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最新高考英语写作专题辅导课件-基础写作[论证观点]
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Socialsciencewillnotdevelop4_______thenewdiscoveriesofnatur
alscienceabouttheworld.5_________,naturalsciencewillst
optoadvancewithoutthephilosophyprovidedbysocialscience.
Thiskindofrelationshiphasbecomeevencloserinmodernsociet
y.Agreatnumberofnewinventionscomeintoexistence6______
_______thetwosciences.onthebasisofwithoutSimilarly7
_________,ascollegestudents,weneedtobroadenourknowledge.
Weoughttolearnasmuchknowledgeofthetwosciencesaspossi
ble8______wemaybeofgreathelpintheconstructionofourc
ountry.sothatTherefore3.翻译句子(1)许多家长相信通过额外的教育活动,他们的孩子可以获
得很多实践技能和有用的知识,当他们长大后.这些对他们就业是大有好处的。Manyparentsholdtheopin
ionthatthroughadditionaleducationalactivitiestheirchildren
areabletoobtainmanykindsofpracticalskillsandusefulkno
wledge,whichwillputtheminabeneficialpositioninthefutur
ejobmarketswhentheygrowup.(2)许多专家指出体育锻炼有助于身体健康。(2)Many
expertspointoutthatphysicalexerciseisofgreatbenefittoa
person’shealth./Manyexpertspointoutthatphysicalexercise
contributestoaperson’sphysicalfitness.(3)大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多
机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。(3)Themajorityofstudentsbelie
vethatpart-timejobwillprovidethemwithmoreopportunitiest
odeveloptheirinter-personalskills,whichmayputtheminafa
vorablepositioninthefuturejobmarkets/whichmaybeofgreat
helpforthemtofindajobinthefuture.(4)考虑到这严重的状况,我们比以往任
何时候更需要像自行车这样的环保型交通工具。(4)Inviewofsuchaserioussituation,e
nvironmentaltoolsoftransportationlikebicyclesaremoreimpor
tantthananytimebefore./Havingconsideredthisserioussitua
tion,weneedsuchenvironmentally-friendlyvehiclesasbicycles
morethaneverbefore.(5)通过以上讨论,我们可以得出如下结论:尽管家长想亲自照看孩子的愿望是可以理解
的,但是这样做的缺点远大于优点。Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysa
felydrawaconclusionthat,althoughtheparents’desiretoloo
kafterchildrenbythemselvesisunderstandable,itsdisadvantag
esfaroutweightheadvantages.假设你的朋友John写信告诉你他打算开通网银进行网上购物,但你
并不赞成网上购物,于是给他写了一封信,陈述了网上购物的弊端。1.浪费钱(1)购买不需要的物品(2)商品
可能是伪劣产品2.不安全(1)个人资料容易泄密(2)银行帐号被盗用[写作内容]1.你对网上购物的看法
;2.你为何持有这种看法;3.建议理智的消费。[参考范文]Youarewritingtotellm
ethatyouaregoingtoopentheonlinebankserviceforshopping
onlinebutIdon’tthinkit’sagoodidea.Thereisnodoubttha
titisveryconvenientforustohaveonlineshoppingbutthedi
sadvantagesofitfaroutweightheadvantages.Firstofall,shop
pingonlineisawasteofmoneybecausebuyerstendtobepersuad
edintobuyingsomethingtheydon’treallyneed.Second,someo
ftheproductssoldonlineareprobablyfakeonesduetolackof
supervision.What’sworse,nowadaystherearealsomanyreportsr
elatedtoonlineshoppingthatpersonalinformationandevenbank
accountsarestolen.Therefore,Isuggestthatyouthinktwice
andremainrationalwhenyouareshoppingonline.[精华点评]根
据写作的内容,本文的结构应该是总~分~总,第一句总起说明作者的观点,而最后一句使用therefore总结作者的观点。范文开篇通过
thereisnodoubtthat的句型,采用了先抑后扬的写作手法,使观点更客观和鲜明。考生平时注意积累词汇,如
使用了tendtobepersuadedintodoingsth.表示消费者容易被误导消费,fake表示“伪劣的”。
最后,建议“理智消费”,很多考生可以用thinktwice和remainrational。在连贯性方面,本文使用了fi
rstofall,second,what’sworse等递进连词使文章的层次分明。[写作内容]1.阐述现代技术对于
学生的负面影响;2.呼吁学生重视传统的学习手段。1.容易使学生分神例子:开电脑查资料,最后变成看视频2.在大量的信息
中不知所措3.依赖网络4.失去创造力和独立思考能力假设你们班就“现代技术对学生的学习是否有好处”展开了讨论,你作为反方
代表进行发言。[参考范文]Marvelousasitlooksatfirstsight,modern
technologydoesnothelpstudentslearninformationatagreater
speedandwithhigherefficiencyinmostcases.Firstofall
,moderntechnologyisharmfultoalearningmindbecauseitdist
racts.Forinstance,astudentislikelytoturnonhiscomputer
tosearchforresources,butendupwatchingvideos.Also,stude
ntswouldeasilybecomedisorientedinthehugeseaofinformat
ion.Furthermore,manystudentsrelysomuchontheInternettha
ttheyhavelosttheirabilitytocreateandthinkindependently.
