高考英语读后续写语篇练习灾难故事——值班护士在地震中奋力救出病人12Part 1题目呈现3续写原文When I worked as a nu
rse, I was on day duty while my workmates were on night duty. On
one shift, I sensed something just before going off duty at 11 am
. I put down the tray(托盘） on the table and suddenly it fell off t
he table. At first I thought I had accidentally knocked it over,
but then I felt the whole building shaking and heard patients wer
e screaming. I realized that an earthquake was happening. I qui
ckly caught hold of a nearby patient, who was terribly frightened
and pushed her under a bed. And then, I got under another bed my
self. As soon as the earthquake stopped, I decided to try and g
et the patient safely outside. I carried her out and helped her d
own to the grassland, where several other people had gathered.4续写
原文Afraid that my other workmates were in danger, I went back insi
de the building again. When I met Lucy ,our ward sister(护士长），I fo
und her patient couldn''t walk. We made a seat for the patient by
linking our hands and arms, and carried her outside together. We
went back through the building to check no one was left behind in
our ward(病房）.Just then, we saw that a man doctor was calling for
volunteers to go down to other wards with him to help more peopl
e. So we went together. The doctor went ahead of us and found one
of the nurses partially covered with rubble（碎石），luckily still al
ive. Suddenly, the aftershock (余震）struck and the doctor ordered u
s to leave. The brave doctor intended to stay alone and risk his
own life to save the nurse.5段首句Paragraph 1 ：However, without any
hesitation, we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save
the nurse together.Paragraph 2：Later in the afternoon, I had tim
e to look around and saw some destroyed buildings.6Part 2题目分析7点1：
位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，
续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文是以人物为线索，讲述一名
护士在值班时碰到了地震，就想方设法把尽可能多的人救出病房和医院大楼。9续写思路分析Para 1：However, without
any hesitation, we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and
save the nurse together. 由第一段首句内容“然而，没有犹豫，我们决定和那位医生一起就那位护士。”可知，第一
段可描述作者、护士长和医生一起救那位护士的过程。10续写思路分析Para 2：Later in the afternoon, I
I had time to look around and saw the some destroyed buildings.由第
二段首句内容“下午晚点的时候，我有时间看看周围，发现了一些被毁了的建筑。”可知，第二段可描述作者在地震之后的所见所想。11续写思路
分析续写线索和护士长留下——医生鼓励被困护士——挪开砖头瓦砾——救出被困护士——感慨劫后余生——期待震后重建12续写素材可用词汇：
行为类①集中在…上：focused on/fix on②面对：were faced with/face③继续：continued
/keep on情绪类①保持镇定：stay calm/keep calm②感觉有压力：felt a weight in my ch
est/feel stressed13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]The doctor encouraged the trap
ped nurse to stay calm, and in the meanwhile ,we focused our effo
rts on removing the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body.（
由that引导的定语从句） [高分句型2]However, sometimes we were faced with fallin
g rubble from time to time, despite which we continued.（由which引导的
定语从句）[高分句型3]I held the firm belief that some day in the future my
workplace would came back to life and took on a new look, where
we would continue working together to save more patients. （由that引
导的同位语从句和where引导的定语从句）14Part 3范文呈现15范文呈现However, without any hesit
ation, we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save the
nurse together. The doctor encouraged the trapped nurse to stay c
alm, and in the meanwhile ,we focused our efforts on removing the
bricks and the rubble that trapped her body. However, sometimes
we were faced with falling rubble from time to time, despite whic
h we continued. Gradually and slowly, we lifted the nurse out of
the rubble. The doctor put the nurse on his back and walked out o
f the building with the help of us. Finally, all, including patie
nts, nurses and doctors, were in the safe place.16范文呈现Later in th
e afternoon, I I had time to look around and saw the some destroy
ed buildings. My beautiful workplace lay beyond recognition, even
some in ruins. At the sight of this, I felt a weight in my chest
. Suddenly, the gentle wind danced around me, which made me thoug
ht of all the people surviving the earthquake with our help. It w
as our teamwork that made a difference. I held the firm belief th
at some day in the future my workplace would came back to life an
d took on a new look, where we would continue working together to
save more patients.17范文译文然而，我们毫不犹豫地下定决心要和医生在一起，一起救护士。医生鼓励被困护士保持冷
静，与此同时，我们集中精力清除困住她的砖块和瓦砾。然而，有时我们不时会遇到瓦砾，尽管如此，我们仍在继续。慢慢地，我们把护士从废墟中
抬了出来。医生把护士放在背上，在我们的帮助下走出了大楼。最后，包括病人、护士和医生在内的所有人都在安全的地方。18范文译文下午晚些时候，我有时间环顾四周，看到了一些被毁的建筑。我美丽的工作场所面目全非，有些甚至成了废墟。一看到这一幕，我就感到胸口有一块重物。突然，轻柔的风在我周围飞舞，这让我想起了在我们的帮助下在地震中幸存的所有人。是我们的团队合作带来了不同。我坚信，在未来的某一天，我的工作场所会复活，并呈现出新的面貌，我们将继续合作，拯救更多的患者。19Part 4努力方向20高级结构无灵主语21定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）22Thank you! |
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