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2024届高三英语一轮复习应用文写作1 申请信 个人信息 课件 |
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Personal Information——A Letter of Application高考英语应用文写作——如何写申请信近六年高考(新) 全国卷I真题回顾I. Topic-based Chunks1. apply for the voluntary job / app ly for the post of volunteer / apply to be a volunteer2. be q ualified for / be equal to3. have a big advantage over others4. h ave a good command of / have a great knowledge of / be profici ent in / get the hang of 5. rank first6. a good interpersonal rel ationship7. outgoing and energeticI. Topic-based Chunks8. have / develop a passion for .../be enthusiastic about.….9. be crazy abo ut / be keen on / be fascinated by10. be interested in.../have / show an interest in..11. have a preference for...12. have a gift for / have a talent for / be gifted in / be talented in13. be opt imistic about.../have a positive attitude towards ...14. have an urge to do sth. / have a strong desire to do sth.II. Topic-based Patterns1. the post of volunteer advertised in the school newspap er2. Learning you are recruiting volunteers to greet foreign stud ents3. contributing to my interaction with foreign friends5. have no difficulty / trouble in communicating with others in English6 . Having served the community as a volunteer for two years; which will enhance my confidence in the job9. making friends with teen agers of my age / who are the same age as me all over the worldII I. Topic-based Writing1.(1) Learning from the Internet that your summer camp is going to be held in Singapore, I am so interested in it that I''m writing to apply to participate in it(2) Having re ad the announcement you have posted on the Internet that your sum mer camp will be held in Singapore, I''m writing to apply to be a member of it 2. I am active and I''d like to take part in various activities 3. I have a good command of spoken English, thus makin g it easy for me to communicate with othersIII. Topic-based Writi ng4.(1)部分倒装:Not only can I gain some insight into their countries , but I can also spread the unique Chinese culture(2)主语从句:what at tracts me most is that I can tell students from other countries a bout China / share Chinese culture with others and learn a lot ab out their countries / exchange information about China and their countries through face-to-face communication5. live up to your ex pectations6. I do hope that I will be accepted as a member of you r summer camp / I do hope that I will be lucky enough to be accep ted as a member of your summer camp.III. Topic-based WritingStruc tureBeginningBodyEndingMain Points: Para. 1: I am writing to app ly to be a volunteer for …Para. 2: I have a good c ommand of English and Chinese; I have a good knowled ge of Chinese paintings; I can strengthen the friendship between China and England.Para. 3: I would app reciate it if …Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Hua, a middle sc hool student from China. I read the announcement of the summer ca mp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it . I know that you welcome students from different countri es and I would like to take part in it. I have been learning Engl ish for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I wil l be able to tell students from other countries about China and l earn about their countries as well. I hope I will be acce pted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your rep ly! Yours, Li Hua A Letter of ApplicationTopic: Applying to______ _________Perspective: _______Structure: ①Beginning: To show hi s _______②Body: To show his _______③Ending: To show his ___ ____Tense(s): __________Transitional expressions: _______ take part in a summer campFirst personintentionadvantageshopeSimple f uturePresent simpleandWhat is more评判标准(拿答题卡数行数,100字左右,写至最后一行不超行) 卷面书写不工整,降低一档分数及评卷标准第五档:13-15分(很好)覆盖所有内容要点,用了较多语法结构和词汇,有效使用连接成分,结构紧凑第四档:10-12分(好) 覆盖所有主要内容,语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,使用简单的连接成分第三档:7-9分(适当)有语法结构或词汇的错误,但不影响理解第二档:4-6分(较差)有语法结构或词汇的错误,但影响理解第一档:1-3分(差) 遗漏主要内容,写了无关紧要的内容Evaluation |
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