FromwhatIhavestatedabove,Icandrawaconclusionthatmode
rntechnologydoesnothelpstudentslearnmorequicklyorbetter
andstudentsshouldnotignorethetraditionalmeansoflearning
.[精华点评]这篇范文语言精炼,言简意赅。很多考生误以为英语写作要长篇大论,但有时却容易使文章显得累赘。范文使
用distract表示使学生分心,使用becomedisoriented表示使学生(在大量信息中)不知所措,这些用词都是比较地
道的,另外在举例说明时,范文用endupdoingsth的短语生动地说明了网上信息如何让学生分心。最后,考生不要忘记议论文的
逻辑性和连贯性,如本文用了firstofall,forinstance,but,also,furthermore,
fromwhatIhavestatedabove等连词提高文章的连贯性。林辉林辉林辉
林辉林辉林辉相关短语1.cometorealize开始意识到2.asimportant
as和……一样重要3.pushsb.todo使某人做某事4.focusmoreon更加关注5.spok
enlanguageskills口语技能/水平6.communicatewith和……交流7.therefore
因此8.moreattentionshouldbegivento应该更加关注9.insummary总之
10.bothnecessaryandbeneficial既有必要又有利11.inreturn反过来12.f
aroutweigh...远远比……重要13.firstofall首先14.shoppingonline网上
购物15.duetolackofsupervision由于缺乏监督16.what’sworse更糟糕的是1
7.bankaccount银行账户18.beharmfulto对……有害19.forinstance例如
20.searchfor寻找21.endupdoing以做……结束22.becomedisoriented
变得不知所措1.Moststudentsagreethatithelpsthemdevelopthehabi
tsofreadingaloud.很多学生认为它有助于培养朗读的习惯。2.Therefore,moreatten
tionshouldbegiventoteachingandlearningspokenEnglish.因此要更
加注意教学英语口语。相关句式3.Second,someoftheproductssoldonlinearep
robablyfakeonesduetolackofsupervision.其次,由于缺乏监督,有些网上出售的
产品很可能是假货。4.Thereisnodoubtthatitisveryconvenientforus
tohaveonlineshopping.毫无疑问,网上购物很方便。6.Manystudentsrelyso
muchontheInternetthattheyhavelosttheirabilitytocreate.
很多学生过度依赖互联网,以致于失去了创新能力。1.注意审题,避免缺漏信息点。一般而言,观点论证的文章通常都是总~分或总~
分~总的结构。2.考生在论证观点的时候要注意行文严密的逻辑性,因此考生要注意使用相关的连词、副词或者短语提升文章的层次感。
3.在语言运用方面,考生可以掌握一些常用于议论文写作的短语和句型,如comparedwith...,itiscl
ear/obviousthat...,FromwhatIhavementionedabovewecansee
that...等。你校进行题为“是否应该考查英语口语”的英语辩论赛。以下是正方的主要观点:略[写作内容]请你根据以上内
容写一篇短文,代表正方作最后的总结陈词。1.阐述考查英语口语对各方面的积极影响;2.呼吁各界重视英语口语教学。[写作
要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;首句已给出,不计入句子总数。[例题导写]1.认真审题。在本作文题的完成中,不少考
生都集中精力对图表内容进行描述,却忽略了写作内容里的第二个要点:呼吁各界重视英语口语教学。因此,考生在下笔前,要通读题目,不
能漏掉细节。2.分析文体。论证观点无疑属于议论文的范畴,着重于说理性和逻辑性。考生在写作前要对信息点进行分析,理清信息点之间
的关系是递进,转折还是因果关系。本文中,考查口语对学生、教师和社会三方面都是有利的,这就是递进关系,而最后呼吁各界重视英语口
语教学则与前面内容构成因果关系,因此考生可以选用适当的连词提高文章的逻辑性。3.划分信息。本题的信息点较多,考生在写作前
一定要先划分信息点,否则就会导致写作过程中漏掉信息点或者导致思维混乱。呼吁各界重视口语教学无疑可以作为最后一个信息点,而对学生
、教师、社会有利则要用四个句子概括。因此考生可以考虑2个句子表达口语考试对学生的有利因素,1个句子表达其对教师的好处,1个句
子表达其对社会的好处。4.词汇整理翻译或完成下列短语。句1:(1)养成……的习惯__________________
____(2)提高水平______________________improveone’sleveldevelop
/formthehabitof...(3)认识到______________________________(
4)同等重要____________________________________句3:(5)关注_______
_____________________________focuson/focusone’sattentionon/
concentrateoncometorealizethat/beawarethatbeasimportant
as/beofthesameimportanceas句2:(6)提高能力/技能________________
___(7)增加趣味性____________________________________句5(8)重
视____________________________________attachimportanceto/pay
attentiontodevelopone’sskillmake...moreinteresting/addinte
restto5.难句翻译翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。句1:(1)促使(学生)多阅读,多对话。(1)Ithelps
studentsdevelopthehabitsofreadingaloudandhavingconversa
tionsinEnglish.(2)提高(学生)英语水平。(2)ItimprovestheirEnglishl
