Unit 1 Life Choices单元话题满分范文必背一、建议信1 ．王明现在是高一学生。进入高中以来，他常常感到身体不舒服，易疲倦，为
此他很苦恼。作为朋友的 你针对其现象提了几点建议：每天早点睡觉；不要学习得太晚；多做运动；多吃健康的食物。你可以参考以下的提示词，
给王明写一封信。提示词： go to bed early；exercise more ；study too late注意：(1)请
写一篇 100 词左右的短文，收信人和写信人的名字已给出，不计入词数；(2)信中不能出现真实的学校、班级和姓名；(3)句子及语法结
构准确、连贯，书写规范。Dear Wang Ming,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Wang Ming,I’m sor
ry to hear that you haven’t been feeling well lately. As your fri
end, I care about you very much.People need to adjust their state
to adapt to the changing environment. So I have a few suggestion
s for you.First of all, go to bed early every day and don’t study
too late. As a student, you need 6-8 hours of sleep every day to
ensure that you are energetic the next day, and abundant energy
in turn promotes learning efficiency. Secondly,you can do more ex
ercise. Exercise can strengthen your body and delight your mind.
In this way, you won’t gettired easily after a day’s school life.
Finally, it is also good to eat more healthy foods, including gr
een vegetables,fresh fruits, and protein foods such as meat, eggs
and milk.I hope my advice is helpful to you. Look forward to rec
eiving your good news soon.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友写封建
议信。针对于朋友最近的苦恼，提出建议：每天早点睡觉；不要学习得太晚；多做运动；多吃健康的食物。【详解】 1.词汇积累关心： car
e about→be concerned about适应： adapt to→acclimatize oneself to/ be
accustomed to建议： suggestion→advice/proposal保证： ensure→make sure有
用的： helpful→useful/beneficial/valuable2.句式拓展合并简单句原句： Secondly, yo
u can do more exercise. Exercise can strengthen your body and del
ight your mind.拓展句： Secondly, you can do more exercise, which can
strengthen your body and delight your mind.【点睛】【高分句型 1】As a stud
ent, you need 6-8 hours of sleep every day to ensure that you are
energetic thenext day, and abundant energy in turn promotes lear
ning efficiency. （运用了 that 引导宾语从句）【高分句型 2】Finally, it is also goo
d to eat more healthy foods, including green vegetables, fresh fr
uits, andprotein foods such as meat, eggs and milk. （运用了 it 作形式主语
，动词不定式做真正宾语）2 ．假设你叫李华，现是某中学的一名高一学生。你的美国笔友 Jack 来信谈及汉语学习的困难，并请你提出一
些汉语学习的建议。请你根据以下提示，给 Jack 写一封回信。提示： 1.学习汉语一定要有兴趣，不怕困难；2.不要怕犯错误，多听，
多读，多练；3.创造和利用学习汉语的机会，如：结交中国朋友等；4.其他建议……注意： 1.词数 80 左右；2.可适当增加细节，以
使行文连贯；3.信的开头已经写好，但不计入总词数。Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your lette
r asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well._Yours,Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advic
e on how to learn Chinese well. My advice is as follows:Firstly,
develop your interest in learning Chinese if you want to be good
at it. Difficult as Chinese may seem, you are sure to make progre
ss if you put your heart into learning it. Secondly, it is natura
l to make mistakes whenlearning a new language, so don’t worry ab
out mistakes. More listening and reading will be of great help in
learning Chinese. Only practice can make perfect. Thirdly, you sh
ould try to get yourself into a Chineseenvironment and seize ever
y opportunity to learn and practice your Chinese. For example, tr
y to make friendswith Chinese and communicate with them in Chines
e; or you may attend Chinese training classes in your place. Iam
sure your Chinese will improve soon.Good luck to you!Yours,Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。美国笔友 Jack 来信谈及汉语学习的困难， 要求考生回信提出一些汉语学习的建议。【详解】 1.
