原文材料: When Thompson was very young, his parents died. He lived a poor life with his grandmother. She took good care of Thompson and he became understanding and kind. They lived in an old house. When it rained, the house leaked and it became a nightmare to them. Thompson wanted to put tiles(瓦片)on the house so that they could survive the rainy season and the cold winter. So Thompson started collecting disused tiles everywhere. One day, he came to a construction site about three miles from his house. Because the site was boarded up, he could only look around the outside of it. He took a stick and searched for something he could use as tiles. Suddenly, a tile appeared in front of him. He jumped for joy and rushed to pick up the tile. At that moment, a voice came from the construction site. A man with a helmet shouted, “What are you doing? Are you stealing something?” Thompson felt frightened and explained, “No, sir, I’m picking up rubbish. ”The man added, “Do you treat new tiles as rubbish? It seems that you are stealing something. Just drop what you are holding and get out of here. ” Thompson felt upset, but had no choice but to leave. The next day, Thompson looked around for tiles as usual. This time he came to a place where rubbish was piled up. As it happened, it was seen by the man who Thompson met at the construction site. Actually, the man’s name was David and he was an architect. He was curious about Thompson’s behaviour and wondered if he had misjudged him the day before. To find out what was going on, David chose to follow Thompson in silence. After an hour or so, David followed Thompson to the old house. He saw Thompson placing the tiles he had picked up on the dilapidated(破旧的roof. David felt sorry for Thompson and realized that he had misunderstood him. David started understanding Thompson’s reason for picking up the tiles. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 情节梳理: Para1⃣️David decided to help Thompson. 应该着重强调如何帮,为了帮助他,David 究竟做了什么?帮助他们修缮房屋。帮助的时机:Thompson 和外婆外出的时候 1⃣️内心情绪:内疚与坚定,想出主意; 2⃣️建筑师估计所需资料瓦片并设计草图并回到工地收集多余砖块🧱; 3⃣️分享给其他工友,并达成一致帮助他们; 4⃣️趁着Thompson和外婆不在家的下午完成了房屋的翻新:着重刻画如何翻修房屋的过程; 5⃣️烈日炎炎,虽然很辛苦,但一切都是值得的; 6⃣️没过多久工作完成,夕阳余晖落下。 Para2⃣️In the late afternoon,Thompson and his grandmother returned home. 1⃣️看到全新的房屋的内心活动和动作; 2⃣️疑惑究竟是谁做的这一切; 3⃣️发现纸条:歉意; 4⃣️二人见面:Thompson兴奋与感激;David道歉与愧疚; 5⃣️主题升华:赠人玫瑰,手留余香 仁慈与善良是时间最美好的东西。 下水文: |
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