evel.合并:MoststudentsagreethatitcanimprovetheirEnglis
hlevelbyhelpingthemdevelopthehabitsofreadingaloudandh
avingconversationsinEnglish.(by...表示手段)或Moststudentsagree
thatithelpsthemdevelopthehabitsofreadingaloudandhavin
gconversationsinEnglishsothattheycanimprovetheirEnglis
hlevel.(结果状语从句)或Moststudentsagreethatithelpsthemdevelop
thehabitsofreadingaloudandhavingconversationsinEnglish
whichinturnimprovestheirEnglishlevel.(定语从句)句3:(1)(口语测试使教师)
关注口语教学。(1)Thespeakingtestpushesourteacherstofocusmoreon
teachingspokenEnglish.(2)(口语测试使教师)提高自身口语水平。(2)Thespeakingte
stencouragesteacherstoimprovetheirownspokenlanguageskill
s.(3)(口语教学)提高课堂趣味性。(3)Englishteachingmakestheclassmoreint
eresting.合并:Thespeakingtestpushesourteacherstofocusmore
onteachingspokenEnglish,makestheclassmoreinterestingand
encouragesteacherstoimprovetheirownspokenlanguageskills.
4.连句成文(1)在某人看来:inone’sopinion/asfarassb.isconcerned/
fromwhereonestands/fromone’sperspective/inone’sviewpoi
nt(2)同意某个观点:agreewithsb./befortheopinionthat/firmlysup
porttheviewthat(3)首先:aboveall/firstofall/tostartwith/t
obeginwith/inthefirstplace/inthefirstinstance(4)表示“递进”
的词汇:What’smore/inaddition/besides/moreover/furthermore/addit
ionally/Foronething,foranother...(一方面……,另一方面……)(5)因此:asa
result/thus/hence/so/therefore/accordingly/consequently
/asconsequence(6)表示“总结”的词汇:onthewhole/inconclusion/ina
word/tosumup/inbrief/insummary/toconclude/tosummarize/in
short[参考范文]Ladiesandgentlemen,insummaryourteamhasar
guedthatthetestingofspokenEnglishisbothnecessaryandben
eficial.Moststudentsagreethatithelpsthemdevelopthehabit
sofreadingaloudandhavingconversationsinEnglishwhichinr
eturnimprovestheirEnglishlevel.Studentscometorealizetha
toralEnglishisasimportantasreadingandwriting.Inadditi
on,thespeakingtestpushesourteacherstofocusmoreonteachi
ngspokenEnglish,makestheclassmoreinterestingandencourage
steacherstoimprovetheirownspokenlanguageskills.Nowadays
,Englishisconsideredtobeagloballanguagesowecanuseit
tocommunicatewithpeoplefromothercountriesmoreeasily.The
refore,webelievethatmoreattentionshouldbegiventoteachin
gandlearningspokenEnglishandthiscanbedonebytestingspo
kenEnglish.[能力提高]1.短语翻译(1)众所周知:(2)基于;根据:(3)以致:(4)有助于
:contributetoasisknowntoallonthebasisofsothat(5)考
虑到这严重的状况:inviewofsuchserioussituation/havingconsideredth
isserioussituation(6)以往任何时候:thaneverbefore(7)通过以上讨论:fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove(8)得出一个结论:drawaconclusion(9)远比……重要:faroutweigh...(10)把……置于一个有利的位置:put...inabeneficialpositiononthebasisof,dueto,sothat,without,Asisknowntoall,Similarly,leadsto,Therefore2.作文填空1________________,alltheachievementsofmankindare2______thedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology.Socialscienceandnaturalscienceareinseparablefromeachother,althoughtheformer3_______thespiritualdevelopmentofhumanbeingsandthelatterisconcernedwiththeunderstandingoftheworldandthemakingofthings.leadstoAsisknowntoalldueto林辉林辉林辉林辉林辉林辉
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