词汇积累建议： advice → proposal/suggestion虽然： as → though正常的： natural →
normal机会： opportunity → chance2.句式拓展同义句转换原句： Difficult as Chines
e may seem, you are sure to make progress if you put your heart i
nto learning it.拓展句： Although Chinese may seem difficult, you are
sure to make progress as long as you put your heart intolearning
it.【点睛】[高分句型 1] Firstly, develop your interest in learning Chine
se if you want to be good at it. (运用了 if 引导条件状语从句)[高分句型 2] I am s
ure your Chinese will improve soon. (运用了省略 that 的宾语从句)3 ．假定你是李华，
你的英国朋友 Peter 刚到广州学习， 他来信说， 很难适应在广州的学习和生活， 十分沮丧，请你给他回信表示安慰并提出建议，内容
包括：1 ．表示安慰；2 ．针对问题提出建议；3 ．表达希望。注意：1 ．词数 80 左右；2 ．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3 ．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Peter,Learning that you are feeling it ha
rd to adapt to the study and life in Guangzhou, I’m writing to of
fer yousome suggestions.Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Peter,Learning that
you are feeling it hard to adapt to the study and life in Guangz
hou ，I’m writing to offer you some suggestions.In fact, it’s norm
al for a new comer to feel uncomfortable in a new environment. Do
n’t worry. Firstly, try tojoin your classmates in various activit
ies, which can help you further understand the local culture and
customs.Besides, listen to your teacher’s lectures carefully and
often discuss the relevant topic with your classmates. Lastbut no
t least, smile to the people around you and they may return you a
happy day.I hope my advice will be helpful for you.Yours,Li Hua【
导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 刚到广州学习，他来信说，很难适应在广州的学习和生活，十分沮丧
，请你给他回信表示安慰并提出建议，内容包括： 1.表示安慰； 2.针对问题提出建议； 3.表达希望。【详解】 1.词汇积累各种各样
的： various→a variety of有关的： relevant→concerned建议： advice→suggesti
on此外： Besides=In addition2.句式拓展合并简单句原句： In fact, it’s normal for
a new comer to feel uncomfortable in a new environment. Don’t wor
ry.拓展句： Don’t worry, because it’s normal for a new comer to feel
uncomfortable in a new environment.【点睛】[高分句型 1] Firstly, try to j
oin your classmates in various activities, which can help you fur
therunderstand the local culture and customs.(运用了 which 引导的非限制性定语
从句)[高分句型 2] I hope my advice will be helpful for you.(运用了省略连接词的宾语
从句)4 ．假如你是你们班的班长，你发现大多数同学学习非常努力在课间十分钟除了上厕所以外，很少活动。因此，你打算给同学们提出一些建
议。内容包括：1.课间的目的是让大家身心放松；2.就如何度过课间十分钟提出一些建议。请你根据以上提示，写一篇发言稿。课间十分钟休息
： ten-minute break注意：词数 80 左右。【答案】Dear classmates,I notice that m
ost of us spend the ten-minute break reading books or working on
problems. I don’t think it iswise to do so. Here are my opinions
on how to spend the ten-minute break.Personally, the ten-minute b
reak is designed for us to relax our brains and stretch our muscl
es so that we cankeep our attention focused on our lessons during
the next period. So it is a good idea to stand up and move aroun
din the classroom. And we can also look out of the windows to let
our eyes have a rest, which is helpful for us torelax our eyes .
Besides, having a small talk with others can also make us relaxe
d.In conclusion, the ten-minute break is very important because i
t can make us refreshed.That’s all. Thank you.【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇发言稿。要求
考生以你班班长的身份， 针对你发现大多数同学学习非常努力在课间十分钟除了上厕所以外，很少活动的现象，提出几点建议。【详解】 1.词
汇积累注意到： notice→ catch sight of休息时间： break→ interval保持： keep→ main
tain有益的： be helpful→ be beneficial2.句式拓展同义句原句： I notice that most
of us spend the ten-minute break reading books or working on pro
blems.拓展句： It is a common phenomenon that most of us spend the te
n-minute break reading books or working onproblems.【点睛】【高分句型 1】Pe
rsonally, the ten-minute break is designed for us to relax our br
ains and stretch our muscles so that we can keep our attention fo
cused on our lessons during the next period.（so that 引导的目的状语从句）【高
分句型 2】Besides, having a small talk with others can also make us r
elaxed. （动名词短语做主语）5 ．假设你是李华，你班交换生 John 发来邮件说他想在抖音(TikTok)上注册一个号并分
享自己的学校生活，他想听听你的意见。请你给他回复，内容包括：1. 你的观点；2. 说明理由；3. 提出注意事项。注意： 1.
写作词数为 80 词左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear John,______________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear John,I’m glad to
receive your email. Knowing that you want to share your school li
fe on TikTok, I’m all in favorof it.As far as I am concerned, it
is a good way to communicate with other people as TikTok is growi
ng inpopularity in China. In addition, it will also bring you gre
at pleasure. However, I still have some suggestions for you. Firs
t of all, pay much attention to your privacy when you use TikTok.
In addition, you’d better manage yourtime reasonably, in case Ti
kTok affects your study.I hope my response will be helpful to you
.Yours sincerely,Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文， 假设你是李华， 你班交换生 John 发来邮件说
他想在抖音(TikTok)上注 册一个号并分享自己的学校生活，他想听听你的意见。请你给他回复，内容包括： 1. 你的观点； 2.
