media tends to function essentially in the job. Only in
this way can we resolve this problem and embrace a bright future.（问题）
（ 3） According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take steps to maximize
its positive effects and minimize the disadvantages. Of all the steps, mass media tends
to function essentially in the job. Only in this way can we embrace a bright future.（有
利有弊）
（ 4） According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take steps to carry forward
the quality. Of all the steps, mass media tends to function essentially in the job. Only in
this way can we make the best of this quality and embrace a bright future.（优秀品质）
全文汇总
This is a simple but enlightening excerpt from an article, in which what the author
intends to convey is that the lack of the right to wander and face-to-face interaction can
contribute to the addition to Internet. I completely agree with this idea.
Theoretically, several reasons may trigger my decision, but the following two are
of great importance. On the top of list is that in spite of the improvement of people’s
income and living standards, children nowadays are facing the increasing amount of
homework and more and more study pressure, which might lead to lack of the right to
wander and the insufficiency of peer interaction. In addition, there is the other point
that no one can ignore. It is universally admitted that the governments give priority to
the development of communications industry, which has led to more and more
convenient communication software. A case in point is me. As a senior who is preparing
for the national entrance examination for postgraduates, I don''t have time for face-to-
face communication. As a result, I tend to release my stress by listening to music,
chatting with friends or playing games on smartphones.
Taking into account what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the
conclusion that the current situation will continue in the forthcoming years.
材料作文 （练习）
52.Directions:
Read the following excerpt from an article and write an essay. In your essay, you should
explain whether or to what extent you agree with the author. Support your argument
with reasons and relevant examples.
Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
Many of us, whatever our field of work, fear that showing uncertainty can damage our
image—and we may compensate by expressing overconfidence in an attempt to win
trust. But in many situations people are willing to trust those who can admit they don''t
have a definitive answer. Recent studies found that communicating uncertainty and
even admitting our mistakes is not harmful and can even be beneficial to trustworthiness.
So, failure in “expertise” can be compensated by higher integrity and benevolence.
When communicating uncertainty in a transparent way, we are perceived as less biased
and willing to tell the truth.
范文：
This is a simple but enlightening excerpt from an article, in which what the author
intends to convey is that communicating uncertainty and even admitting one''s mistakes
is not harmful and can even be beneficial. I completely agree with this idea.
Theoretically, several reasons may trigger my decision, but the following two are
of great importance. On the top of list is that it goes without saying that anyone who is
in possession of the quality is likely to overcome the obstacles of life and achieve their
destination. In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore. It is universally
admitted that admitting uncertainty and mistakes will facilitate the growth of a society,
thereby making it more likely to be the winner in the modern competitive world. Here''s
a classic example; Sir Isaac Newton supposedly discovered gravity through the fall of
an apple. Apples had been falling in many places for centuries and thousands of people
had seen them fall. However, Newton was the only one to ponder over the seemingly
common phenomenon because he had the courage to admit uncertainty.
According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take steps to carry forward
the quality. Of all the steps, mass media tends to function essentially in the job. Only in
this way can we make the best of this quality and embrace a bright future.
其他 经典例证
1.When Ang Lee was poor, he was not envious of the rich, did not give up his career in
films and eventually became a famous film director.
2.Though born in a common and poor family, Obama finally became the American
president because of his firm belief, clear objective and constant efforts.
3.Sir Alexander Fleming had experimented with antibacterial substances(抗菌物质 ) for
nine years before he finally noticed the on a piece of cheese and consequently
discovered penicillin.
4.Even the best players miss goals and their shots are blocked much more frequently
than those they score. The point is that the players who score most are the ones who
take the most shots at the goal.
5.Helen Keller did not let the flower of her life wither away although the merciless
illness left her deaf and blind. Instead, she strived to learn knowledge and became a
master of 5 languages, famous writer and educator.
6.Madame Curie is the Nobel Prize winner of the world and a good teacher for her
daughter. She was curious about knowledge and calm about success, which provided a
good lesson to her daughter Irene and helped Irene win her own Nobel Prize.
7.Madame Curie, a world-renowned(世界知名的 ) female scientist, was awarded twice
the Noble Prize for Physics and Chemistry, two totally different research fields. If she
had stopped conducting further study, she would not have achieved the unusual success
in the history of science.
8.Sir Isaac Newton supposedly discovered gravity through the fall of an apple. Apples
had been falling in many places for centuries and thousands of people had seen them
fall. However, Newton was the only one to ponder over the seemingly common
phenomenon.
9.Yuan Longping, “the Father of Hybrid Rice”, once said, “Scientific research bears a
close resemblance(相似 ,相似之处 ) to high jump. When you just clear a height, another
new one is waiting for you. Therefore, you have to keep on jumping, otherwise it won’t
take long time to fall behind.” This attitude stimulates his relentless efforts to scale(攀
登 ) new heights in scientific research of hybrid rice.
10.Abraham Lincoln seemed like a complete failure in his early life but he refused to
accept this fate. He made constant efforts to improve himself. Finally, he became an
almost perfect person and was elected as American president.
11.Thomas Edison was not frightened by obstacles and others’ failures. He found
inspiration from previous researches and then invented the electrical lamp(电灯 ).
12.Chinese Women Volleyball Team, the most famous sports group in China, had fallen
into the lowest point since 2004 Athens Olympic Games. However, its members had
never given up and insisted on extremely hard training. As a result, the team won the
champion in Rio(里约 ) Olympics in 2016.
13.American Track and Field Team（美国田径队） , one of the best teams in the world,
who had won the golden prize of 400 meters relay race in 2004 Athens Olympic Games
and hoped to defend(捍卫 ) their success in 2008, failed just because of a minor mistake
of transferring sticks. Thus, it tells us a lesson that how important 品质 could be.
14.Joachim Loew, the coach of Germany Football League which is the winner of World
Cup in 2014, has said that the reasons of success of his team are that everyone has a
clear duty during the match and the members all do their utmost to fulfill the job.
15. As the saying goes, 品质 is strength. Chinese victory in the War of Resistance(抗
战 )can be attributed to such essential qualities as unity, diligence, perseverance, and so
forth, among which the quality of 品质 presented in the photo is indispensable/ of the
essence.
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