说明理由； 3. 提出注意事项。【详解】 1.词汇积累高兴的： glad→pleased建议： suggestion→advic
e此外： In addition→Besides就我而言： As far as I am concerned =Personall
y speaking2.句式拓展合并简单句原句： In addition, it will also bring you grea
t pleasure. However, I still have some suggestions for you.拓展句： I
n addition, it will also bring you great pleasure, but I still ha
ve some suggestions for you.【点睛】[高分句型 1] Knowing that you want to
share your school life on TikTok, I’m all in favor of it. (运用了现在
分词作状语及 that 引导的宾语从句)[高分句型 2] First of all, pay much attention to
your privacy when you use TikTok. (运用了 when 引导的时间状语从句)6 ．假定你是李华，最
近收到了你的美国笔友 Mike 的来信。他在信中说他一直没能适应高中的学习生活，希望你能结合你自身的经验给他一些建议。请你给他写一
封回信。注意：1.至少写出三条建议；2.词数 100 词左右。Dear Mike,I’m delighted to receive
your letter.______Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mike,I’m delighted to rec
eive your letter. I don’t think it unusual for you to have such w
orries. The same thingshappened to me. Here is how I have got mys
elf on an easy way to the new school life.Firstly, make every day
a regular day. I make it a rule when to bed, when to rise, and w
hen to exercise. Whilein class, I listen attentively and take dow
n where I can’t understand. After class, I turn to the teacher wi
th it untilI’ve got it. A regular day has made a regular me. Seco
ndly, make every day a full day. Apart from attendance atlessons
required for graduation, I join as many clubs as I can, such as d
rama club and music club, which allow mechances to release myself
from a day of stressful study. A full day brings me a full enjoy
ment. Thirdly, makeevery day a meaningful day. I am a member of t
he volunteer club. After school, my fellows and I offer help toth
ose in need. A meaningful day teaches me what a meaningful life i
s.If my experience helps, that will be a pleasure for me.Yours,Li
Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友 Mike 写一封回信，结合自身的经验给他一些关于如何适应高中的学习生
活的建议。【详解】 1.词汇积累高兴的： delighted→pleased担心： worry→concern写下： take d
own→write down向某人求助： turn to sb→ask sb for help2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： A
fter school, my fellows and I offer help to those in need.拓展句： Af
ter school, my fellows and I offer help to those who are in need.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Here is how I have got myself on an easy way to the n
ew school life. （运用了 how 引导的表语从句）【高分句型 2】Apart from attendance at
lessons required for graduation, I join as many clubs as I can,
such as drama club and music club, which allow me chances to rele
ase myself from a day of stressful study. （运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句）【
高分句型 3】A meaningful day teaches me what a meaningful life is. （运用
了 what 引导的宾语从句）7 ．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他最近沉迷于使用电子设备
，想做出改变但不知该怎么办，特来信向你寻求建议。请给他回邮件，内容包括：1.表示理解;2.提供合理使用电子设备的建议;3.祝愿他生
活重回正轨。注意： 1.词数 100 左右。2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：电子设备 digital devices
Dear Jim,______Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,I’m sorry to learn that y
ou have been obsessed with using your digital devices lately. It’
s surely natural foryou to find the virtual world appealing. And
don’t worry! I will fully support you in dealing with it.First of
all, start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to mus
ic, or playing chess, etc., which willtake your mind off your dig
ital devices. Secondly, make more friends. Friends will help you
when you can’t resistthe temptation of your digital devices. Thir
dly, do more sports. Sports can not only keep you healthy, but al
soenrich your life and help you forget your digital devices.I hop
e it will all work out. Cheer up! Let me know if I can help furth
er.Yours,Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友 Jim 最近沉迷于使用电子设备提出合理使用电子
设备的建议。【详解】 1.词汇积累痴迷于： be obsessed with→be addicted to有吸引力的： appea
ling→attractive其次： Secondly→What’s more抵制： resist→oppose2.句式拓展简单句
变复合句原句： And don’t worry! I will fully support you in dealing with
it.拓展句： I want you to know that I will provide my full support t
o you as you deal with it, so please don’t worry! 【点睛】【高分句型 1】I’m
sorry to learn that you have been obsessed with using your digit
al devices lately.(that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型 2】First of all, start some o
ther hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, or playing che
ss, etc.,which will take your mind off your digital devices. (whi
ch 引导的非限制性定语从句)二、其他应用文8．假定你是某国际学校高一学生李华， 你的美籍同学 Alice 在课堂上看起来非常沮丧
， 放学后， 她匆忙离开教室。请你写封信表达关心。内容包括：1. 描述你注意到的身体语言；2. 询问情况并表达关心；3. 表
示愿意提供帮助。提示： 1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Alic
e,I noticed this morning that you seemed
very upset.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】One possible vers
ion:Dear Alice,I noticed this morning that you seemed very upset.
When you came into the classroom, you just keep yourface down an
d wouldn’t speak. It looked as if you had been crying.Is there an
ything wrong? I heard that your mum has been ill and that you are
very tired from doing all thehousework. Is that true?I really wo
uld like to help you if I can. Can I come to help you with your h
ousework? Please let me help you.We are good friends.Yours sincer
ely,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考写信对同学 Alice 表达关心，需包括对同学身体语言的描述，询问同
学具体情况并表达关心，表示想提供帮助的意愿。【详解】 1. 词汇积累生病的： ill→sick,/unwell哭泣： cry→we
ep真地： really→genuinely帮助： help→assit/aid/do sb. a favor2. 句式拓展合并简
单句原句： Please let me help you. We are good friends.拓展句： Please let
me help you because we are good friends.【点睛】【高分句型 1】When you cam
e into the classroom, you just keep your face down and wouldn’t s
peak.（运用了 when 引导的时间状语从句）【高分句型 2】It looked as if you had been cry
ing. （运用了 as if 引导的方式状语从句）【高分句型 3】I heard that your mum has been
ill and that you are very tired from doing all the housework. （运用
了 that 引导名词性从句作 heard 的宾语）9 ．假设你叫李华， 请根据所提示的信息， 给你同样也上高一的美国笔友 Cha
rles 写一封电子邮件， 向他介绍你高中生活第一天的所见所闻及感受：1 ．新学校比原来的学校大两倍；2 ．每个教室都配有电脑和白
板(whiteboard)；3 ．老师都很热情，同学们也都很友好；4 ．对高中生活充满了信心。要求：词数 100 左右；可根据内容
要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】【参考范文】Dear Charles,I am writing to tell you s
omething about my first day at Senior High school. My new school
is twice largerthan my previous one. The classrooms have installe
d computers and whiteboards. Our new teachers areenthusiastic and
the new classmates are friendly. I have made several friends now
. Our teachers taught us somelearning methods. I am sure I can ma
ke progress in this school.Looking forward to knowing something a
bout your new school life.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你叫李华， 请根据
所提示的信息， 给你同样也上高一的美国笔友Charles 写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你高中生活第一天的所见所闻及感受。【详解】 1.
词汇积累告诉： tell→inform方法： methods→means确信的： be sure→be convinced友好的：
friendly→kind2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： Our new teachers are enthusiastic
and the new classmates are friendly. I have made several friends
now.拓展句： Since our new teachers are enthusiastic and the new clas
smates are friendly, I have made several friendsnow.【点睛】[高分句型 1]
Looking forward to knowing something about your new school life.
(运用了动名词作宾语)[高分句型 2] I am sure I can make progress in this school.
(运用了省略 that 的宾语从句)10 ．假定你是李华，收到朋友 David 的来信。信中 David 向你诉说了自己的困扰：
近日考试没考好。请用英文给该朋友写一封回信。内容要点如下：1. 表示理解并给予安慰；2. 提出建议并说明理由。注意：1. 词数
80 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear David,I’m sorry to know that you d
idn’t do well in the exam recently.___Yours,Li Hua【答案】参考范文Dear Da
vid,I’m sorry to know that you didn’t do well in the exam recentl
y. I truly understand you and you don’t have tobe so worried about it. Here are three useful tips to help you deal with your problem.First of all, you can turn to your teachers, your classmates or parents, who can give you some useful suggestions. Second, you need do more practice to better understand the knowledge. Last but not least, beconfident about yourself because everything will come out all right in the end.I sincerely hope my suggestions will be of help to you, and you can make it in the next examination.Yours,Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给没有考好的朋友 David 写一封回信，向 David 表示安慰并提些建议。【详解】 1.词汇积累为……担心： be worried about→be concerned about处理： deal with→cope with真诚地： sincerely→genuinely成功： make it→succeed2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： Here are three useful tips to help you deal with your problem.拓展句： Here are three useful tips that may help you deal with your problem.【点睛】【高分句型 1】First of all, you can turn to your teachers, your classmates or parents, who can give yousome useful suggestions. （运用了 who 引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型 2】Last but not least, be confident about yourself because everything will come out all right in the end.（运用了祈使句和 because 引导的原因状语从句） |
|
